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This poem is somewhat mysterious. It was about three years ago that I wrote this, yet it takes many different shapes and forms as I grow and experience more relationships. It can have so many personal meanings to the reader.

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Cecilia
Though i'm not a great expert, being only 13. i really love this poem, it really touched me how no other poem ever did. very well done!
Domonique
it's straight
gielle
really nice so poignant, moving feelings deep inside
latoyia
i loved it

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You

ocean waves
wash my soul
cleanse me of your smile

and the memory of
ten fingers
entwined forever
in a hopeless wish

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lormie
I can feel the sadness and the hopelessness of the author. I see two lovers who can not be together holding hands walking along a shore. Looking at each other's eyes. and wanting nothing more, but the memories to both stay and go away.
Adrianna
this poem touched me because my boyfriend that i love with all my heart and sout and who is my best friend for life got put to prison for a stupid reason and i pray and wish every single nite for him to get out and as da poem said its a hopeless wish
katie
I love this poem. It reminds me of my first unconditional love. Only on his part it wasn't conditional. And I just want to forget it. And when it says "ten fingers intwined in a hopeless wish," it so made me cry
megan
thie poem is really good i liked it so much !
m
great poem! its so true! please keep on writing xoxo
yema
very nice. all the poems especially sad poems touched meeeeeeeee
Brandi
I think out of all of them, it is really true.
Liliana
i thought this poem was really something that i can relate to, in general i mean.
Fish
I was so incredibly touched by your wonderful poem. I will remember it for the rest of my life Thank u for blessing me You are how i sleep at night Thank You
Brittany
I like this poem a lot. It was one of the best on read so far. Keep writing poems i think you will make a good poem writer one day!
Juanita
This pome is great nice job
Raven
i think that its small that is has more defiyion to it. love it
Mylee
This is a short poem yet it means something and I like that. I mean I see all these poems using these old words like shall or shant or thee or something (not that there's anything wrong with that) but I like to see poetry like this- very simple yet meaningful. very beautiful.
Shaista
this is the excellent poem to touch those hearts who really feel this poem.
Ansong
greetings to you
xiomara
love it one of the best sad love poems iv read
whitney
i really like this poem it this great
Dana
these few lines touch the heart deep in side. espcially if u read the lines carefully and understand the metaphorical expressions,
Christopher
That was very sad. I enjoyed it immensley however.
Shawn
It's a really good poem Jenawin. Short, simple and right to the heart. I also was searching to shed a tear at a sad poem, and yours did the job, because I know how you felt when you wrote this poem. Excellant poem. 10/10
Maags
Excellent, heart felt, beautiful ! 10
pam
Says all I cannot say
Laura
this is a great poem expressing thousands of feelings comming from the heart. I like it alot!
christopher
makes me feel the blurred memories of my painfull "muse". christine.
Kat
I love this poem, even though its short, I think that it has a lot of meaning. I thought about this poem for a while and I love it. It's deep. nice.
alen
i love this poem and it is an understabdable poem. and you can feel it
dora
i really felt this poem. is was simple but yet so true and deep
Gely
this poem is cool!
Jt
couldnt be closer to the truth
NICHOLAS
I THINK IT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM THAT CAME FROM YOUR HEART IT TALK TO ME IN A WAY.
Racheal
hey i thought that this poem was good even though it was short. I love it so much!
amanda
hey i loved this poem it was short but powerful i loved it
paul
Titally awesome! Short but v. v. moving. Struck into the marrow of my bones.
Jennifer
wonderful i have to move on about some old past and boy this really comforted me
Steve
I lost a love such as you have penned. It did make me think of the loss and foolishness of love gone missed or could never be. Few words, beautiful expression of truth Steve
Syed
Its great to read your lovely poem, and i personally requested for more great and lovely poems
Rebecca
this is short, but so full of meaning. i just fell in love with it.
yeraldine
This poem is very simple yet it means a lot. All poetry should be simple but it should have a big understanding that no one can understand. All small things mean big things in the hearts. rateing: 10
anne
It's surprisingly short but captures the heart. The second stanza leaves me hanging and encourages more memories to rush back to its reader.
megan
This was a good poem
Jasmine
this brought tears to my eyes thank you for sharing
Liz
I thought it was very cute
Donna
Loved the poem, wrote it in my journal. I can relate.
Dara
I thought this poem was so touching.
Ashley
this poem is short but interesting i liked it
frani
Amazing. Easily my msn name as of now. Beautiful. So litle words, and yet so much meaning. It gives a whole new depth of letting go of what cannot be. Love it. Thanks.
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