I look to my fingers to write out some wisdom,
I look up above to try and read the Kingdom,
I look all around, in and out, even crawl through to see,
But all I can find is there are no answers for me.
Hesitant at first to admit my feelings inside,
But as time went on, I could no longer hide.
I fell, and fell hard, and had not one regret,
When my heart found love, my mind was set.
You, you were wonderful, too good to be true,
That saying is valid, for I no longer have you.
You came and went, leaving me alone
And now I'm recovering in the place from which I was thrown.
I know more now than when first I came,
What I know now is my feelings are not the same.
So mixed up and jumbled; never making sense
The only thing clear is life is no white picket fence.
I miss falling into you, knowing that you're there,
But now I know that's with somebody else you share.
I won't ask questions because silence will follow,
But I just want to know how much longer my heart will be hollow.
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i think is a very nice poem it makes me think about a similar situation that i"m going through
john
that was a great poem I really like that I feel about a girl.
Felicia
This poem reminded me of my first love and things that went on I thank you for a wonderful poem you have written.
Elliot
I can REALLY relate to this poem (Although I'm a guy)! I loved it and would vote more than once for it if I could!
geraldine
this was up
punkmunkey
i love this poem keep writting and dont give up, i love this poem because i'd just went through a relationship just like that. And i broke up with him because he didnt like my silence and i didnt like the way he kepted getting an attitude with me so, i broke up with him and now hes beggin like a baby.
Jackie
GOOD!
CHIQUITA
this poem made me cry in the middle of a study session at the boarding school i go to and everyone is staring at me. it is the best poem i've ever read, i write poems but not as good as that. it made me cry because today my boyfiend called and told me he couldnt handle me being here so he was dumping me and now he is going out with a new chick. but any way good poem keep up the great work!
Poochie
Thats was one of the best poems. i just went thrue a bakeup which was also a long distance relationship and he is now talking to his X-girlfriend again. and this poem really fit the peace for how i feel. i LOVED IT!
kayla
i loved the poem it was heart warning it was sad oh but so true, all i can say is i feel you
Jessica
This was amazing. I connected to it also. Good Job
michaela
I've been in love before and gotten hurt, its not good at all. this poem explains exactly how true love is. sometimes it doesnt make sense or have any answers. just make the best out of what you've got:)
ashley
i don't know why but i just liked it. it was so sad and it made me want to almost cry.
kali
im crying, that poem is so true. um. i dunno what to say but good. it tells me how i feel.
Rachel
I had a boyfriend that was long distance rlationship and he broke up with me cuz of the same reason so i know exactly how you feel.
Kaitlyn
I think this poem is exactly how i felt when my ex and me broke up hollow and broken is what my heart felt.
stacy
this was very touching it made a tear in my eye. it makes my wonder hwo it is that you came to these feelings because i can almost feel the same jsut by reading it. great use of words. i say a 8. 5 out of 10
Marissa
This is by far 1 of the best poems that Ive ever had the joy of reading. Thanks 2 whoever wrote it.
Sharae
WOW! this poem expressed alot of what i wa jus going through not too long ago. There is still pain, but I take day by day. Just from reading your poem it had helped some more. THNX
red
I know how u feel. My heart is hallow after saying good bye to the one i love and it will hurt for a long time. and u showed me just to move down the path of happiness. thank u tons red
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