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Basically this poem describes how I see "adults" viewing teens. It seems that no matter what it is that a teen does, it is rude, selfish, and wrong. I hate to be seen like that.
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michael
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Niece
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Tara
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Unfeeling Teens |
| by Alesha Faulkner |
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The world doesn't understand What's going wrong in me Neither do they want to know For fear they'll have to see So many things useless in life But all acceptable Except a teen with lofty dreams But balance by the bowl So many times I've wondered why Teens today are used While as a child they sat alone angry and confused Crouching down upon the floor To avoid viscous blows Of words of hate and flying fists And what else? Who knows Creatures from deep inside their minds That hollow dark abyss Scream to them their life is lost They lost it in a kiss Unfeeling teens when will they learn What's prominent and good And damn it, when will they Do as WE think they really should? |
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stephanie
ur poem was realy nice
Robert
that was nice!
sarah
this is a good poem i truely see what you are saying cause i feel the same
Shelia
This poem is beautitful, it's about what what most teens life is all about. Unfourtnately.
Tanaeya
That was a really good poem because its true
diana
i loved it!it made me cry!i've been through it!and i know its the truth!
cricket
this poem was really good im leaving this comment to say i agree with evry word of this poem im gunna incourage you to write more ok love ya bye
Mel
GREAT poem and a true point
Juliona
It was a great poem
Gina
This peom is really true to me and greatly expresses all of the feeling that so many of us have, thanks for putting it on paper.
tanginique
I think this poem is an excellent poem. Who ever wrote this has great talent and unspeakable words.
annacelia
you have written a really great poem i think its what alot of us really feel and want to say.
melody
real poem thats all i gots to say
kasey
the poem was really great,more people should read it,especially adults,it will give them an idea of how we(teenagers) feel. I give it a 10!
Quianna
I love this poem! It is really good. It really got me thinking.
Marium
This poem is great . It gose with what teens r and what thay feel about. I really liked it. I vote it a 8and a Have.
Heather
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dana
THIS POEM IS THE BEST POEM I READ. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Jessica
This poem is really good. I just came across it. The subject is quite touchy. But you sad the words many of us have not the guts to say this is the best one ive read so far.
Shirley
I really enjoyed the hearted warming poem!
justine
I really liked the poem i felt as if i could relate to it. i cried when i read it its not everyday you can find someone that understands how u feel.
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