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This is a poem about loving someone so much, but not having the feelings returned.
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danielle
Cool poems. love it
Monica
Yes, this really relates to me. I hate feeling like this. I kinda feel like I'll never win.
rhiannon
i love this peom because it show that girls love forever even if the guy is fliting infront of you this is how i feel somethings thankyou very much i love your work keep going :-) rhiannon XXXXXX
elizabeth
this was a good poem and it eould be alot better if it was done by my friend who also has the same name as Amber smith
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Love Maze |
| by Amber Smith |
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As I walked down the crowded halls, I saw him standing there. He was flirting with his girlfriend, Her hands massaging his hair. I can just hear the conversation now: "Are ya gonna be at the game?" he asks. "I wouldn't miss it for the world, I'll be sitting with Brittany on the grass." I take one last glance, And then turn my head away. My heart can't take this carnival ride, For my emotions tend to stray. If you haven't caught on yet, Let me fill you in: The guy I long for is taken, And I'm left in the garbage bin. I see him every day in school, And he should be able to notice me. But somehow out of his busy schedule, He finds the time not to open his eyes and see. He did once talk to me, He tapped me on the back. But his eyes filled with questioning, Asked for the class movie, if I had a snack. Does he do this on purpose? Or is he just to blind to see? My head says I should forget him, My heart says he belongs to me. Now maybe I'm just being normal, Or I'm just in a mindless daze. I feel like a naive little mouse, Trying to find its way through a complicated maze. What is this and where does it come from? Does it come from above? The only explanation that comes to my mind is, It's that exotic thing called love. |
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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
anonymous
mean i know what u meen w/this p0em i h@v0 g0n3 thr0ugh th@t and it hurts b@d!
Alyssa
This poem relates to what I'm going through right now so it really hit's home with how you feel.
Madly
hey i just wanted to say that this is a really good poem and that you should be really proud. because actually im going through the same kidna thing. but the guy that i like doesnt have a girlfriend. hes just to damn blind to see that i love him so much :(
Courtney
Omg i can totally relate. I absolutly love this poem. I can tell you put alot of effort in this poem. I love it love it love it. I wish lthis one guy noticed me .
Jessica
This poem is so true except in my way the guy is taken but he always talks to me but he is taken thanks 4 writing this poem it really did touch me
crystal
I;M DIGGIN YOUR POEM U GOT THE GOODS GIRL
Santana
I like this Poem it reminds it of me. I have feelings for this boy but i dont know how to tell him. I told him once before but when i seen him in the halls it seems like he doesnt see me.
samantha
this is the perfect poem for me and the guy i want to go out with but life is telling me i need to get over him and move on but it is just to hard so this is the best poem!
roxy
this was such an awesome poem! and it describes exactly how i feel rite now. im srry for u if had to feel it cuz i know it feels awful. ust keep going. and luck. kisses roxy*
Raquel
oh my gosh. the poem is very nce! a tear fell from my eyes when i've read it. huhuhu. but its love is give and recieve. its hard that ur lovng so much but u couldn't get any. trust me ive been there.
shawn
OMG! now this has happened to me one time so i rate this a 10 if u ask me, and it's totallie true, im feeling this keep up the great work.
Tiffany
IT is really good. I liked it very much.
brooke
Hey big cuz was up ur poem was very uniqe and u have talentkeep up the good work. P. S of course u have talent we in the same family hugs and kisses oh hey latoya i miss u!
jose luis
this poem is reaaly nice it really explains love feelings whoever wrote this keep up the good work
skb
I can really relate 2 ure poem. i went through a similar situation
andria
it sucks when the one you want to be with doesn't know you exist and is with someone who could never care 4 them as much as you do. like your invisible
Arianna
Girl, you was in love but allways rember this there more fish and the sea and you can go fishing any day if your really hungery I've been in the same place but he's a heater get a new man get him and kiss him in front him I beat he will get jelous. Love , Arianna Sherlice Lee
devil's angel
i love this poem so much. i've been there and it really sucks but u wrote about it really well. keep writing
Shay
She really said what was on her mind and what she really felt. She made me visualizeand see what she sees every day. This made me think.
phylicia
i really like this poem because i can relate to it
Laura
i enjoyed reading this poem. I can relate to it so well. you are a very talented srtist.
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