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Sometime in everyone's life, they feel betrayed and all alone, like everything is a lie. You are trapped in a world of anger and rage and you can only see red through your eyes. No one seem to see when you are going through this time, or understand why.
But it is times like these that God takes you in His arms and tames your wild mind and assures you, you are never alone.
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montse
this rocks
eela
this poem is really touching and inspires you to keep going and keep believing if you are really going through hell
mandy z
(CLAP,CLAP,CLAP,CLAP)Beautifull. I must say you are talented and bleesed. i've been there. i just hope you knew how to let it go,and move on. i wish you a life of sweet pleasure,kindness. and love much success in all you do. for some women . one hit is to many & for others . too many is never enough. its crazy . right
Lamis
I absolutely loved your poem. Maybe it's because emotions are so true and sincere. I loved the poem very much especially,the second stanza. I find the sequence of emotions in it,so powerful and absolutely true. First, loneliness,fear,screaming for help,tearful cries. This logic sequence generates a sense of reality in the reader. As a whole,the poem is very beautiful and very expressive and that is the reason I find it amazing,and so will everybody who reads it. Well done:)
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If These Walls Could Talk |
| by Christelle Duvenage |
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If these walls could talk, you'd know my body is dead, my mind has been taken over, that's why I am so scared, I can't control it, anger is making me blind, I've been left here on my own chained to a hate of some kind. If these walls could talk. If these walls could talk, you'd know about my fears, about all those nights I screamed for help, about all my fallen tears. You'd know about the demons haunting me at night, you'd be able to help me keep my fire alight, if these walls could talk. If these walls could talk they would say that it's all right, God sends His angels to look over me at night. They'd encourage me, say though I am alone it doesn't mean I‘m on my own. He watches me, from above and showers me with all His love, if only these walls could talk. |
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hayley
it sounds just exactly what happen to me when i went through depressionand now i just want to say it was really good
maria
really good
jho
The poem really touched the innermost part of me. It was like reading my own story. Each line has an impact to me that I almost burst into tears. Somehow, the author and I have felt the same emotion. Congratz! The poem was great!
marcie
wow that was really touching that was really good Chriselle keep up the good work i hope to see more of your poems
Dener
I loved it Sounds like my life.
Hannah
Yay!Im so glad Im not the only one who realizes that even after being beaten and cursed, we are not alone. ^_^ Ur poem really made me happy.
Emily
This is a gorgeous poem and sincerely touched me. Thank you very much for writing such a profound piece.
Lucy
OMG I LOVE IT! it just inspired me to write a poem =]
J
The peom was very good -- Made me think keep up the good work
Ellie
Wow. All I can say is wow. You are truly gifted. I loved it, I connected to it. It made me think of my dead cousin. I started crying. Thank you, for saying what so many of us cannot.
Amber
Thus poems awsume but sad
verity
christelle this poem u wrote just describes everything im going through right now in my life. the pressure my family is putting on me. and i have just sent this to someone i my family who was close to me but now does not want to hear a word from me!thank u. love ya verity
suzanna
its a lovely poem n so touchy. good!
Christina
Loved your poem!
Jessica
i just loved this poem it was like you were writing it to me!
mustafa
thanks for this poem, it was song of my heart
CRYSTAL
I THINK THIS POEM IS HELPFUL TO THOSE WHO ARE HAVING TROUBLE AT HOME
jenny
thhis poem is so nice i like its meaning ii wish hat walls could talk to cause sometimes ppl dont even understand y i do things and man i just wish therer was an antidote
Sylver
This Poem is soo great. It is sooo true. i really loved it
tammy
after fighting depression and anxiety for years, I've finally been diagnosed with bipolar. this poem was awesome! it brought tears to my eyes. it expressed how i feel much of the time but can't explain to others. so i'm sending it to my family in hopes they will understand my Darkness and pain at times. thank you so much for those words.
Bay
wow. U have talent my friend. This made me realize that everyone has molments of sadness and lonleiness. Good job.
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