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This poem was thought up by me one night when thinking about my possibilities in life. It is based on a true story. It will make you think...

K.S.-14 years old.

Her Unending Faith

"God, if you love me, I know it's right,
Please let us make love tonight,"
She asked Him with a pleading voice,
Thinking she had made the right choice.
She put on music that seemed best,
He would get right to the rest.
She didn't exactly know why she felt,
A cold hollow feeling as he undid his belt.
Her parents found them before it got worse,
She kicked and screamed and hit and cursed,
But ceased when she heard their news.
Many girls had been in her shoes,
They didn't stop him, he caused their strife,
And soon AIDS would take away his life.
See, God really loved her and kept her safe,
And now she has complete and total faith.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
grey girl
i love it. god closes doors, but opens windows. totally.
Rebbecca
Really good work. It touched me alot. I am 16 and at age 12 I was silly enough to be with a man aged 39 who was HIV and Hep C positive. I just found out that at the time we where together unprotected that he was positive for HIV and Hep C and im still waiting for my results. good work.
lola
its a good poemmm
julia
this poem changed my thoughts about life, not that I didn't know about STD's or STI's. I hope I would still live with my mom.
ShaVania
U SEEM TO BE A VERY CREATIVE PERSON WHAT A LIFE STORY.
REBECCA
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. ITS SOOO TRUE,KEEP ON WRITING.
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