I am a 14 year old girl from England and I am new to poetry writing. This is my first poem. It is about how someone portrays themselves, but is feeling very different on the inside. Then they realize they are making other people happy by acting this way!
Watching the world through a blacked-out window
You see no sun,
Yet people see light shining in your eyes,
You are the sun for others
Watching children play, wishing you were them,
You start to cry,
People see your child- like tears,
Yet nobody seems to care
Giving light to others,
You realize you’re alone
Your flame is burning brightly
Yet you still feel blind
But if you look deep into your heart, and open the window,
You realize,
You are the sun,
Your stars need your brightness,
And one day you will find the special star,
Which will add to your flame,
And you will burn brighter then ever,
Spreading joy and happiness for miles around.
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this is really good. i know how it feels to want to do something and cant do it. it this is your first i would like to rea a lot more of yours.
Marian
This is a beautiful poem. Because sometimes you just don't know that you are a bright star for somebody and through this poem, it makes you realize the light you bring in other people's lives.
melanie
great great great
Sarah
This is such a good poem. it really touched me and weirdly portrays how i feel about myself in this world where i seem to offer too much and yet i feel all alone
Rachel
I liked your poem, its very touching, that's how i feel sometimes, For being your first poem you did very well. Keep it up.
Megan
This poem was sooooooo good. I loved it sooooo much.
shelly
that was a very thoughtfull poem for being ur first one well i hope u keep writting poems no matter waht the cause is and be safe
misty
i really like this poem because that's the way i feel almost all the time.
Chantelle
Ay blud, dat poems deep u no! ur young to man, dats good for a 14 year old, u must have u pure heart! keep goin wit da poetry man!
Leora
This poem really helped me. It has touched me. Thank you for posting it here.
nicole
'you are the sun' is such an inspiring, touching and thoughtful poem. jennifer you are obviousely a gifted person who creates meaning in her poems! thank you for your lovely poem.
glanda
this poem is so good, that it touched my feelings.
Kelsi
I like this poem because it is so true. I just dont understand why. Great job Jennifer please continue!
sara
i love this poem it really touched me what youve said in this poem is absolutley true and its pretty good for your first poem, keep writing. wanna hear more.
helen
this is a fantastic poem and really helped me keep up the good work. thankyou.
cassidy
i can relate to this poem all the way, its my everyday life. nice poem, keep it up.
runzka
I like this poetry because some part of it is like me. it touches me and cheer me up . i can't say it's really a good poetry for teen.
meredith
It really makes you wonder. You make the words come alive. I feel kind of dreamy when i read it. It makes you realize there is someone out there for you in the hardest times. Thak you, I needed that.
sonjia
hey i really liked this poem! it made me realize everything surrounding me,like my friends ,family, and my boyfriend!jennifer i really lik ur work put more poems up because i would love to read another one:)
Bobby
your poem tuched me. I feel like sharing this to the world. I know who my light is but that light passed away you helped me remember him thank you!
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