I have learned that sometimes you fall in love with people, who don't feel the same way about you. I have been in such a situation.
This poem was written for someone who I gave my trust, love and friendship to, only to have my heart broken, and my trust displaced. If you are ever in a similar situation, you know how it feels to be used.
As we lay there quiet
I was reminded of all the reasons why I lust you
Your smile,
and the way it teased at me seductively
Your laugh,
and the way it tempted me
Your eyes,
and the way they seem to hypnotize me
As we sat there silent
I was reminded of all the reasons why I love you
Your smile,
and the way it brings such life into me
Your laugh,
and the way it makes everything okay
Your eyes,
and the way they seem to read my thoughts
As we stand here now
I am reminded of all the reasons why I hate you
Your smile,
and the way it confuses me
Your laugh,
and the way it seems to mock me
Your eyes,
and the way they can look into mine and not feel a thing
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WELL I HAVE NoTHING TO SAY ABOUT THIS POEM EXCEPT it was great! im lookin forward to seeing more poetry written by you! !well done!
Taylor
I can relate so very well with this. well done
Michaela
I think this poem was so touching. It ended so perfectly. The way you ease through the poem and watch feelings and everything unfold. I will definately learn from it
Acadia
it reminds my of the fight of our hearts, and a simillair situation. we all must falter when finding true love that doesn't reflect back again.
DEEDEE
THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN IN A WAY THAT TOUCHED MY HEART. THIS POEM RELATES TO ME IN SUCH A WAY TEARS WANT TO COME OUT. WHEN I FINISHED READING THIS POEM I WAS REMINDED OF MY PAST THAT I TRIED TO FORGET AND I THANK THE AUTHOR OF THIS POEM FOR LETTING ME ABLE TO REMEMBER THE PAST THAT ITRIED SO HARD TO FORGET. REMEMBERING THE PAST MADE ME REALIZE THAT MY LOVE FOR THAT ONE SPECIAL PERSON HAS NOT FADED, BUT HAS GROWN. THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME REALIZE THAT.
jessica
your poem really touched me and reminds me of how sometimes i feel about my boifwen.
Bronwyn
This is by far one of the best poems i've read in a long time, i've been the exact situation and know just how she feels. 10/10 for this one!
launa
I broke off with my boyfriend of 4 yrs, he had 2 children from a previous marriage and so did I. He wasnt supposed to have anymore children, however, I got pregnant 2 yrs into out relationship and that changed everything. I totally feel your pain and have been apart from him for 2 months now. still I wonder if he ever really loved us or me for that matter, for I too look into his eyes and see and feel nothing.
suenos
I really like the peom, I can relate to it and can totally understand that burden of not knowing whats really going on and feeling like a fool, it is a great piece.
Sarah
This poem really made sense of what love is really like, In the beginning there was passion, truth, and love, but something triggers our mind, and we get a dose of reality.
larry
love and hate hard to believe you can feel both for a person. liked the poem . felt the loss.
Cheyenne
i cried when i read dis man holy
ELENI
I COULDNT HAVE SAID IT BETTER MYSELF. ABSOLUTELY PHENOMINAL
Cadi
I picked this poem out if spite but i really thought it was great so dont give up, dont loose faith give that poem to someone who will not regrate. but it was good so talk to you later ok even though i dont know who you are so anyways bye.
Lori
Excellent! Very well done.
Jennifer
excellent. it is unfair that we ever feel this way but perhaps it is the lesson we all must eventually learn. i hope true love finds you :)
Mandy
this poem touched me because i have been in this kind of situation one too many times. Its not hard to be deceived when it comes to matters of the heart.
Rebecca
You took the thoughts right out of my heart.
jared
Thanks for the poem, it really moved me.
cami
this poem is so good i know how you feel cause im going through the same thing right now GOOD JOB its real good
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