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This poem is about my love for my little sister, who died from brain cancer at the age of 10. It is about the love she shared and the love I still have for her.

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rabia
this's a very heart touching poem. i love it.
katrina
this poem touch my heart and i was on the brick of tears. i have a sister and i cant think about life without her. your poem was wonderful
Kaidan
. ,'. its touch me to the Fullest!Its Like Me and my teacher mam abigail. Shes there Whenever I need her.
Terra
I really like this poem because it reminds me of me and my sister, except for the end because she is not gone yet.

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Sisterly Love

Your ear to ear smile brought joy to us all
As my sister you knew just what to say
When I felt worthless you helped me stand tall
Now you have gone, how I hated that day
I feel my life has been torn apart
You taught me how to be strong, loving and wise
I know you live on, inside of my heart
Though everyday a part of me dies
But when I think of you it helps me go on
So I thank you for all the love you have
I still can't believe that you are now gone
When you left you were so little and brave
Not only were you my sister and friend
But you always had a hand to lend

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felicia
hey ur poem is reely touching and it reminds me of how much i love my brother even though he annoys me, and thank u so much its a great poem and i hope u can recove. loadsa luv xx
charice
this poem really grabbed my heart. i to had a twin sister that died when we were 9 years old from cancer and life for me has been very hard but to know that i am not alone makes my day worth living. thank you for writing you have saved a lonely heart.
Evelyn Mclaren
This poem was emailed to me by my sister Gloria presently studying at the University College of Belize while I was at Earth University in Costa Rica. It touched my heart and actually found tears in my eyes. I really apreciate and love the poem very much. Tnanks to the author.
Alice
I cried. The courage it takes to express what you feel is astronomical. I've never experienced anything like that in all my 16 years but you gave me courage today. I thank you for that.
Terran
This poem was sooo touching and teaches us to not to take advantage cause we never would want this to happen to us. Ur poem wasss GREAT!
Mel
great poem
Dezi
these poem is amazing! i'm so sorry about your sister. you have a talent with your peotry.
krystal
that was a very good one . thumbs up
Kawana
I like that poem and it really touched my heart cuz my best friends is my sisters,Cedrika,Cedrionna,and Arie they are the best friends and best sisters i can have.
timmy
it was really good when i read it tears fell down my cheeks and i really felt the thing the author wants the readers to feel. the words she used were great! i hope you had recovered! i felt the same because my sister gave that kind of love to me!
annacelia
this poem describes exactely how a sister should be. i never really had such a sister but now i know what to look for and how to show my own sister what a sister really is.
tawanna
this is a wonderful poem. i hope everyone else likes it as much as i did!
sad
This poem really applies to all sisters and that mekes it really special.
shanequa
this poem is a great poem i love the way u set it help just remember to keep your head up
Cliffton
This has got to be the most heartwarming poem I have ever read. I myself having four sisters, I know just what joy a family can be. (Brothers are fun too!) Keep working and perhaps write another one someday?
PRISCILLA
that poem was so touching and i think that was one of the most coolest poems i ever read
rachael
this poem realy touched me becuase i know if would have ever lost my sister i would be devistated and my grandpa died from brain cancer and its not easy so i feel your pain
melanie
i loved this poem it made me cry my sister get really sick we thought she was going to die but she got bitter but i keep thinking what if shed died i don't no how i'd go on but after i read your poem i no now that if she did she wouldn't have really gone because shed live on in me thank you and i'm really sorry a but your sister.
Taylah
your poem not only made me feel wot a sister is worth but it also touched my heart and showed me how much i love my sister at the moment my sister has anorexia and she is 43 kilos and she is 18 years old soo i thank you so much for that poem. love alwayz and forever Taylah
christian
HEY THAT WAS SAD BUT I LIKED IT. IT WAS SO KOOL JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I LOVE THAT POEM.
takesha
hey i loved that poem so much it alwayz made me cry but i am going 2 stand tall what my sister told me too do!
Wendi
This is a really good poem good job on it . But it touched me . i cryed reading it
SAM
GREAT POEM WOW BLEW ME AWAY
Heather
awww i think dis poem is really good but very sad. Who ever wrote dis i give u madd props niice goin nd i hope for da bes of u x0x pCe
raven
this is a great poem
amber
u know how 2 get 2 a person dont u well all i gots 2 say is u get the highest rating there is a 20
Victoria
this has been the only poem that has touched my heart cause if my sister past away i dont think i will be able to control my self
sam
i have sister to and this poem showed me that if something happens to my sisters i would lose my mind
matt
this is so great, my friend passed away last night,i have known him since pre-school. it was tough, but now i see theres more to life,thank you so much
tiffany
u did a great job u reminded me of my lil brother he past to and i felt da same way
Jessica
I like this poem because it shows that they were really close as friends and as sisters. My sister and I are like that, too. But we will probably be even closer if she ever leaves.
Amanda
Hi im sorry bout ya sis i love ur poem it is great,it made me cry! I dont have a blood sis only an in law and i cant imagine loosing her.
Kayla
Wow! That was a really good poem! I wish you the best of luck with your life and I am so sorry to hear about your sis. just remember that she is in a better place now and you will get to be with her one day ok! Keep your head up and your chin high!
julie
i thought this poem was really great becuz i also have a sis and i kno how close sisters are. and i can imagine how hard it was losing ur sis. your a really great writer and u should keep writing
Chelsey
Ashtyn Bevins Hello their I LOVED your poem! It remindes me sooo much of two people I know. (they are my negbhors) She lost her sister at the age of 17 because of suicide. They were very close and when her sister died she couldn't sleep up stairs anymore so they gave her the computer room to make it into her room. She use to sleep with her sister at night and she would have to go threw her sisters room to get to hers. Her death date is coming up on October 27th She killed herself on her little cousins birthday he's now in 5th grade. She will be 19 yrs old. I just wanted to say your poem touched my heart and others to this day i hope you don't mind but i'm gona print it off. Loved it! Nice job and I'm sry if youved lost a loved one! best wishes ~Always~n~Forever~ Chels
amanda
that poem is great it made me wanna cry sooooo much. cuz mi sister died at 3 month. they cudn't tell us what from cuz they didn't noe.
Georgina
I really enjoyed your poem it reminds me of a really good friend who almost like a sister
Tyna(Tina)
this was so toching . I lost my baby sister(Thyia) Aug. 5th,2003. It still hurts so bad. She was 28,comeing home and was hit head on by someone on drugs.
Donna
i really loved this poem. im always complaing about my little sister but you helped me realize how lucky i am to have such a nice and beatuful sister.
Tori
Thank you so much for writing this poem. My little 12 year-old sister recently passed away after a seventeen-month fight with bone cancer. I've been having a difficult time coping with her loss and the poem you wrote helped me feel as though other people can relate to my emotions.
Emma
This poem really touched me. My sister, 19, and I, 15, have not always been close. Infact we fought a lot when she lived at home, then she started to drive at age 17 and moved out of home at 18. This helped her mature a lot because she wasn't really much of a sister to me but ever since she moved out of home we've become closer than ever and it feels great. I'm very protective of my sister and quite recently my sister was diagnosed with and STD passed on to her from a guy, which i'm not happy about. This made me realise more how much i actually love her and we're really getting along heaps. We talk about everything and anything and i couldn't imagine life without her so hang in there Ashtyn
Torrence
This is a really cute yet tragic poem. I love my sister so deeply and if i ever lose her. My tears will be an endless stream.
lindsay
I loved this poem. My sister dies when she was 11 and I was 7. I know all the pain the author is feeling, and she expressed them in a neat way!
Kayla
Awww. this makes me feel like I want to cry because I have a sister whom I don't really get along with . but I showed this to her . it makes you think about the "what-if's" . peace out gurl
Lauren
I loved the poem. it made me think of the girl in our community that just lost her twin so thank you.
Megan
I LOVE THIS POEM! On February 1st my sister Kelli passed away due to injuries recevied in a car wreck me and my little brother were involved and I walked out with a Concussion and He walked out with a sliced Liver and 2 broken ribs it is amazing how I was sitting RIGHT next to my sister( she was Driving ) she was only 16 and she was my BEST friend I love this website and I respect and love htis poem it is SO true like word for word thanks for letting me see this posted on the net.
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