Love plays many factors in our life. Yet every time we take a chance something comes along and messes things up. We really don't focus on the sad side, or give recognition to our tears. Without them we would not be able to move forward, or love again.
Watch as this tear falls into empty space
See it fall into life's nameless place
Can you see the sparkle as it catches the light
That sparkle once was happiness that is no longer in sight
As it falls watch it, its color has changed
From blue to bright red, it has a wide range
There it goes all alone, it continues to fall
With it, it takes the emotion, the emotion of all
Wait, can you hear it? A sob has broke free
Has shook the lungs cold, but yet it continues to be
Here it comes, a force has been built between the eye
A wall of shear water, it's now time to cry
A shudder, a scream, darkness envelops your soul
The darkness of the night has taken its toll
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Beautifully constructed. As a severe pain sufferer, it touches my heart.
shannon
i think that this poem is, a very very good poem. very well thought of and just realy good
Raven
I really liked this Poem it almost brought tears to my eyes.
Amber
I like this poem. My boyfriends dad beats him and I have tried to help him. I've gotten him into shelters to stay away from his dad but his dad finds out where he is and makes him go home. I lay at night in my bed and I cry because of all the pain I have in my life. Thank you for showing this poem it is basically how I feel right now. Amber
mira
i like so much to read poems written by people . but really it was a nice poem. i like it so much. im not interested in voting but coz i like it. im voting . wish that u will write one special like that.
damian
I liked it it is how i feel the pain the darkness every thing this poem saved my life
Dori
HEY YOU JUST DESCRIBED MY EVER LATING NIGHTS. WELL AT LEAST NOW YOU KNOW SOMEONE ELSE IS GOING WHAT YOUR GOING THROUGH. NOW YOU JUST HAVE TO MAKE ONE THAT SHALL TELL US WHAT ARE WE TO DO.
Linda
This is such a nice poem! It touches my heart deeply. It made me cry.
Claire
I loved it. As I was reading it, it touched me. I loved the poem. Yeah, it's time to cry.
Bill
you poem was so touching. you have a great talent. keep up the good work!
nobody
hey sweett, this is a great poem. you have very deep and very powerful emotions! but still in the darkness of everything there still is hope, just sometimes it's hard to see.
Daisy
I LOve this is touch me
megan
Nice Poem! :)
ashur
Omg this is a truely amazing poem. its goes well with what my life used to be like. its truely amazing. and really special!
otravitza
You have my vote! It's a great poem. Very touching
tracy
This poem is amazing. The description is exactly how I feel. You are an amazing poet!
stephanie
I think this poem tells everything you feel when you're going through depression. It is very well-written. It is so beautiful. -Stephanie Brooks
Rebekah
This poem is so true and it touched me in the heart where there's some empty space.
donyele
this poem i can relate too in many ways. keep up the good work.
Ashley
Wow, this was a great poem. I like the style, how the words were used ect.
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