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This poem is about a person that thought she had found love, but realized too late in the game that it wasn't all she thought it was. She had given everything she had to this one person, only to have them throw it right back at her! And now she is lost in a world full of sorrows, feeling as though her Love is corrupted and will never be found again.

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Genevive
The poem is so nice. I can relate to it. I am still heartbroken and hard at the moment. I feel so empty and hopeless. I feel I could never love again.
mami
This really touched me, and it says how I feel
linda
The things written i nthis poem remind me so much of myself at a time before i finally did find the one that i was looking for all along. this is a really really good poem! i loved it!
stoner
very touching it made a tear in my eye

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Corrupted Love

A warm sensation fills my body
My heart races with every touch
The softness of your voice soothes
My soul
As I lay there hoping the moment
Will never end
Calling out for you
Praying that you'll never let me go
The sensation so strong
I can no longer feel my body
Slowly I fade in and out of reality
In an instant the warm sensation
Fades away
My heart empty
My soul torn apart
Lying there; wondering where I went
Wrong
Calling out for you, only to find
there is no answer
My mind invaded with thoughts
So cruel and unrefined
The sensation of fear of what's to come
Slowly the reality over powering
The lust and fantasy
Leaving me empty
Confused on how to think or feel
The loneliness I feel
So wretched and compelled
Betrayal to myself
Revealing the terrors of my love

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

pat
I know only too well where your coming from, because, right not this is where I stand. Lovely poem
ITA
this is how i feel. the pain. emptiness. what a great poem. really touch my heart.
PANKAJ
its fantastic. i an just crying. i know how it feels. ite superb, mindblowing. i am not having words to express myself. good going. keep it up dear.
Joolessie
I was just browsing aimlessly,feeling down with brokenheart. and I found this Poem. exactly how i am feeling right now. how weird is that. I cant event think how hurtful it is and to express in a way no one even my friends could feel or see. That I am hurting deep inside me. This poem said it all for me. Thank you very much Angelgirl020. Hope our pain soon felt by those who hurts us now or later. God bless. cheers
nikki
very heartbreaking but also strong. =/
Elana
I was very touched by your poem, it is comforting to know I'm not the only one that is in so much pain. I am crying, because there was a guy the one man that I truly loved, I never had enough nerve to have a full conversation with him, he was so sweet and romantic and adorable, he was everything to me. But he is now getting married to this girl. This girl that I think only wants him for his money, but then I have to wonder, if they really are in love. It kills me everyday, I can never forget him and I do not ever think that I will find someone that is like him ever again. He is all I think about and dream about. I wish he could hold me instead of her. Thank you for writing this poem it truly captures my pain.
angela
this was a really good poem i liked it. it reminded me of my ex boyfriend that broke my heart into.
shorty24
i can todally relate to this poem. I've been through this.
john
I love your poem It says alot I am so sorry you had to feel that pain.
iesha
it was good
Shelly
its really touching. i too feel the same. grt
val
I liked this poem more than you can know, and I understand it more than I ever wanted to.
mari
i really like your poem, i too have felt this way before. keep up the good work
leanna
this is a very good poem i really liked it alot it tells about broken hearts which i can relate to
kara
i loved this poem. it definatly makes me stop and think of the relationship im in right now. thank you I love your poem!
kiara
i really liked it it touched my heart this is wat i reel right now deep inside
suhaila
I FEEL SO NICE WHEN I READ THIS ARTICLE AND I ALSO PRINTED IT BECAUSE IT SUPRISE ME REALLY
Piyouna
i like your poem it rings bells in my soul. that poem is very good. i hope to read more of your work.
La-guerita-de-rangel
This is real touching poem. Congratulations! I liked it a lot. I say that you write some more pretty ones because youre really good at it. I liked it becaused one time the same thing had happened to me. I was wondering what I did wrong for him to leave me like nothing after all the things we had went through. You know what I mean. Well, good job.
Brittany
I really like it. It is exactly how i feel. very nice.
Niece
Thank you for this poem and thank you to the friend who sent this to me. I just went through break-up with a man that I thought I would spend the rest of my life with. I held onto those last moments of passion hoping that he would change his mind, only to be met with rejection that hurt more than anything I have ever experienced. This poem said exactly what I am feeling, thank you.
victoria
this poem is very beautiful it is so true about my love and feelings and not most poems reach out to me like this one did
brandy
your poem really touched me. i have just broke up with someone whom i really love and now i think that i have made a big mistake. true love is not easy to walk away from but u never really realize it till its over brandy
nicholle
This is so true for my love life right now, there is a guy who held me in his arms then he told me he hated me and never wanted to see me again and I can't get over him no madder wht I do!
Rhodon
This peom is great it had me on the end of my seat. One time ago i could say that was me. LOVELY . I feel like crying.
acid
this poem is perfect. I know how that feels.
jasmine
this poem was amazing. it reminded me of a relationship i was in. it truly touched me.
richard
this poem is very great. I believe you have real talent. you should become a poet. Also don't let life get you down there is always hope in a better day ( tomorrow). God bless and keep u
RAQUEL
THIS WAS VERY GOOD, WE AS WOMEN ARE VERY SENSITIVE CREATURES AND WE FALL IN LOVE SO QUICKLY. ONLY BECUASE WE HAVE A HUNGER FOR LOVE THAT WILL NEVER BE SATISFIED. GREAT POEM AND SO TRUE
Eric
I am sorry that you were fooled by a lust crazed individual who tricked your mind into loving him. it happens. people are selfish and greedy and most men only look for a warm body not a warm soul. sad but true. i hope you recover
Alexis
I feel the same way. Thanks for publishing this poem. I would like to know how I can enter my poems.
brittney
i was really touched by this poem because this recently happened to me, so thanks for writing this.
justin
great poem. it really touched me to my heart. loved how u had the convidenc to express your self after a hard time we all know how that is to go through
lenne
i loved it and so did my friends
Janine
I have also been unfortunate in feeling this way that you describe. I have felt this hurt. I think that you wrote the poem very well. You will find love and peace.
Robert
This Poem has really touched my heart for the Tramatic feelings I'm going through right now.
artencia
Hey yeah I really love this it's heart touching
Reminder
it reminds me of a past relation ship
brittany
i loved his poem it is just like my life and whati ent through this is like you wrote this just for me and my situation. may god bless you
Blongs2HIM
This poem really hits home for me. Thank you. I know now I'm not the only one that feels this way.
Cheryl
How many times have we fallen for the wrong guy or girl - then blame something or someone, cause the love is gone. Most of us are to scared to admit that what we felt was tainted love. This poem is a page in the lives of most people. 5 stars 4 u
jen
This is the perfect example of how I feel about the on I love
aaron
i know how you feel
Betty
I really love this poem it didn't only touch me but it reminded me of a very special someone who i loved dearly and i looked away for one moment and then he was gone and now i wish i could go back and make things right but i i have to say from that is that i loved him so and now he is gone and it wa a mistake that we never got back to were or how we were before!
Nuhu
This poem is very touching and has got a a powerful message that made me to re-read it.
nina
i really likt this poem it touched my heart because i'v been there befor and it helps to know im not the only one who as been thought this keep up the good work
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