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About the Poem

I wrote this poem while I was trying to figure out what love is even supposed to be about. The poem goes on to explore the beginning through the end of a relationship, whether it be good or bad. But mine just turned out to be a broken heart, which in the end tore me apart.

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april

this poem is so true it is very good

carolina

I can relate to the poem and I can say that is so true. You'd think you know it by now.

vijay

this poem is awsome as it really touched my heart .

Monique

This poem was the exact way that I was feeling and I needed to know that someone else was feeling the same thing that I have went through. I wish that it wouldnt have happened to me but it did and im glad to see that Im not alone in this at all.

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Love's Pleasure And Pain

by Iccoldhart

I'm trying to figure out
what love is supposed to be about
In the beginning you're always so nice
But in the end, you're as cold as Ice

In the end, when you look in their eye's
That's when you realize all their lies
In the beginning you would never think
That they could be so mean in a simple blink

I told you once
I told you twice
that when you love you pay the price
You feel so empty
Cold and blue
So stressed out
And so confused

The one who made you so happy and glad
Is the same one who is making you sad and mad
When one tries to talk about wanting them to stay
The other just turns and walks away

When you smile
For a little while
you realize it's fake
You're just trying to hide your heartache
After you realize that love was a mistake

Once you realize they're gone
you automatically ask yourself what you did wrong
Your heart starts going insane
From all their pain
You ask yourself how you're gonna stay sane

Your heart keeps tearing
Because, you're the only one caring
You try not to care
So you try to glare
You try to get away,
and you try to convince yourself that you'll be okay.

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Laura

I loved ur poem very much and it's all so true

Amanda

This poem touched my heart in so many places. The person that wrote this poem, was like saying what I was feeling. It was awesome. This poet is very talented.

Nikhil

u were truly touching, love is just so cruel at times tht we forget its pleasure

Dani

I loved this poem. It reminded me so much of this guy I went out with. My heart is still broken and I feel as if I will never get over it.

Maags

This was excellent, true/honest, and I could relate it to the pain of being dumped after being loved. You are not alone my friend.

nobody

iccoldhart, wow that is the only word i can say, can't put my emotions into words. your poem was a great one. That is exactly how i feel. wow! Just don't give up on love like i have.

jacqueline

I love this poem! It says exactly how I feel at this moment.

Alexis

I really like this poem because decribes exactlly what I am going throught right now. I found out my feona was cheatinmg on me and now I am really mad sad and confused to what I am sapossed to do next.

ashton

i really liked this poem it halped me express my situation in words i couldnt i ts gret i loved it!GREAT

Kimberley

This poem is really nice. I love it. It is so true. It is exact to a "T" of how I feel and what is happening to me. Or has already happened

mayra

This is a really good poem. And everything you said in it, is true.

Michelle

I really enjoyed this poem, it is so real with what is going on in my life. I never thought I would ever find something that truly matched the way I feel. Thank you so much for your words.

channelle

loved it

emma

I loved it.

Erica

great poem

maria

i love this poem is so nice and sad at he same time.

tessa

this poem meant a lot for me, the words that came into my mind now are few. it is just GREAT!

Stacie

I really enjoyed readind this poem. I have to give this person their props!

Mary

I just love this poerm cuz it expresses all the things that I feel deep inside and that's true love's Pleasure and pain.

Erin

I needed to describe how much hate and tears love can bring, and I didn't have to look far. Thanx!

someone

wow this poem is how i feel with my lost love. sooo deep i love it. at least im not the only one who feels like this out there

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