About the Poem
The exploration of loving feeling from someone not ready to open his heart. Intense feelings that must be kept to oneself, feelings we have all had at some time.
A Few Visitor Comments
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This is how i feel at the moment with life and people. I was looking for another poem and this one caught my eye. I believe it was very well done.
Kristina
His words seems to echo what how I felt not so long ago about my present relationship. It was like reading my own emotions. Very moving and so true.
Karen
That was so touching, I feel almost the same about someone too. :)
Dark Silence |
| by Dan Peeper |
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To you I would surrender And take down the wall Pour out my heart Just to see if it would fall It seems no greater a distance Have I found to suffice To hinder this feeling I harbor to entice The restless excitement Perils of indecision Trapped beneath the layers Together forming my prison Hidden by walls of words Bound by bars of sight All that come to life When concealed by the night I die to speak To finally reach out To let her know I can't do without These secrets of sort I must keep to me For those who don't know That's all that they see |
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