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This poem is meant to be short and sweet, yet profound and truthful. This poem is my heart put into words; it is the aftermath of a relationship blown away with the wind. Love Poems
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Our Love
by jenawin
our love is a
wasteland
of
promises in vain

of past
of present
of future
nothing

rotting
quietly
in my palms

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
CHRIS
WHEN YOU WROTE THIS POEM IT SHORT SIMPLE, AND TO THE POINT. GOOD JOD I WISH YOU THE BEST AND REMEMBER JUST KEEP WRITING. CHRIS
Kim
The poem said everything a braoken heart feels
sara
i really like your poem because its that really touch your heart
judy
its real good
Cindy
I love your poem. It described exactly what i am going through and had not been able to put into words. You have described in short my current relationship, if you can it that.
brittany
i liked your poem it was short and sweet lol!
Gabriela
my boyfrind just told me that he felt that his love for me not as strong as it used to be. :(
samantha
I really like this poem. It brought back alot of diffrent emotions I use to feel. It was a really good poem!
Desseray
I liked your poem because it's short but it has alot of thoat put in to it
Courtney
I really liked this poem it really touch my heart i really like it.
JESSICA
BEAUTIFUL POEM . ITS A TRUE THING NOT EVERYBODY BELIEVES IT BUT ITS THE SIMPLE TRUTH AFTER THE ONE YOU LOVE LEAVES U .
Josephina
Very true.
Emily
I love how it talks about the failing of the relationship. This inspires me to make sure the next guy I want to date, is the right guy that won't rot in my palm.
wilow
this is so true thats it hurts.you managed to put in words something i been trying to do. much respect and i don't even know you
jamie
it is kindove a short poem but i liked it.
Belinda
i love it although it was short right more
charlotte
it woz bloody gd
Amanda
this is relly sweety i loved it alot
toni
i like this poem because it is different and it really expessies how i feel about someone.
Jackie
This poem touch my heart every day i feel this way it blends in with me and my boyfriend.
Jennifer
it was a wonderful poem touching but right to the point. very very good
T
This poem was short but it said alot. GOOD JOB!
Dawn
It is simple but the words are said so beautifully it touched me it is a nice poem
natalie
your poem was nice
dorothy
I loved this poem cause it saids everything about the love me and my ex had i cryed keep up the good work and i hope to see more from u
melissa
this is a great way to tell your feelings. i love this poem. it's simple and sweet. but yet you show enough, to tell how you really feel. and i love that. you're gifted.
unkown
this is really nice poem thanx for sharing with us keep it upp and give us more love poems
Maela
I love this poem, it really touched my heart and it reminds me about what i have done before. Thanks to Jenawin
STACY
THIS POEM EXPRESS HOW HE FELT WHEN HIS LOVE ONE BROKE HIS HEART BUT IT WILL BE OKAY HOLD YOUR HEAD UP
Tiara
I love this poems cause it helps people to express their deepest feeling without having to hide them from anyone.
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