When I fall in love, how would I feel? I asked this question to myself countless times, and even now as I write, I cannot help but reflect on those times when I did fall in love - madly, fondly and blindly.
But alas! Love and Fate enjoy teasing a young man like me, for I had stumbled again. This sweet and wonderful dream that I perceived it to be, is in fact, just another faraway and fading one. What you will read in this poem, will be what I was feeling last night, when everything seemed so rosy and lovely. But things are not to be now.
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its touch me alots. its remind me at first time we've meet one another
y
i think this poem is the best poem on this website because i could relate to it and understood word for word.
dana
that was hot kep up the good worck
april
keep up the good poems they really make a diffrence in our lifes. thank you! april
jennie
i think your poem was so powerful and so sweet. i feel the same way only in the opposite gender. i am also a poet.
Flor
This is wonderful, Reading this poem and been able to reflect on it,has helped us renew our vow. Good job Melvin.
vangie
nice!
Leticia
I really thought this poem had alot of passion in it. It wasn't what I was looking for but it was very cool to read it. It had alot in comment with what I want when I find love!
Cindy
i loved it it touch my heart hope you'll write a another one
Bruce
I really enjoyed reading the poem it reminds me what me of the way i felt about my ex girlfriend and reminfds me of the way i still fell about her, i look at is as a message telling me that if you love someone enough that u fell like it sais in the poem then you will do what ever it takes to be with that person.
amber
i love this poem every women wants a man to express his feelings this is trully great feelings
Erynn
That poem was absolutely beautiful, as well as written very masterfully. I am very glad I happened to stumble upon this website :)
Britt
that poem was so touching and it was very sweet,, i liked i a lot,, it expressed a lot of feelings in little words,, great job Melvin :0)
M
Your willingness at attempting to put your heart-felt thoughts down on paper is sweet
Charles
The nicest poem I think i have ever read.
claire
your poem was very touching and really sweet
saul
REALLY NICE FORM OF PUTTING THE WAY I FEEL,BEING THAT AFTER BEING IN A FEW RELATIONSHIPS I STILL DONT KNOW WHAT LOVE IS?
Victor
Thats beutiful thats how i fell about my girlfriend
tengyurme
when i read this poem i remember the days we spend together wich is so precious to me. thanks melvin to write this poem so different from others
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