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Middle school is usually one of the hardest times of life. That's where the popularity exists and that's where things have the tendency to go wrong. This poem is about the thousands of mistakes I made during my desperate attempts to be popular. And although it's written in third person, it's about myself.

The Inner Battle

You criticize what you do not know
You belittle those who aren't like you
You insult, you lie, and you manipulate
to make yourself seem superior

Have you not realized that you're putting yourself down
the same way you do to others?
Snide remarks and crude comments
They come from inside you
From inside that "perfection" you try to push forward
and force into everyone's face
Remarks and insults coming from you
simply reveal what you truly are

Insecure

You let your insecurity control you
You allow it to take your sense and maturity hostage
Those people out there didn't do this to you
They never insulted you,
never belittled you,
never treated you as demeaningly as you treat them
They're the innocents being affected
by your inner battle with yourself.

You insult because you're afraid.
The qualities you despise in yourself
shadow your eyes
and become the qualities of someone else -
an innocent.
You may think it's fun to laugh at that poor bystander.
You may think it'll make you God,
but, in the end, you'll realize
that you were doing battle with yourself the whole time.
After all, you are your own worst critic.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
john
I LIKE THIS POEM IT HLODS A LOT OF TRUTH IN ITS WORDS
Sirra
"If you hate a person, you hate something in them that is a part of yourself. What isn't a part of ourselves doesn't concern us," they say. We are our own worst enemies. You go, Girl! I am printing this out as we speak! It will go straight into my personal anthology. This is great!
Ida
It is true and i've seen, be with and experience with those kind of people. Reading this makes me feel that i'm telling it off to someone. i've been a victim of one. who was treated that way.
jhordane
i loved this poem
Anthony
This poem is so true. It really discribes middle school like it is.
David
I think that your poem is very good. It really touched me. I hope you continue to write poems.
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Poems for the People   -  Poems by the People