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I wrote this poem after I made a terrible mistake. I drank a little too much one night and I tried to make more out of a friendship with one of my best guy friends. Things happened and now he cannot talk to me. I can no longer apologize, for it is not doing any good, and I was at a loss for words to what to say to him. So, I wrote this poem

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chloe
OMG that was very touching i just loved it ashlie u are a very confident person about friendship matters. i say once again VERY TOUCHING POEM.
Lauratta
that was extreemley touching
Jeanell
Gurl i love your poem this is so sweet ima read dis 2 my man we mite get bac 2getha!
Melissa
this is a sweet but sad poem it touched my heart

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The Mistake You Cannot Forget

You say you cannot forget
And you aren't ready to forgive
But I need your friendship
More than you'll even know
I need you there to live

Without you by my side today
Life's been going, oh so slow
I miss your calls
Our endless talks
The places we would go

You can't even bear to look at me,
And I know my mistake
For because of one night,
And a few thoughtless actions,
When you saw me you ran and hid

I know we cannot take it back
As much as we would like to
But we could forget
And start all over
Just friends, that's me and you

If time is what you need,
Then I guess that's what you'll get
But I need you there for me soon,
My friend,
I hope you will forget.

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Maria
I really liked ur poem. i think is something we all would like to say but sometimes it's hard. Thanxs now i feel brave in case i eva wanna do it.
az
omg love it again can u send it 2 me plzzz.
Kayla
Hey,I really felt your poem. I made a mistake like that,but I was upset with my B/f cause he told me he love this other girl,But I loved your poem,It made me look at my mistake different.
jessica
this is beautiful
Diana
This poem says everything that I've been trying to say to my ex boyfriend for months now but I didnt know how to say it. He still hasn't forgiven me but it's getting a little bit better.
Jessica
cause i too have been in that position
briana
This poem is so true, but people need to forgive and forget they are hurt that may be true but you need people to be there with you to help. Sometimes it may be that person you need to spend time with.
stephanie
i think that is a great poem
ian
yeah! i like the poem actualy its happend to me
lisa
wow, that touched me so much. Im going through almost the same thing right now. Except this guy already knows I have feelings for him, just didn't know how strong they were until i got really drunk, and was crying that i needed to see him. now he has made himself more distant from me. I miss his phone calls, everything she misses.
meag
i love this it is sweet
Anna
I loved it. it was sweet and true to my life right now
April
This poem is really good. I am going to print it off and give a copy to my boyfriend. You are a really good writer.
xXxrachaelxXx
i loved the poem. it described a night i had last year. it was a mistake and it took alot of time to get over, but now we are still the best of friends. thank you x
Chelsey
Your poem makes really great sence. I just got out of a serois relationship and thats excatly how im feeling. Im going to print this off and give it to him. And who knoes maybe it will work!
Delroy
very good
Jessica
This poem was sad and I cried and I know a 15yr girl cries at poems it werid I love poems because it tells how the other person is feeling.
baowy
i love this poem. its kool
La Sad Eyes
I think this poem is great cuz you do misttakes and you want to take it back but you can't. I like this poem alot
Yvonne
These poeoms are great. They help to express your feelings in so many ways. They speak for you when u just can't find the words to do so.
yhan'z
i like this poem!it's related on what happened between me and my friend,it touch my heart when i read this,!and then i start remembering my past days with him. it's hard for me to forget one true friend.
ricketta
I really can relate to you
Rebecca
Well i like this poem alot cause its what happened to me and my ex damien he cheated on me but the thing in the poem dat catch my eye was the bit where it sed you ran and hide dats what happened i saw him but i was so hurt i ran off and hid but it is over between us and it always will bei hope he has learned never to cheat on a gurl probably not lol xXxXxX but well done to eva wrote dis
Melly
awsome! seriously! it touched me. I can compeletly relate. In two ways. I am glad i ran into this i atleast know how to use it now. I should talk to you about this more. hit me up. please and thanx.
Febriani
Your poem is my feeling. It's a good Poem. Tks for your inspirations. I can tell my friend what i felt now.
Sapphire
i really liked this poem it really touched me and whoever wrote it your a great writer!
caleb
well i might be the only guy to comment on this page but i know what your talking about, ive had the same kinda thing happen to me and its the worst feeling in the world
Muna
I like this poem it reminds me of when i let my friend down and caused her pain in a way i didnt mean to but i guess u cant redo the past all u can do is live the present . this poem really touched and Ashlie i just want to say ur a good poet and don't let anyone tell u ur not thnx
TERESA
i really liked this poem
bj
wow this poem is really great. it really spoke to me.
Delrae
This is a great poem for us young people
TERESA
i liked this one a lot cause it almost happen to me
tiffany
THE THING THAT YOU ARE THE GOOD AT IS THIS. YOU ARE A VERY GOOD POEM WRITER. THAT IS ALL THANK YOU . YOU R EXALANT BYE TIFFANY
Rachel
Hey i love this is is sooooo awesome it reminds me of so much of my life thats why i love it hey thatnks for putting it on this site
Roxan
Some fool people just let the friendship end and contenue for the love they want without knowing if they win or they will be accept. but dont blame your heart, be happy,. atleast you try to be true with what you are fell.
princess
I really like this poem and it is the truth.
rachel
i love this poem it reminds me of the situation im in right now with my best friend! i just love it!
randelle
when i read this poem i thought of a friend that did something with my boy friend and she should have gave me this poem cause i would have forgaven her. MABY but this poem is so good.
ashley
it was a terrific poem
melia
I loved the poem, It touched on things that i'm going through now. GREAT POEM
pepper
that is a really good poem because of that poem me and my x-boyfriend are talking again and we are going to star over as friends and see how thangs go so thank you for making that poem. Yours Truly Pepper Akerman P. s that is a realy good poem i hope i read more of your poems.
fark
that wz great!i liked it v much,cz the same i wantd to say 2 one of my friend. THANK YOU!
calvilena
this is the best poem ever! HOLLA AT YO GURL
Farik
Exelent!
tammy
THIS WAS A GRATE POEM
Tiffany
i really liked the poem it really said some true things about friends. because their are some friends that you wish that you could have back again and maybe you never know one day you two may become best of friends again. thanks: Tiffanyt Dollarhide/Swearengin
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