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This was written mainly to help me identify with what was bothering me after a breakup. Mainly, I just miss him so much. I was trying to be mature but I think I just broke down in the end.

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tia
that is so beautiful i wish i could write like that my fela has left and gone back to his home town and i miss him so much this has really helped me think thanx xx
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NICE POEM!
diana
this is poem is so awesome i love it.
becky
Well i just wanna say that i can relate and that the poem was very well done words and emotions everything put together. I have gone through this and still trying to deal with it and gettig over it i guess. I miss my curtis lol but I got to be strong right maybe a other time will come. Oh well ok good job on the poem and keep writing.

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Now That It's Gone

I never would have thought that
there'd be a you and me.
It wasn't plausible.
It wasn't possible.

But out of the star-crossed sky
fell an opportunity.
It was great.
It was special.
It was magic.

It made my life
such a blissful state of euphoria.
My eyes sparkled.
My soul danced.
My heart rejoiced.

And now that it's gone
I wish there was something in its place.
I want a new dream.
I want a new heart.
I want a new chance.

But mostly,
I'm receiving only loss.
I remember the happy times and think there'll be no more.
I remember little thoughts of you and sigh 'cause you're gone.
I remember my contented heart and sigh because now it's broken.

And now that you're gone,
I can't help but miss you.
For every where you used to smile an empty memory looms
of your soulful eyes
your shy smile
and your beautiful face.

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Shane
oh my . This poem brought tears to my eyes . Its So Beautifull and true, this feeling of pain will excape from you, it has for me once . but i still think and wonder what happened, and what i could have done to change it . but things in life happen for a reason, now i have someone and I'm going to try harder to let them know i love them and they mean so much and more to me, You learn from your Mistakes. then you can start over, with what u have learned. A Broken Heart just makes better choices to whom you'll give your heart to, but be wise with the choice, Love is powerful
Dreamer
Thats a realy great poem i liked it alot.
Kathy
Very honest words. I found the love of my life and because of my own stupidity drove him away. I've been looking for the words that expressed exactly the way I feel and these have come the closest. Thank you.
Joni
The exact scenario happened to me - so I can feel this poem deep in my heart.
sarah
your poem geniunly moved me.
Tabi
I love this poem. I miss my Bryan sooooo much and I don't think he is ever coming back! *sniff sniff*
Amanda
This is a beautiful poem, all the lines just flow together. it's so natural and full a of truth I lvoe it!
Lou
I miss my adam too he's gone and he won't be back this time :'(
Danie
You're poem is awesome, ::sniff:: make me miss my adam. :'(
chris
i really loved your peom, and i hope you keep wrighting
Amanda
i love my baby NUNO n miss him so very much..
Joni
I really liked this poem! It was very well written, and I could also identify with it. I once met a guy who I truly believed (and still believe to this day) was perfect for me. I never took the chance to tell him how I felt, because I figured he'd be there again tommorow, so I'd tell him then. I'm still trying to get over this, and this poem really said everything I was feeling. I really enjoyed it!
Adrienne
Very Good Poem!
Heather
I really enjoyed your poem it reminded me of my ex-boyfriend who was my friend at first and i never thought we would get together and we did, then we seperated after 3 years because we was havin to many problems and we wanted to keep friends so we decided to end our relationship.
nur
. . i miz my fairuz beri much
Amanda
I MISS MY GARY SO MUCH. :**(
Keith
this was a really touching poem. it is like real life. the same thing happened to me and I know how it fells
Alan
This really spoke aloud what I am feeling.
myriam
i cried when i got 2 da last verse its my story in a nutshell!
Jaman
This poem is very very emotionalistic....(If you understand what it means...)
ANGELICA
I THINK THIS IS A VERY SAD POEM.I REALLY LIKE IT BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF MY FRIEND MICHELLE THAT HAD JUST BROKE UP WITH HER BOYFRIEND ERASMO.
Kym
This poem said everything I'm feeling....
nikolina
I love it!
Zack
I thought it was a really nice poem and well written ..
Krista
I can definitely relate to this poem. I know how you feel girlfriend. Sometimes you can't mend a broken heart but you can heal it through time I hope. I am not in that stage yet, mine is still broken. I love your poem.
Melanie
That's exactly how I feel, but it was me who broke it up and nothing will ever be the same. I know the pain and this is a good expression of it!
Alisha
This poem is exactly what just happened to me i fell in love with someone whom i thought would never love me. but we started going out and we were in a deep love. but my parents didn't want us together and we were tired of being scared and worried so it had to end and i still can't beleive that after one year and 3 months this had to end! it was sooo beutiful.
nasseema
I fell in love with this poem as soon as I read it for the first time. I have also known the pain of losing someone dear to me and now all that remains are happy memories and a painful heart. I think that the poem encompasses all that a person could feel when he/she has lost someone, a lost love.
cynthia
that was tight i just broke up with my b/f last week so i can relate
Lisa
So emtional
Maja
I love this poem because it contains all this what Im going through right now. And it helps me so much. Thanks for it.
Leandra
Your poem touched in inside the tears from my eye fell. I felt your pain. Because I know how you feel
shyena
i like the poem a lot. i could definitely relate to what the author has felt. it's just really sad but i know there will come a time that the pain will just be worth nothing anymore for you learn to get up and be strong.

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