I wrote this poem about a girl who is my best friend. We have never had any romantic experiences, but through the years I've known her, I've fallen madly in love with her. She kind of knows this, but I don't know how she feels about it.
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verry good and well wrote. also hit home with me =) never give up on the ones you love so true and dear and youll never have any regrets.
Edwin
finger-licking good. This is the one poem i can relate to, you've earned my respect.
David
I too have a friend called Jackie and felt touched by the sentiment in the poem. The poem captured the feeling of frustration that you can experience in close freindship, particularly when it is someone that perhaps you can never really be with because of other obligations in your life. I found comfort in the words
willy
wow this is true love
Jacky
well this poem was pretty good i liked it because it had my name on it and lot of my friends send it to me and it made me feel really special
erick
itis one of the best poems i have read so far. keep it up///
Jon
Jaqueline. I wrote the poem to express outloud the problems that i was having with my emotions at the time. I was at a major stage in my life and i wanted this girl to move into the next stage with me. Sadly we discussed our feelings, and we are no longer friends. I dont want that to discourage those of you out there that have read this poem and find solace in its words. Express yourself. If there's one thing that i can tell anyone who reads or has read my poem, it is that you only have one life to live. It sounds cliche and is completely over used, but there is a magical truth to it. Remember that no matter what you do in this life, enjoy it. Its better to have tried, than to look back many years from now and say, I wish that i had. Thank you all for taking the time to read my poem and i appreciate all of your comments.
ronni
this poem was just the thing i needed to break the ice with my beat male freind i've always had feelings for him but i didnt know how to tell him thank you for the poem
Jamie
I cant believe that I found this poem. Jon if you read this I think that it is beautiful. You always were talented, and to think that you were so young when you wrote it. I miss You, and can't find you. so I'm hoping that you will see this. If you do, know that I am thinking of you and always will. I hope to see you again some day.
catia
this is cute! it is pretty and it sounds really love! i liked!=D
justine
when read your poem i felt as if i was going to cry. i wish i was Jacki so i could hold close and keep you safe. When i read that poem it was unbelievable b-cus im feeling the same way about my bestfriend Raymond.
vince
wow, this poem is exactly what is happening in my life. Her name is jaqueline (aka jackie) and we were best of friends, then i fell madly inlove with her, and she was scared and got mad, and ignored me for days.
Marissa
This poem made alot of sence to me, mabey because I know how it feels to fall in love with a friend.
jackie
I thought you poem speck from your heart. I loved it.
wer
excellent
Marty
I just wanted to add my praise to the others you so rightly deserve. This poem made me confront my feelings thanx.
Jacqueline
Dear Mr Macomber Your poem is very interesting and it has got a good end to it. May I ask you why this question which is why did you named that poem Jackie. Myself was very touched by your poem but I think you did it for someone your perhaps had some kind of love for. It is very nice to have a poem that name just has my name. Myself came across it by mistake and I was very surprise to found your poem on the internet. May I ask you why did you choose to write such poem. The words you have used is very excellent. Yours sincerely Jacqueline
Jon
Thank you all for the great comments you have made toward my poem. thank you all once again
Elizabeth
This poem reminds of how much I am in Love with one of my best friends.
Amanda
Great poem. It says a lot, and many things I wish I could say to that someone, but just can not. Top poem for me.
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