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OK, I wrote this poem when I was feeling very down and out, I have lost so much in the year 1999 and I feel that I am still losing, so this poem is dealing with two of my problems.

Two Problems

I have two problems,
Only two;
One is depression, the other is you.
Or maybe my problem equals one;
But one or two, it weighs a ton.

So all in all, it's pretty bad;
All in all, it's kind of sad
To choose a road that I must take,
To make a decision, that has no faint.

I think I'll stay, and live miserably;
I think I'll pay, and keep living.

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bailey
I really like this poem. It really explains my life at this moment. I love this poem. It touched me. It is really hard now a days to find poems that you can relate to. But with this one I can totally relate.
puppy
its such a precise poem of a feeling dats hard to describe.
Hanna
You said "I think I'all pay, and keep living". It's so true. I rather pay the price of being with someone you love, even thou your miserable, instead of dieing because your not with the one you feel in love with at the beginning. I took that price. It hurts, but not as bad as dieing. I guess. I LOVED THE POEM, it fit the stage of my life, right now. Thank you for your words.
ROZANNE
GOSH YOUR POEM WAS REALLY GOOD. KEEP WRITING THESE WONDERFUL POEMS. GOD BLESS YOU!
laycee
hey that was a good poem, my problem is the same except my ex boyfriend who i went with for two years has another girlfriend but he still calls me and says i love you and i care for you so much . !and thats pretty messed up. so im confused and depressed.
Kaimalie
very good. i really loved your poem. it was great
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