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We find that at times guys seem to think more about machines than they do about us, and this leaves us thinking about where we should go from here...

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nadine
this poem really touched my heart , it is very beautiful.
Ashley
GREAT WORK I CAN REALLY RELATE 2 THIS POEM I DATED A GUY 4 3 YEARS AND HE TREATED IS VIDEO GAME BETTER THAN ME SO I KNOW HOW IT FEELS
Robin
very nice
Rodienne
i do love this poem a lot. It is very sad i mean cause actually i am feeling like this right now. its like sometimes you don't even know were you're standing because the people you love are gone heh good job keep it up :)

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Alone

A star hits and fades
As love soon does in my heart
Another then another
I toss them aside
They go back to their computers and video games
I find that I'm always second to a machine
They buzz and whiz and swirl
They don't give the love that I do or can
I am still alone with that urge to kill the machine

Let it stop and have time for them to know me
And me know them
I am still here
All alone
No one to love
No one to love me the way that I love in return
Spend a lifetime to compete with a machine
Spend a lifetime with ones who don't love me

I think that I'd rather just be alone

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Arbria
I realy think this peom touched me! very much this writer is very talented! i realy think never give up you'r dream what ever it is it realy touched me! god looks on each and every one of us and things slow us down feeling like ur lost but thier's a day that lives in you! that makes it through the rain! Love Arbria
Mickle
Please be kind enough to realize that not all of us do think more about our machines than people.
sandeep
imagination brings in creation. truths come out in such expressions
linda
this poem really hit to home.its so true,ty
Pat
I relate VERY well to this poem. It seemed that the poet was talking directly to me.

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