OK, I wrote this poem when I was feeling very down and out, I have lost so much in the year 1999 and I feel that I am still losing, so this poem is dealing with two of my problems.
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You said "I think I'all pay, and keep living". It's so true. I rather pay the price of being with someone you love, even thou your miserable, instead of dieing because your not with the one you feel in love with at the beginning. I took that price. It hurts, but not as bad as dieing. I guess. I LOVED THE POEM, it fit the stage of my life, right now. Thank you for your words.
ROZANNE
GOSH YOUR POEM WAS REALLY GOOD. KEEP WRITING THESE WONDERFUL POEMS. GOD BLESS YOU!
laycee
hey that was a good poem, my problem is the same except my ex boyfriend who i went with for two years has another girlfriend but he still calls me and says i love you and i care for you so much . !and thats pretty messed up. so im confused and depressed.
Kaimalie
very good. i really loved your poem. it was great
Kacper
Nice poem, it touched my heart
Nancy
wow, Tina. you pull a powerful punch with your feelings. Very good although sad peom.
Latasha
This poem is one of the best that I have ever read. Keep up the good work
tina
loved that poem
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