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I wrote this poem, after meeting someone to whom I felt a strong connection. The words "soul mate" didn't occur to me right away. If we are soul mates... He doesn't recognize me as such. This was written to try to explain to myself and him what I am feeling and the confusion and frustration it has left in my mind.
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lavanya
Beautiful is th word for this.
todd
very capturing and deep poe. love it!
Mikayla
This poem really touched me, why because i feel that same kind of love, lost yet knowing of the past slowly slipping into darkness. i know how sweet maddness feels
Ashlee
It's a beautiful piece, I enjoyed it. It brought tears to my eyes to see the magic I felt, for I felt as if someone knew how deep down, inside this broken heart really feels. It made me happy, and I took minutes after reading it, thinking about it, wondering if it would ever happen again. I've seen pieces of work like this, just flow from the heart and soul, but yet it is wonderfully put together, making a beautiful portrait for everyone else to see, and take in. Some can take a look at it and judge it as another poem, but when I saw it, I voted it as the most amazing yet. So, Thank you. For sharing this outstanding piece with everyone else, including me. 'Tis very breath taking.
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Lost Souls |
| by Sweet Madness |
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In this heartless creation It is hard to understand Why some souls choose to wander Forgetting Yet I am lost without wandering My love is a ghost Ancient - with wisdom Vital - with tears Not able to move on Unable to let go It's hard to remember a love You don't recognize in this life Yet the memory is without thought Agony - without knowledge This love - is without mercy Passing through eternity Life to the next Forever searching In a labyrinth of whispers For a blissful love Lost Longing for the touch I'll sense when I feel Whispering to my heart Comforting this stoned soul Our love burns within me But I am lost in the shadows This entity of dreams Forever killing me I believe this love is eternal The flame will not relinquish Forever circling me The very matter of my existence But for now I simply breath Awaiting your rescue Music - bonding our souls Pain - stirring the memories While silence shouts out this melody |
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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Sumaiya
Your poem was SOOO nice and touching. i know how u feel. i also met someone who i feel is my soul mate, but he doesn't seem to understand why i am so interested in him.
Delirium
Beautiful!
Rafe
You don't know how close to my heart the feelings and emotions of the poem hits. I am going through things in my life, and today, especially, I feel like I'm losing my soulmate. Thank you for sharing your story.
Garvan
A very beautiful poem indeed! It contains a wealth of depth, and yet is so simple and free from pretension.
another
I think that your poem is very good. I'm to give this poem to my husband and hope that he has a change in heart. Because right now we are going through somethings. So Pray for me and I hope your poem wins. Good Luck!
Ashley
I loved this poem. It's very melodic and well-crafted. I can totally relate to it.
cammy
very good poem. i feel the same way at the moment.someone that i thaught was my soulmate turned out to be someone i didnt really even know.a very cold hearted guy
Dawn
The poem is beautiful, and it surprised me by reflecting a lot of feelings that I have experienced.
MICHELLE
ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM! WAS DEEPLY MOVED AND REMINDED OF "OLD POETRY" THE VOICE OF THESE WORDS SPEAKS. THANKS FOR PUTTING IT OUT THERE.
E.B.
It is a really good poem. That I can relate to anyways.
Travis
Fantastic piece that is very insightful and emotionally charged
Amanda
Simplify script which annotates the contradiction state of mind vividly and incisively.
Anthony
I'm there. My soul is definitely lost.
Alex
I SEE thiS POem whEn I LooK In The Mirror
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