Few would deny the inherent beauty of love. But love isn't always best described by starry eyes, red roses in Spring, and promises of forever. Sometimes, the best way to describe love is - not as a noun - but as a verb.
This poem was written to prove an erotic poem doesn't have to be pornographic.
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I've never read anything that put it in better words. The symbolism and wording are magnificent! Bravo!
Lea
This poem inspired me to write more erotic poetry. I thank the master for the gift he shares with us.
Ashley
Absolutely breathtaking!
Shonta
I really LOVE this powm. it is really touching and reminds me of the first time me and my fiance did the do. I couldn't express the way I felt the first time but now I can. Wonderful Work!
lucyluv
Poet deVine, This poem was very sensual. I reall touched me, both physically and mentally. It makes me very excited about the night that I am going to spend with my fiance on our wedding night. I can't wait for the two of us to join together as one! Keep up the good work.
nesh
This poem is awesome! It makes me wanna get off work right now and go home with my husband!
Lauren
I really loved this one, it's vivid but not dirty in any way, it was beautiful and passionate with a hint of class.
christina
wooooooooow!
Jamie
This poem shows passion in a romantic way ! I give a 10 outta 10
d
I feel as if I am embraced in the words of now. Remembering that first love and all it brang
Ashley
This poem was so beautiful. It kind of remined me of my first time. But every one is made for someone and it seems like they have found the perfect one for each other that will fulfill each others fantasy.
alex
this poem is very good indeed,the poet deVine. is gifted in describing a very intimate actions and expressing emmotions in a very classy way. to read this poem ,it makes you imagine the scene as you are watching a very intimate movie. it makes lives the situations and that is prove that the poet is gifted. great work.
Queenie
I have always had a hard time trying to put together the words that descibes the raw, intense passion that I experience when I am making love with my fiance. This poem describes it as well as it can be described. I forwarded it to him and I know that it will immediately put him "in the moment " as it did me. We are hundreds of miles apart and await his arrival with even more anticipation when reminded of the extreme pleasure to come. Thank you for the beautiful expression!
rhiana
that was great !
Rese
dis poem is rely tite n sexi. sex is mor den sex. its love
elizabeth
this poem is all too real. it was written very well.
Sue
Excellent 10/10
christen
i really enjoyed the poem i love to write poetry but i have not seen some one right a great poem like this one i loved it
Tiffany
I Loved the poem! i write poetry too and that one really touched me! the thing about that poem is that i could actuall picture the words coming to life between my boyfriend and i! It was a Great poem!
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