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Wanting to capture the essence of a time of passion in an open meadow. And the continuing nature of love, the progression of feelings as well as the building of relationship. The nature of time counted as moon travel.
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Chameleon
it captures the emotions of the writer, and in so doing, the write managed to give it poetic justice.
pat
I love nature so I can feel this poem to my heart
Nyx
WOW!
queen
this poem is so sweet it reminds me of my lovely dear clerence. keep it up
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Meadow Again |
| by Daniel James Burt |
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Moon hangs, almost full pieces of cloud scatter, glide in soft, summer breeze. We lay in our meadow listening to the sound of night her head nestled on my arm. Night air made for kissing dances upon our skin chilling wherever is damp. She stirs, quietly calls, my name hangs on summer eve floats about our meadow. She sighs, moves closer snuggling in, once again her breath stirs, awakens. Hands join in gentle caress exploration shared and renewed oh, so smooth and lovely. We turn, lips meeting slow, softly, delicate building quickly to demand. Crying out, beginning and end collapsing, breathing ragged moon hangs, slightly fuller. |
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Connie
Lovely.
Rachel
Thank you. The poem was innocent (gentleness is good rest for the soul), did not take advantage, exploit, or assume. It made me cry, and crying was the release I needed after a summer without my love. Thank you.
Elvira
I'm a strict judge, not anything is acceptable to me, but this is amazing and true art!
BOBBY
this is the way it makes it so easy to find the right keep up the good work
Judy
I met my soulmate online at a music site. He lives half of a world away. We fell in love. We have not met in person yet. Since this is new, we record our voices with a little music in the background and send it MP3. I decided to record poems of Love and passion. Passion is a new word to him that I had to explain because he is just learning English. I loved this one. Thank you for sharing it.
debbie
i enjoyed that poem very much it was wonderfull
Jennah
This was a beautiful poem and very well wrote
Jen
I love the way the author captures the imtimate moments. Sensuous but not raunchy.
Muriel
beautiful !
tom
just so elequent, passionate, beautiful
KatieLyne
I LOVED IT, GREAT JOB,
Jade
This poem really touched me. I am doing A-Level English Literature at the minute, and reading this gave me the chance to look into it deeper than when you first read it. I basically untied the whole of the poem, and seen the deeper meaning of it. I believe this is one of the best written poems i have read to date.
Eric
As soon as I read this it it reminded me of my girlfreind.
sam
Wow!
fran
that was the most sensual poem i have ever read. Keep up the good work
Maria
this poem really touched me and you should post more of them
Shelby
I think it is a wonderful poem. Brings memories.
gene
this poem touched me deeply keep,up the good work
Rikard
Very sensual.
fark
REALLY A GOOD JOB. KEEP IT UP!
belen
i love this poem it actually made me cry when i read it. thank you daniel james burt for making such a beautiful poem i absolutely loved it.
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