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This poem is about liking an older guy. The fact that he has considered my feelings for him and now actually returns some of them. We have started to work on building a relationship based of friendship and just have to wait and see where it heads. This poem just expresses my feelings up until this point.

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Krissy
Yea i did like your poem and all because i have this friend who seeing a n older guy and she really likes him to.
Cailey
I really love this poem cause it reminds me of me right now. I have a boyfriend that is 16 and I'm 13 turning 14 in the summer. He really doesn't care about my age he just cares about me in general.
carla
omg i love this poem!11
Damaris
I really enjoy this peom it say everything that i feel about this older guy im talkin to. i hope their are more to come.

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Because Of You

Iíve been in darkness for so long just waiting for the light,
And now that you have come my way, my days donít seem like nights.

Iím glad Iím finally overcome my fear of the other side,
Thank you for showing me the way, by taking me on this ride.

Iíve never really felt this way about a guy before,
Youíve truly touched me deep inside, youíve opened, unlocked, the door.

I know itís nothing serious, but surly itís a start,
Youíve treated me so equally, I feel it in my heart.

And even if this does not work, Iím glad Iíve had this chance,
To see how great you truly are, even just for a glance.

We never know whatíll come of this, it really just depends,
Iím glad weíre taking the first step, weíre becoming better friends.

With you I never have to guess just how you really feel,
You talk to me about the facts and tell me whatís the deal.

With you I feel so comfortable, like nothing can go wrong,
I get this tingly feeling inside, you sing to me like a song.

The fact that you are older, really did freak me out,
But you treat me like Iím your age, now Iím rid of all my doubts.

Iím trying to live in the moment, by forgetting about the past,
And so far itís been working, and itís really been a blast.

So hopefully from this day forth, Iíll know just what to do,
If ever I come across a guy, another guy like you.

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

mel
this poem hit close to home coz i also like an older guy!
lisa
this poem is really beautiful you can write really good poems.
ashley
I can relate to this poem in many ways. At one point I was dating an older guy, and this poem explains exactly how I felt. He said we would get back together and I hope he was telling the truth, because he was the first person I have ever loved.
Kirstie
This poem really touched me, because it seemed as if the author was reading my thoughts and living my life, because I can relate to the poem so much. It is very well written and has great emotion.
Zambria
I think this poem is beautiful. This is exactly how I feel. I feel for an older guy but he makes me feel like I am his age.
OLIVIA
THE REASON WHY I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT REALLY SHOW HOW SOMEONE FEEL ABOUT THEIR BOYFRIEND AND THE REALLY SUPRISE
Megan
This poem is incredible! I have recently gotten with an older guy and I could never find the words to tell him how I felt about him and he couldn't understand why. but I found the perfect words to say in your poem. You are an insperation to all of us girls with older bfs or working our way up to the older bf. -I think this is one of my most favorite poems out there! lol thank you for the priveldge. *~*~Megan*~*~
Justin
it is a inspiration for teens to love
Amanda
this poem was like the best really cause well lets say i just went through this problem and i read this poem and it said it all that i was feeling! you are a great writter! good job
Brittany
it a great poem
kenyate
I enjoy this peom. keep writing peoms like this.
Angel
well, i'm speechless; i think there is a deep feeling in your heart that will not go with the winds. You did a good job
Shondrea
This poem is so beautiful to me. I can relate to this poem right now.
Chris
When i read this poem it reminded me of this girl I go to school with. She's really a great girl and I've been dropping all kinds of hints that I like her and I'm hoping that this peom is it.
Cutie
I really luv dis poem it's very good it inspiring and it's so real cuz their are many people who can't explain how they fell on paper but they did a very wonderful jov expressing they feelings
Holly
i love this poem! it's like all you have is hope for that relationship. you're thinking of the good but know in your head it may not last. i like how you said you took a chance and glad you did, i think all girls should take a chance if they think it'll work.
Kerri
Hi! That was beautiful. Its not always easy to put your feelings into words and even make them rhyme. Especially when theyre really deep feelings. Again, that was great. Keep it up!
Kori
aww, thats so cute. you're a great poet. i really loved this poem
anonymous
Hey, i loved your poem it was very deep and i feel the same way about someone else accept they are the one afraid to take the chance. Anyways good job.
pebbles
I think that the poem was really great, and i enjoyed reading it!
kayla
this poem was good
Savannah
this poem is so ture i feel the same right now about a very close friend. keep writeing poems like this and ull deffently have my vote
Alex
i know exsactly how u feel. i wwish i could have made this poem to explain the troubles w/ likeing an older guy, and haven him like you too. but having his age in the way. thanks
stephanie
It was very sweet!
chakiri
this is an amazing poem i love it and read it every day
Sam
I loved this poem so much. It reminded me of this relationship that i'm havin with a guy 6 years older than I am, and we are just waiting it out to see what is going to happen
Kim
this poem i could relate to cuz the guy i am crushing on is 2 years older than me but he liked me first an every word said in this poemi could relate to great job
mayra
well its a very nice poem ? i really like poetry too? especially when am really stree out ? any ways but in my case hes younger then me by a year?
bugz
I love this poem. I have a crush on an older guy and this describes it perfectly! I dont know what else to say about it because i'm stunned.
Tiffany
I just wanted to vote this in because I knou how you feel.
tyzondria
i like your poem so much, all u said im going through right now
Kary
Wonderful poem
Selisha
This poem really shows true meanings and feelings i loved it.
Stephanie
I REALLY like this poem. i can hecka relate to this because my boyfriend is like 3 years older than me. but yeah! I LOVE IT!
Sharae
Hey your poem was awsome. It expressed so much and tells alot. It shows that you are strong your self and it made me realize somethings about myself. Keep doing what u doing cuz it was a great poem
Tessa
I loved it! it is what i am going through right now! it means so much to me that somone else out there is going through the same thing!
Cindy
The poem you gave me touched me. in that special place and im not talking about my heart! thanks alot it was fun Starburst I love you
Kari
I loved this poem!Its most deffenetly my favorite i'v ever read, and trust me i'v read alot. It totally describes a relationship im in right now with one of the most amazins guys i'v ever met!
Heather
this was a very sad but awsome poem.
mary
Because i am sorta in the same situation, except he dont know that i like him, and its something that i wish it could be. if only. and the fact that a younger girl can get an older guy makes me happy :)
Brittany
What a touching poem. its exactly what im going through!. my boyfriend is a couple years ahead of me and it just explains it all. great poem i love it =)
brittney
i can really relate to this poem it is happening to me right now! there is this older guy i like and he's really sweet and he is starting to show some of the same affection. you're a great writer don't ever give up
Nadiezda
this poem is really good and i can relate to it it comes from your heart it is really a sweet poem keep writing your good at it!
Trish
I REALLY like your poem. It used to relate to me, but now I've found someone else. You are a great writer! Write more PLEASE!
Martha
Mr. Satrburt you are a very great poet and I wish you keep on writing these kind of poems because this poem reminds me of my first love he is five years older than me but anyways I really loved this poem and I encourage you to keep on writing these kinds of poems.
tanya
i love this poem it exsplanes me great job keep it up
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