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This poem expresses my feelings towards a really good friend that I am terribly in love with. She enjoys the beach, and we have spent time together talking and walking, watching the magnificent mass of water. I wrote this poem thinking of the future, in the hopes that one day we will end up spending our lives together on the water's edge.

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leann
hey i love the poem and i can really relate to it because i fell in love with my best friend. =)
Desiree
i think your poem is so full of emotions. its so touching. why dont you tell her that you love her. because i can see your tearing yourself apart over her and truthfully i know how it feels
Michelle
beautifly said. what i was looking to say but couldnt find the right words. thank you.
alishia
It's nice.

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The Knowing Sea

The tide comes in, and moves back out
Like your chest rising and falling
To the melodic rhythm of your life

In the mist of the sea's dew
I see the future of our understanding love
Two young friends discovering the truth

Sand and shells shift underneath
Realizing the changes that have taken place
I know now . . . where my heart belongs

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Matthias
This poem was soft, warm, and comforting. much, I presume, as her breath must be. I am telling people about this one. 10 out of 10.
Ariana
I liked it a lot! I hope you and her will live happily ever after!
stephanie
I thought your poem was fantastic. I love the sea and it speaks to me. You found the words I have been searching for. Way to go!
heather
short and sweet. straight to the point
ellie
i love this poem because it reminds me of a friendship i once had but then lost because of a stupid arguement i had and we couldn't resolve it! he was a big loss in my life when our friendship ended
regie
wow! the poem was so expressive. i am a poem lover also. but when i read this poem it really touch me so much. i remember of something. my someone special
Rose
After I read this poem i just thought of my boyfriend and I. We were best friends and I just started to realize that I wanted to be more than his friend. I feel in love with him a long time ago and we just recently started dating.
cherryl
wow! i love it. it speaks of true love!
Angel
very well spoken
angela
i loved your pome it was great it really helpped me with what I'm going through in my life thank you
RUBINA
YOUR POEM TOUCHES THE INNER CORE OF MY HEART. LOVE AND BLUE OCEAN ARE THE SAME BOTH ARE PASSIONATE AND ENDLESS.
Amanda
Hey, that was an excellent poem! i suppose in a way i could realte to it! Good Work!
angelecia
very sweet,and exquisite
Katherine
This poem moved me like no other. There's nothing like finding exactly what you need to say and speak from the heart when you can't find the words yourself.
diana
friendship and love poems are the best kind when they blend the mind and heart together into one to express both feelings to one special person this has been done in your poem thank you very much.
Danielle
Very Good !
Vanessa
The words expressed the very same way I feel, I love the sea, collect shells, and hope for a friend to find his true love with me.
Brenda
I received this poem from someone special and it touched my heart. Thank you for your talent and sharing it with others.
carrie
I think the poem was wonderful, i can totally relate to this poem.
michal
That poem is very good... I like it.

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