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This poem is about a girl that I had wanted to go out all of my freshman year and most of my sophomore year. She shared the same feelings too. Then when we got the chance, finally, to go out, she said no.

Our Time

by Dan Losee

I knew it was you
when I first laid eyes.
I wanted you so bad
but I thought you were way out of my league.

Throughout the year
we had hurtful confrontations.
We kept waiting and waiting
but it never did happen.

We each had our times
with somebody else.
Some were short
Some were long.

But either way
we never got our chance.

We grew apart over time
but still had our memories to fall back on.
Though we hid them deep inside
we both still knew they were there.

Now our chance has come.
Now our time is here.
Now we can be.

But only if you let us.

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shavelle

i really like this poem. i write poems and it just remembers me of some of the stuff i write.

Riffy

omg i never thought someone could say what i really feel about someone for me. Me and this guy have been like tyhis since last year i love him so much he has even asked me out but it is me that is holding back not him. oh well i love you person how wrote this poem, you did a great job!

c2739 lover

Love ur poem i'm goin' through somethin' like that w/ some1 i really want to me with. great job!

aimee

Hey , this poem is gr8! Im a girl but i feel the same with a boy, no matter how much we love each other we never gt it togther, now were close again but hell always b confused' the last line sums it up. if only he'd let us in my case x

alexander

nice job! i love it it really tells your feelings. it's sad it never happened, you and her, but i hope it dose cuz no guy should feel like that. also i agree with rendell we do need more guys like this but you guys can count one more. me :)

brittney

this poems really touched me in many ways. i had a guy that i liked and i told him about it and he never got back to me but acted like he was in to me

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Poems for the People - Poems by the People

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Our Time

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