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This poem is meant to be short and sweet, yet profound and truthful. This poem is my heart put into words; it is the aftermath of a relationship blown away with the wind.

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leeann
is poem touch my heart by the way sound
gladys
wow this poem is real deep
jacqui
this poem explains exactly how i feel. i think you did a great job
CHRIS
WHEN YOU WROTE THIS POEM IT SHORT SIMPLE, AND TO THE POINT. GOOD JOD I WISH YOU THE BEST AND REMEMBER JUST KEEP WRITING. CHRIS

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Our Love

our love is a
wasteland
of
promises in vain

of past
of present
of future
nothing

rotting
quietly
in my palms

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Kim
The poem said everything a braoken heart feels
sara
i really like your poem because its that really touch your heart
judy
its real good
Cindy
I love your poem. It described exactly what i am going through and had not been able to put into words. You have described in short my current relationship, if you can it that.
brittany
i liked your poem it was short and sweet lol!
Gabriela
my boyfrind just told me that he felt that his love for me not as strong as it used to be. :(
samantha
I really like this poem. It brought back alot of diffrent emotions I use to feel. It was a really good poem!
Desseray
I liked your poem because it's short but it has alot of thoat put in to it
Courtney
I really liked this poem it really touch my heart i really like it.
JESSICA
BEAUTIFUL POEM . ITS A TRUE THING NOT EVERYBODY BELIEVES IT BUT ITS THE SIMPLE TRUTH AFTER THE ONE YOU LOVE LEAVES U .
Josephina
Very true.
Emily
I love how it talks about the failing of the relationship. This inspires me to make sure the next guy I want to date, is the right guy that won't rot in my palm.
wilow
this is so true thats it hurts.you managed to put in words something i been trying to do. much respect and i don't even know you
jamie
it is kindove a short poem but i liked it.
Belinda
i love it although it was short right more
charlotte
it woz bloody gd
Amanda
this is relly sweety i loved it alot
toni
i like this poem because it is different and it really expessies how i feel about someone.
Jackie
This poem touch my heart every day i feel this way it blends in with me and my boyfriend.
Jennifer
it was a wonderful poem touching but right to the point. very very good
T
This poem was short but it said alot. GOOD JOB!
Dawn
It is simple but the words are said so beautifully it touched me it is a nice poem
natalie
your poem was nice
dorothy
I loved this poem cause it saids everything about the love me and my ex had i cryed keep up the good work and i hope to see more from u
melissa
this is a great way to tell your feelings. i love this poem. it's simple and sweet. but yet you show enough, to tell how you really feel. and i love that. you're gifted.
unkown
this is really nice poem thanx for sharing with us keep it upp and give us more love poems
Maela
I love this poem, it really touched my heart and it reminds me about what i have done before. Thanks to Jenawin
STACY
THIS POEM EXPRESS HOW HE FELT WHEN HIS LOVE ONE BROKE HIS HEART BUT IT WILL BE OKAY HOLD YOUR HEAD UP
Tiara
I love this poems cause it helps people to express their deepest feeling without having to hide them from anyone.
Rachel
Yes I enjoyed it very much it touched me a great deal My own promise me the moon and stars but alas did not work so thankyou for putting into works what mine could not do just yet i give it a 10
ashley
I really love that poem i thought it really was romantic
nadia
i think that your poem is really good. i like the way you were able to put in words that the love that you have or had for that guys, was easyly forgoten and that you were able to get over it. i really like it a lot.
misha0226
It's amazing how you can use so few words to describe such a profound feeling. Absolutely wonderful.
tanya
i think it's cute, it reminds mah of one of my x bfs named sammi we constantly fight but i still love him it's just something i feel for him, i don't know what.
lindsay
Great poem! You said what I've been trying to say but never could - i gave it to ex to be - thanks
Thuy
That is really true about love and I like your poem. It is very good.
Tara
this is a realyy explanatory poem short but sweet i like it alot
sarah
i love your poems. i purposely look through this site for your poems. all of them are short and sweet and i love it like that. so beautiful so meaningful. something i can so relate to. thank you
TANIA
beautiful poem, it reminded me of what I had. thank you jenawin
Amber
I think this poem is awesome. What I feel you put into words keep up the awesome poems!
vonnE
your poem is so deep i love it
Chris
amazing. nothing else. just that.
Laci
this poem is short but it says everything a brokenhearted person wants to. it really touched me.
JSW
Not really into poetry, but surf acrossed your poem and you said what i could not. Thank you and you made me fan of this site.
Missy
i really liked your poem.keep writing. good luck in all you do
Nova
keep on Good work.! so simple but meaningful and it really touch my heart..
hugo
i really liked this poem. it inspired me alot
zaba00
really good words
John
your poems leave me breathless thank you
GEE
Simply formed. Mammoth in Meaning.

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