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This poem is about the thoughts that run through a mind when seeing the one you love with someone else.
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anna
I love this peom is very good!
Brianna
Jodie, This was a reeally touching poem. You express hurt in it. That he was with her and not you. Well if he was stupid enough to give you up then he is not worth your love or tears. I hope you find the strength to be able to move on. The only person worth crying for won't make you cry. -Brianna
nicky
thankyou.
Tamara
nice song =),i have few mine and i usualy write when im sad. probably you too, best wishes Tamara
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I Saw You |
| by Jodie Scheitel |
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I saw you last night With a girl In your car. Did you see me? I wonder Did you see? She was beautiful - Long, straight blonde hair Thin, beautiful. As I stared into your car, Your eyes fixed on her, I prayed. I prayed God would make a switch - Replace her with me. Did you see me? I wonder, Did you see? I knew, though, That God Would not answer that prayer. I was not alone. I wished I was; I wished he would go away. Did you see me? I wonder Did you see? As the light turned green I took another look; I laughed uneasily. I wished again For God to make a switch; To replace her with me. Did you see me? I wonder Did you see? I wished you would look at me The way you looked at her; I wished you still loved me. I wished you would touch me The way you touched her; I wished you still loved me. Did you see me? I wonder Did you see? I know now - I guess I've always known; It's over. I'll never feel your love; I'll never feel your touch; I'll never hold you in my arms The way I want to so much. So, again I wonder As I sit here all alone, Did you see me? I wonder Did you see? |
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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
alejandra
i love this poem it almost made me cry i can realate 2 this
nisa
i love this poem so much i've never been through a situation like dat but i can feel it. the poem is so deep. i almost cried
razja
This poem really touched my heart.
melissa
I cried too!
Adrin
this said thing happen to me so i know what she's thanking
John
Beautiful poem. I just wish it wasn't about me. You're in a better place now Jodie, and we know that He will never let you go. May God bless you. In the name of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Spirit. Amem.
Raechel
OMG! this is exactly what im going through! But sometimes you need to let go of that person. Its gunna take me such a long time to get over him but this is exactly how i feel! it gave me goose bumps when i read it
Yvette
I loved this poem, because it seemed so intrestding. It made me feel sad yet happy.
Shashi
Your poem is so close to my heart. I wonder if you too faced the same scennarion as me. Keep writing. ure work is fantastic. above all its so touching
Tim
I felt every word. it was beatiful, Thank you
siti
i love ur poem.
TRENIECE
JUDIE THAT POEM WAS TOUCHING I KNOW WHO YOU MUST FEEL. YOU TRUELY HAVE A GIFT AND I HOPE YOU GO SOMEWHERE FAR WITH IT. GOOD LUCK
KRYSTAL
i think this was a great poems. it made me remember when i cought my ex-boyfriend now with a girl. it just made me wonder if he thought about me at that time at all
Hailey
I think that this poem was very meaningful and also reminds me alot of my own personal life.
Laura
Great poem! I have a wonderful boyfriend right now, but reading the poem made me realize how hurt I'd be if I lost him! I've been through an expirience like that before, it was very hard to go through, but girls, you can go on! Give yourself some time and patience and the right guy will come to you, as mine did! Good luck to all you single ladies out there!
ashley
this is so sweet it touched my heart.
alyssa
i love this poem! i know what she is going therw
amy
hey great poem..i know how you feel..i thought i was like in love with this kid and we were gonna go out..then one of my good friends went behind my back and went out with him, i thought i was gonna die i when saw them together,i would have to hold my tears in.
Trina
This is a really good poem, i liked very much. I just wanted to tell you it really hit home. What you just wrote about is how i feel about this guy that used to be a close friend. thanx for the poem. i've been looking for a poem like this for awhile.(about how i feel, maybe i'll get the courage to forward it to him.
Lyndsey
I cried.
Brian
It's was great! and it somthing to relate to! it makes me feel that i'm not allown!
Stacie
I think you poem is kool. I really like it .
Misty
I KNOW WHAT THAT FILLS BECAUSE THAT HAPEND TO ME TOO. BUT I WAS NOT THE ONE TO SEE HIM IT WAS MY BEST FRIEND AND WHWN SHE TOULD ME I WANTED TO DIE.} I CALLED HIM THAT DAY LATE AT NIGHT AND ASKED HIM IS SHE YOUR GIRLFRIEND NOW AND HE SAID YES I AM SORRY BUT I MUST GO ON. I DID NOT KNOW I LOVED HIM VERY MUCH AFTER ALL HE DID TO ME
Cindy
very touching poem. I think it goes with all the girls out there, who are afraid of things like seeing their ex boyfriend with another girl. This poem is really good.
dave
i juat liked the poem
Lorraine
wow this poem had an inpact on my very soul.you can feel the pain.
heather
i love this poem .. i have been thorugh the same thing i know how this person feels!
tiffany
your poem almost brought tears to my eyes that was very deep i feel the same way u do..but how do you get over something like that verytime i see him with her i feel like i wanna hide from the world..the truth is i really regret i let him go..and now he hates me..we'll anyway enough about my problems i love this poem
Carolyn
This poem was by my sister and I hope that you all enjoy reading it what ever you have tosay about it. Thankyou
Your
Super! Simply super! You touch the essence of sadness and romantic love.
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