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This poem expresses my feelings towards a really good friend that I am terribly in love with. She enjoys the beach, and we have spent time together talking and walking, watching the magnificent mass of water. I wrote this poem thinking of the future, in the hopes that one day we will end up spending our lives together on the water's edge.

The Knowing Sea

The tide comes in, and moves back out
Like your chest rising and falling
To the melodic rhythm of your life

In the mist of the sea's dew
I see the future of our understanding love
Two young friends discovering the truth

Sand and shells shift underneath
Realizing the changes that have taken place
I know now . . . where my heart belongs

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
leann
hey i love the poem and i can really relate to it because i fell in love with my best friend. =)
Desiree
i think your poem is so full of emotions. its so touching. why dont you tell her that you love her. because i can see your tearing yourself apart over her and truthfully i know how it feels
Michelle
beautifly said. what i was looking to say but couldnt find the right words. thank you.
alishia
It's nice.
Matthias
This poem was soft, warm, and comforting. much, I presume, as her breath must be. I am telling people about this one. 10 out of 10.
Ariana
I liked it a lot! I hope you and her will live happily ever after!
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