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There is so much that two people in love share, and the feeling is beyond compare. If you share of yourself with your love, you will in return, get the blessings of closeness.

When you love someone and want to be in their life, it is a simple but all encompassing feeling.

A Few Visitor Comments

nikki
very well done had me shakeing
Erika
I like it because it expresses how I feel for my husband who just deployed to Iraq who I miss very much.
jenniffer
VERY TOUCHING N ROMANTIC POEM I FELL IN LOVE WHEN I READ IT
Ali
Really like this poem because it speaks to me. I have felt like the narrator but could never put it down in words. Thank you!

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To Put It Simply, I Want You

I want to be your companion
and walk hand in hand,
your strength enveloping mine.
Autumn leaves falling,
scuffing feet and laughter,
sharing nights, not finished by the dark.

I want to be your confidant
as you pen your deepest
thoughts, as your heartaches
bleed and finally break free.
Your dreams, I keep as if my own.
I want to smile as you smile
and giggle with you
at nothing at all.

I want to be your lover
and find the passions
that move you to action.
I want to be the softness
that induces you to trust.
I want to be the naughty
that makes you come back for more.
I want to please you.

I want to share your breakfast
and your dinner,
I want you in the shower
and in your bed and
with soft steps to bring you coffee
(I take mine black)
Your strong arms, the legs
that power your thrust,
your lips of pleasure,
these are the fuel of my desire

no it is no secret, my love,
and to put it very simply,
I want you.


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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

nicole
This is truly a great poem! It has everything its romantic, heart warming, funny and sexy rolled into one. PLEASE KEEP WRITING
jamie
i love this poem. it just like me and my crush
tonya
my feelings in a nutshell
RUSSELL
i thought that helped me alot i am in love with this girl in work donna she is amazing help me by sending me more poems i want her bad
Cliff
Just got sent this poem by my Girlfriend, and was absolutely blown away by it! It sums us, and all our dreams so exactly. I was really touched and inspired. What a beautiful, thoughtful, touching, romantic and inspiring work of art. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
roberto
very clear, simple, but powerful
Andrea
Love the poem! I wish I could find love like that.
Joanna
What a stunning piece of writing!
Alexandru
Touching, Moving, GREAT! Already sent it to my love! :)
catherine
one of the sexiest and yet simply poems of desire you have my vote - it certainly says it all from lover to another
Mellisa
This poem touched my heart as it is exactly how I feel about my partner . right down to the coffee!
Fran
Can't believe I found in your poem the exact words to describe how I feel about the man who's reawakened the passion in me.
ada
I feel compelled to write my erotic poems too this is great.
JOBANI
this poem had alot of passion and love it is a feeling that i so much feel for my fiance.
bobbi
Loved it thank you for sharing
sandra
I loved youre poem very much. You need to continue to write wounderful poetry like this.
Natka
I loved it very very much.
kim
i love your peom it reminds me of my ex, boyfriend i want him back but i'm to scared to get close to him so i just stay far away i do want him but i keep away i try at least
Kristin
I recently found a love that i share many happy days with and ur poem really put my feelings for him into words that i could not. I have shared this poem with him and I thank you for your awesome work. I give this poem a perfect 10!
Lynn
This is an awesome poem. Fits my love relationship perfectly.
geraldine
that is what is up
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