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People don't always feel the same way about us, as we feel about them. It's not a crime, only human nature. We all know this of course, but we also know the hurt that comes when the feelings aren't shared ones. I do believe that forgiveness does help bring peace.

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trang
this poem touches me alot! well done
sally
This poem at this time in my life said what I needed and wanted to say but could not seem to find the words until now, but now let them be your words I say. Thank you
Latinagirl
That was the best deal i can ever imagin. Thank you so much.
jacqui
I just love the poem.

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Let's Make A Deal

You forgive me for liking you too much,
And I'll forgive you for not liking me enough.

You forgive me for missing you so,
And I'll forgive you for being so cold.

You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
And I'll forgive you for not hearing it.

You forgive me for playing your games,
And I'll forgive you for toying with my emotions.

You forgive me for finding you so attractive,
And I'll forgive you for not noticing.

You forgive me for raising you up so high,
And I'll forgive you for bringing me down so low.

You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
And I'll forgive you for avoiding me.

You forgive me for being so pathetic,
And I'll forgive you for taking advantage of it.

You forgive me for not being able to let go,
And I'll forgive you for never having latched on.

You forgive me for having hopes and dreams,
And I'll forgive you for crushing them.

Forgiveness brings inner peace.
Do we have a deal?

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Valerie
This poem was beatiful. I am sorry to admit that I was the one that needed to be forgived. The one that hurt him so many times. The one that ignored his love and his kindness. But he never gave up on me. After 15 years 2 marriages (his & mine) 2 children and a lifetime of lost memorie's he has learned to forgive me and I have learned to open up to his love. Being loved unconditionally is the most beatiful love of all. I thank-you for finding the words that describe how I felt all these years. I'm sory for hurting you my love. please forgive me?
Brenda
Thank you ~ you've captured my thoughts precisely!
Briana
As soon as I read this poem, I started crying because I can relate to every thing in this poem. I break down into tears and fall apart every single day of my life because the love of my life doesn't even care about me.
emmy
it is really shows how am I feel towards my beloved IT IS REALLY AMAZING
Jade
Once done with this poem i was crying. its so sad but does happen to people. its frustrating giving someone your heart and all they do with it is take it forgranted
mari
wow this poem made me cry really hard. i love your poem, great work
jodi
i absolutly loved this!
Christina
Very Ironic, touching, real. So sad when I read this poem.
Dio Marie
OH, THIS ONE IS EXCELLENT!
Bobbie
I love it! I cry when i read it.
JASON
I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM. THE AUTHOR OF THIS POEM MUST HAVE WRITEN THIS AT THE TIME THAT SHE WOULD HAVE DONE ANYTHING AND HE TOOK ADVANTAGE OF IT.
Crystal
This really hits home. Just getting over a man walking out of my life after 4 kids & 11 years. Thanks for writing it. makes me feel better :)
Lisa
I swear this poem was written especially for me and my past relationships. :)
Kayleen
This poem really speaks to me and basically describes what I am going through in a current situation. Very well written.
Dee
I truley felt this piece! There's such meaning in it and i absolutely LOVE IT!
sharon
can i just say, i read ur poem and the tears just fell. its amazing and really gets the point across,, when u read it u can feel pain, hurt etc. well done keep the emotion and feelings and you will be a top writer. Sharon xx
Brandy
I loved your poem, it made me cry for hours. I was seeing someone on and off for ten years and one day he told me he had no feelings towards me, i had no idea. i was crushed but your poem has brought light to my sadness so much that i am going to write it down and give it to him. it's everything i wanted to say but couldnt figure out how to say it . thank you
kerry
this poem has just brought tears to my eyes ive recently spilt with my husband and its exactly how i feel and how it was.
leon
its a great poem, hits the spot! thats the problem! its to good!
sanam
by the time i was finished with this poem i was dreched in tiers cuz u know how exactly how most of us lover feel but i still can't forgive him or make a deal like this to him my god help me forgive him soon . keep up the good work!
Lisa
I loved this poem, because I feel I'm in that situation and state of mind right now
chabelys
this poem is grate it is soo deep and it talks a lot to me cauz im going throut that rite now. and letting go is the best thing we can do
Jasmine
I love this poem and I was trying to tell my ex this exact thing today but couldn't find the words and I'll be darn they are all in a poem! Excellent job! I can't wait to read more of where that came from.
k
love it and i know how you feel?
gypsy
This poem is so very real, it touches all the bases of most typical relationships. You should be a travel agent for Guilt Trips.
veejay
great! really great! sO tOuching and the emOtiOn which the authOr is trying tO cOnvey is very transparent! lOve it!
julie
That is an amazing poem. i am right there with you.
L
I've been there. you captured my side of it perfectly.
Sabra
This poem really touched my heart because it makes me think of some of the things that i have gone through when it comes to loving someone. I recently realized that people say what they do not feel sometimes. Learning that the hard way really sux. Well ur a great poet, keep up the good work and keep writing from ur heart. Sabra
Kelsey
OH my gosh. This is amazing. Someone once told me the reason poetry is so great is because when you read something that is happening to you, you know someone else has gone through it, and they lived. This poem is just. . . amazing.
Pia
Great!
dan
i really like the idea of ur poem wouldnt it b so easy to say lets just make a deal!
Sara
I love this poem its really digs down into alot of peoples feeling that they dont know how to put into words this poem is brillent
Dejan
great. just great. forgiveing is wath we need. not blameing them for not likeing us.
Mc
this poem is just so good. it embodies almost exactly the way that i feel right now. good job Diane on making this p0em! you really set a great example for all teenagers like me!
T
thats nice 10/10
Lindsey
The instint i finished reading this poem i thought about my friend dillon and i began to cry like ive never cried before and i thank you for that because now i can let go and FORGIVE him.
Jennifer
I think the poem is DEEP. It reminds me of all of the the things I've felt in the past . I love how brutally real it is!
Aimee
wow. just wow. it captures the exact feelings that i have experienced. absaloutly speechless n truly truly touched.
Nessa
It's odd how words written by someone else can relate to so many other people by so much. It's beautiful, what more can i say?
TASH
This pome i so lovely it is what is happening to me at the moment n i can see it all in that pome
tiff
i love that poem. its beautiful you are a great author! your poem made me cry. cause thats exactly what is happening to me right now
janet
Simplistic, yet, profound.
mita
this is so true. it clearly portrays the bitter truth and pain of a broken heart.
xangel
Your poem is how my heart feels thank you so much for putting thoes feeling into words
Danny
Words so simply chosen yet so very significant.
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