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About the Poem

This is my first attempt at writing in 7 years. A very special girl, Tiffany, gave me this gift back. She is a friend (or is she more) and it is the typical situation of crossing that line, and who is hurt in the process. No one has ever invoked such emotion in me before and I just had to release through writing.

Forbidden

Forbidden pleasures
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels

Can that line be crossed
What could we truly be
And at what cost
Do you see what I see
I know there is more there
Waiting to be found
Can you feel how much I care
I feel like I'm being drowned
If you knew the amount of desire
That I feel for you
My burning fire
That wants one to become two

Forbidden pleasures
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Rick
My brother Todd Fulton lost his life on 2/24/2007. This vote is in his memory.
Marge
I cried because it simply and beautifully details some of my deepest feelings! Very good!
Rita
This is such a beautiful poem.
Jane
THIS IS AN AWESOME POEM. I GIVE IT a MILLION!
Sherry
Very wonderfully said. I am sure there are very many you were in that same situation. to be close in with someone in friendship. and wondering if you should cross the line.
eddie
This is very deep. Ifeel this way about a girl. But i dont want to ruin our friendship.
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