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This poem is about a person that thought she had found love, but realized too late in the game that it wasn't all she thought it was. She had given everything she had to this one person, only to have them throw it right back at her! And now she is lost in a world full of sorrows, feeling as though her Love is corrupted and will never be found again.

Corrupted Love

by Angelgirl020

A warm sensation fills my body
My heart races with every touch
The softness of your voice soothes
My soul
As I lay there hoping the moment
Will never end
Calling out for you
Praying that you'll never let me go
The sensation so strong
I can no longer feel my body
Slowly I fade in and out of reality
In an instant the warm sensation
Fades away
My heart empty
My soul torn apart
Lying there; wondering where I went
Wrong
Calling out for you, only to find
there is no answer
My mind invaded with thoughts
So cruel and unrefined
The sensation of fear of what's to come
Slowly the reality over powering
The lust and fantasy
Leaving me empty
Confused on how to think or feel
The loneliness I feel
So wretched and compelled
Betrayal to myself
Revealing the terrors of my love

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

nicholle

This is so true for my love life right now, there is a guy who held me in his arms then he told me he hated me and never wanted to see me again and I can't get over him no madder wht I do!

Rhodon

This peom is great it had me on the end of my seat. One time ago i could say that was me. LOVELY . I feel like crying.

acid

this poem is perfect. I know how that feels.

jasmine

this poem was amazing. it reminded me of a relationship i was in. it truly touched me.

richard

this poem is very great. I believe you have real talent. you should become a poet. Also don't let life get you down there is always hope in a better day ( tomorrow). God bless and keep u

RAQUEL

THIS WAS VERY GOOD, WE AS WOMEN ARE VERY SENSITIVE CREATURES AND WE FALL IN LOVE SO QUICKLY. ONLY BECUASE WE HAVE A HUNGER FOR LOVE THAT WILL NEVER BE SATISFIED. GREAT POEM AND SO TRUE

Eric

I am sorry that you were fooled by a lust crazed individual who tricked your mind into loving him. it happens. people are selfish and greedy and most men only look for a warm body not a warm soul. sad but true. i hope you recover

Alexis

I feel the same way. Thanks for publishing this poem. I would like to know how I can enter my poems.

brittney

i was really touched by this poem because this recently happened to me, so thanks for writing this.

justin

great poem. it really touched me to my heart. loved how u had the convidenc to express your self after a hard time we all know how that is to go through

lenne

i loved it and so did my friends

Janine

I have also been unfortunate in feeling this way that you describe. I have felt this hurt. I think that you wrote the poem very well. You will find love and peace.

Robert

This Poem has really touched my heart for the Tramatic feelings I'm going through right now.

artencia

Hey yeah I really love this it's heart touching

Reminder

it reminds me of a past relation ship

brittany

i loved his poem it is just like my life and whati ent through this is like you wrote this just for me and my situation. may god bless you

Blongs2HIM

This poem really hits home for me. Thank you. I know now I'm not the only one that feels this way.

Cheryl

How many times have we fallen for the wrong guy or girl - then blame something or someone, cause the love is gone. Most of us are to scared to admit that what we felt was tainted love. This poem is a page in the lives of most people. 5 stars 4 u

jen

This is the perfect example of how I feel about the on I love

aaron

i know how you feel

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Corrupted Love

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