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This is a poem I wrote to my husband the day after we had an amazing and emotional evening. Nothing was particularly different about what we did that night; it was a work night and we were just doing our usual routine. But something clicked inside me that night. We've now been married for 8 months and at the time I wrote the poem we'd been married for 7. We had been having the typical first year marriage troubles all the way up until the 6 month mark, and then everything just started to smooth out. We'd had some communication problems, not to mention being dry in the sex department. But as I said, things had just started working themselves out and I felt myself falling in love with him like it was the first time all over again. Anyway, the day after we had a wonderful night of love making I wanted him to know how much it meant to me and I definitely didn't want to pull the old, "You were wonderful last night," crap. So this is for him and all his manly wonderful ways. Love Poems
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You
by Suzanne
Last night was the first night
Last night was the first time
You were the first and the only one

At first I was withdrawn and unsure
Wanting, yet wondering

Your gentle embrace released the
Constriction and I
Was you and
You were me

Everything was right, genuine, and pure
Moments were hours
Sensations were spiritual

Last night I loved my husband

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
rea
Made me cry. So beautiful, so romantic, soo pur. Well done.
Larisse
This poem i sone of the purest I have ever read. I got to the end and wanted to cry because it reminded me of the first time i felt comfortable that way with my husband. Excellent!
Liz
I love the fact that it was about your husband and not just a boyfriend because I'm a big believer that sex is meant for marriage. Good luck with your husband in the future.
Darlene
This poem speaks volumes. It is exactly how I felt about my new husband last night. For the first time.
Amber
YOU'RE POEM I REALLY LIKED! AFTER I READ YOUR STORY, I KIND-OF FELT BAD FOR YOU BUT AFTER I READ YOUR POEM I JUST WANTED TO CRY. ALL THESE OTHER POEMS I THINK ARE JUST POEMS THAT YOU CAN REALATE TO SOMEHOW, BUT YOUR POEM HAD MEANING AND EVERYTHING. I JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I REALLY INJOYED YOUR POEM AND YOU HAVE A LOT OF TALENT TO WRITE SUCH A BEATIFUL POEM!
Jo
The poem was incredible.
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