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I am 14 years old, in the 8th grade in a small school, about 300 students K-12. I have been having a rough time for the past seven months. I have been hanging around the wrong kind of crowd, which has not given me the best reputation.

This poem is about how I have a rough life and I am not treated very fairly. Every day is a battle for me, but I still take all the blame for the things that I do wrong.

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ericah

i really like your poem, i can relate really well

Yeo Peck Lee

I can understand your feeling.

Tiffany

this touched me in alot of wayz i feel the same i have always been hurt most of my life but i just keeped it caged inside.

Sharika

I can really relate to this feeling

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Unhappiness

by Crystal

Some nights I stay up late and cry,
Other times I feel as if I could die!
In my life I feel not loved,
I always get kicked around or shoved.
But why should I be happy?
How can I be if I'm treated so crappy?
Every day seems like a battle.
I get thrown around like a baby's rattle.
Sometimes everything can be so scary.
Why can't I just be happy and merry?
For all my faults, I am to blame.
I am the one to take all the shame.

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annacelia

your poem speaks the truth.

Kayte

I like this poem a lot. I used to feel the exact same way until one day I simply said you know what? I'm just gonna suck it up and deal with it. But I think that this was an exellent poem and I would like to read more of your work.

dalenna

this a poem that i can relate to. adn describes me very well. unhappy!

shelby

i love this poem. it is soo me. make more poems like this!

Amy

I can relate to this poem and Its exactly how I feel!

stephany

crystal this poem is so beutoful i love it you shold be thankful about your life and the gift that god has give you to write such beutiful and just great poems cincerely stephany n. y. 13.

i may seem like at an idiot and that i dont know what im talking about but im sure u`ll understand. i understand exactly how u feel even though i was never in that position, i was always the one pushing people around to make myself seem good u relize that later in life it was a waste of time and energy and it gets back to u in relationships with friends and FAMILY!

Michelle

This poem sounds more like me. This is how i feel inside and i try to hide it a lot. I dont like to go places because of the way im treated everywhere. at home i hide in my room just so i dont have to even think about other people.

Krista

I feel the same way sometimes and think you did a really nice job on this poem. you are a great writer!

Nicola

This poem describes exactly how I am feeling now! carry on writing!

Jaclyn

I love this poem its like the person who wrote it knows me soo well i absoultly love it!

sabrina

I think your poem is great. I could relate on that sometimes.

Nuria

The poem is really good. I like it alot. It explains what alot of us teens go thougth. anyway good job. seee ya around bye

Kimber

I feel the same way sometimes only i cant put it into words like you did! That was wonderful!

Chelsea

I understand everything you were trying to put out into that poem and I loved it! Great Job

mike macD

you sumed up my hole year in grade 7 just in the intro but then the poem i have been lookin around 4 poems this is my life u did some thing the average teen i toght no 1 could do so good luck in the rest of your life

JESSABELLA

THIS IS BEAUTFIFUL CRYSTAL! TOUCHED MY HEART.

Andy

hey girl, that poem of yours was really awesome. i hope things for you turn out okay in the end. hey, im sorta goin through the same sorts of stuff. good luck.

Kelci

I like this poem because it's my life word for word. It made me realize that there are others like me, and that some are more unhappy than me, and that life goes on and each day we should take with strong hands!

Corri

When i read your poem i thought you wrer me you are lonely in side with a smile outside you cry late at night i do the same so, dont take the blame

Mike

i can really relate to this poem. It fits me really well.

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