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This poem is somewhat mysterious. It was about three years ago that I wrote this, yet it takes many different shapes and forms as I grow and experience more relationships. It can have so many personal meanings to the reader.

You

by jenawin

ocean waves
wash my soul
cleanse me of your smile

and the memory of
ten fingers
entwined forever
in a hopeless wish

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

katie

I love this poem. It reminds me of my first unconditional love. Only on his part it wasnt conditional. And I just want to forget it. And when it says "ten fingers intwined in a hopeless wish", it so made me cry

megan

thie poem is really good i liked it so much !

great poem! its so true! please keep on writing xoxo

yema

very nice. all the poems especially sad poems touched meeeeeeeee

Brandi

I think out of all of them, it is really true.

Liliana

i thought this poem was really something that i can relate to, in general i mean.

Fish

I was so incredibly touched by your wonderful poem. I will remember it for the rest of my life Thank u for blessing me You are how i sleep at night Thank You

Brittany

I like this poem a lot. It was one of the best on read so far. Keep writing poems i think you will make a good poem writer one day!

Juanita

This pome is great nice job

Raven

i think that its small that is has more defiyion to it. love it

Mylee

This is a short poem yet it means something and I like that. I mean I see all these poems using these old words like shall or shant or thee or something (not that there's anything wrong with that) but I like to see poetry like this- very simple yet meaningful. very beautiful.

Shaista

this is the excellent poem to touch those hearts who really feel this poem.

Ansong

greetings to you

xiomara

love it one of the best sad love poems iv read

whitney

i really like this poem it this great

Dana

these few lines touch the heart deep in side. espcially if u read the lines carefully and understand the metaphorical expressions,

Christopher

That was very sad. I enjoyed it immensley however.

Shawn

It's a really good poem Jenawin. Short, simple and right to the heart. I also was searching to shed a tear at a sad poem, and yours did the job, because I know how you felt when you wrote this poem. Excellant poem. 10/10

Maags

Excellent, heart felt, beautiful ! 10

pam

Says all I cannot say

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Poems for the People - Poems by the People

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Poems for the People - Poems by the People