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His Paradise
by Amanda D Besserer
Bring me to his paradise
a feeling of within,
naked to his loving eyes
caressing me with sin
I long to feel his softest kiss
upon my dampened skin

Bring me to his paradise,
and let our bodies meet
the trickle of the rain outside
would shower us with heat,
I wish to be his fantasy
and make our love complete.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Cecelia
I have loved this poem for a number of years, and have sent it to many lovers.
nikki
lovely . pure . real. true
MaryAnne
I enjoyed reading this poem because I am in love and one of the most important things to me regarding my lover is that he experiences " his paradise " brought on by me. I want him to be happy in every way and solidly satisfied. His feelings are very important to me and make me so very happy when he conveys his emotions to me by inviting me to share in " his paradise. " His paradise is my paradise. Thank you for sharing emotional bliss in such a beautiful way!
JONNIE
I JUST WANTED HIM 2 KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE HIM
anthony
hello amanda you poem inspired me in a very strong way and i possibly would like to discuss your feelings that made you write such strong poetry i wish you the best of luck and hope you e-mail me.
Lettie
excellent
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