I went on a date and it was obvious what was on this person's mind, so I politely asked to be taken home. After thinking about it, I came up with this. Although it is flattering to know that one can be the center of another's fantasy I felt embarrassed to see it so out in the open. (These are my views on how this man was thinking, as seen from his viewpoint).
i really like your poem. it explains everything sexual that you can do even when you aint at home!
i really like this poem. I am also interested in poetry, and it reminds me of myself. we have different style though.
I LOVE THIS POEM !
well, I would say Ya hit the nail on the head 100%. good job!
This is perhaps one of the most imaginative poems I have ever read. It is so catching and thoughtful. I LOVE IT!
I really liked this poem. To me its fresh and interesting and thank god it doesnt rhyme. It has a lot of Imagery and it reminds me of my favorite poet Maya Angelo.
I could actually see two people sitting at dinner together. The gentleman with a mischevious smile on his face thinking these thoughts and the lady across from him just smiling, unknowing of what he is thinking.
Devine! Simply divine!
very intresting and enjoyable poem to read
perfect account of a pleasurable experience.
I loved this poem so much I had to save it. :)
An original idea, thought provoking, excellent visualization, rather tongue in cheek..I really enjoyed this one!
this is a kool poem if you come up wiht anymore like this send them to me please.
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