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My Poem is about a girl I have been wanting to be with for years now. I never knew how to tell her my feelings so, I started writing her poems and stuff like that. We did go out . . . and break up. But I know that I do truly love her and I know there must be a reason for me liking her so much for so long. So this is just one of the poems meant for her.

The Life Long Love

When I saw her I knew,
She had to be mine,
Her eyes so blue,
She smelled sweet as wine.

And finally I had her in my heart,
For the first time I was truly glad,
From her I never wanted to part,
I knew being with her never made me sad.

But then, it happened . . .

The sky fell,
The seas overflowed,
Away went her beautiful smell,
And my heart soon slowed.

If me and her were meant to be I don't know . . .

For the feelings are still there,
And when I see her my heart will still drop,
If she left my life I could not bear,
I know my love for her will never stop.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Erik
i love this poem, and it is excatly what i am going through right now, good luck with her man
destiny
This is a heart touching poem!
Shelby
THATS A VERY INTRASTING POEM? WOULDN'T THAT GIRLS NAME BE RACHEL??
Kayte
This was a great poem. It was real deep. Your really talented. Keep on loving her.
cynthia
it was pretty kool man. i hope you have the chance to be with her again. good luck
Caleb
this poem is very touching, its exactly what i'm going thru now, keep up the good work man
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