Wanting to capture the essence of a time of passion in an open meadow. And the continuing nature of love, the progression of feelings as well as the building of relationship. The nature of time counted as moon travel.
Moon hangs, almost full
pieces of cloud scatter,
glide in soft, summer breeze.
We lay in our meadow
listening to the sound of night
her head nestled on my arm.
Night air made for kissing
dances upon our skin
chilling wherever is damp.
She stirs, quietly calls,
my name hangs on summer eve
floats about our meadow.
She sighs, moves closer
snuggling in, once again
her breath stirs, awakens.
Hands join in gentle caress
exploration shared and renewed
oh, so smooth and lovely.
We turn, lips meeting
slow, softly, delicate
building quickly to demand.
Crying out, beginning and end
collapsing, breathing ragged
moon hangs, slightly fuller.
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that was the most sensual poem i have ever read. Keep up the good work
Maria
this poem really touched me and you should post more of them
Shelby
I think it is a wonderful poem. Brings memories.
gene
this poem touched me deeply keep,up the good work
Rikard
Very sensual.
fark
REALLY A GOOD JOB. KEEP IT UP!
belen
i love this poem it actually made me cry when i read it. thank you daniel james burt for making such a beautiful poem i absolutely loved it.
cheryle
Wonderful, brought back some beautiful memories
Ripeka
its nice to see a boy expressing feeling so willingly and through such well-written prose
Amber
it was a wonderful piece, i liked the descriptions used to describe the sition it was beutiful touched me,
Darrell
This is a very touching poem. it said things that I think about but, are unable to set to words. Thanks, Darrell
Daylynn
Well When I was reading it, it felt like I was really there with someone. Someoen that I was gonna spend the rest of my life with. But yet I haven't found it. It was a really interesting feeling that I never felt before.
Laura
It was a very warm and understanding poem. For someone to understand the poem they had to have gone through it it was wounderful thank you for letting me read it.
crystal
this is a intensifying poem
Adrian
This poem is beautiful, it touches me, inspires me and makes me think. Keep up the good work!
Katrina
this is the most sensual poem i have read on love. it has touched me because that would be how i'd explain my first night with my first and present girlfriend! thank u it was a pleasure to read
brenda
sounds like someone who has really been there. BEAUTIFUL!
kieshona
i vote yes your poem is on point its bangin i loved it keep writing
Annie
Baby this is one of the reasons that I fell in love with you. You always know just what to say
Cassandra
I enjoyed the vibe of this poem which leaves of feeling of natures influence on the power of seduction. I rate this poem on the higher scale
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