As I walked into the high school,
People were watching us.
But I didn't notice now.
I walked over to you,
I touched your sweet face.
I tried not to cry, but the tears
they were always there.
I tasted the tears of anger and sorrowness,
I tried to tell myself it was all a bad dream -
But then I realized that dreams
aren't supposed to hurt you.
As I leaned over,
I whispered into your ear,
I love you.
Then I put the flowers on the casket,
And I quietly walked out saying,
Goodbye.
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i love this poem it is so sad and i am soor that happen that happend to me too sorry
juju
i liked this poem cause i know how you really fell because i have been in that kind of problem. it made me cry.
liz
I really like this poem. it is very chilling
Luke
this is a very touching poem.
aubrey
this is a verry touching poem. it has alot of feeling and i think is great.
Godslilgurl
This is a good poem it made me think of someone I didn't get to say good bye to which hurts me the most God bless keep writing
ingmar
sigh. life is delicate indeed
Kayla
It touched me, because I once tried to commit suicid once. It shows that you taking your life hurts the ones that love you. I quite understand that befor tis poem makes me understand it better.
Eli
Hey Jessica, well i was just on diz website cuz im suppose 2 look 4 a poem i really like and present it to my class, and i read yours and it made me cry! Might as well choose this one.
sabrina
wow!i loved your poem. i lost my best friend on september 11 due to a forwheeler accident. we spent everyday together unless one of us was sick then we stll gave each other get well cards or something to that matter. when i read this it made me think of her right away. and all the laughs and great memories we got to share for thirteen years. your poem really touched me. its wonderful!
cheree
I'm 14 and I just recently lost my really good friend in a car wreck. I can really relate to this poem because I went through the same things.
amy
it was insarational,sad and true. although it is difficult to express sadness,in a poem it just shows so much character.
Brandy
this poem is awesome. I just lostone of my close friends she was in a car accident so i really know where your comin from. thanks
brittany
i love you poem it is sweet and i like it i give it a 20
Tears
it is painful to lose some one but no matter what as long as we don't forget them then they are never lose in some way as we can alway find them in our heart.
andrea
that was a sad poem i almost died from suicide
chloe
i cried when i read this poem it reminded me of what it was like to lose my towo children because of an awful case of cancer it made me remember their smell the way they looked the way that dillon had a lisp and would say at the age of 2 dilly want a suice and the way that sally would cry before it rained to warn me to get the washing inwhen she was 1 i miss my darlings alot they died a year apart from each other and i now have the same cancer they did but am slowly recovering any one who has had a child pass away will know how i feel about this poem it is a great poem and every time i read it it will remind me of my two wonderfully beautiful children
Kristin
hey, ur poem is really good. i have to give you alot of gratitude. i write poetry myself. i know wut its like to loose someone you love in a blink of an eye. well keep the good work up ! peace out
laura
this poem touched my heart, i have never lost anyone but i felt your pain and sorrow with only fewer words!
Andrea
This reminded me about losing one of my friends at a football game. he died almost a year ago.
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