About the Poem
I wrote this poem thinking about the perfect girl. I got inspiration from BLINK 182's song "JOSIE" and the feelings it provoked in me and the feelings the girl I wrote this about provoke in me. If anyone ever listens to BLINK 182 you know what I mean when I say I have meet my Josie.
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You Make Heaven Look Like Hell
I lose myself
in your beautiful eyes.
I can't pull away
even if I wanted to try.
in every way.
The thought of you
makes my day.
You came to me
from heaven above.
You flew in on wings
my angel of love.
When nothing seems
to go quite right.
and I no longer
can see the light.
I look upon
your angelic face
and I'm taken away
to a far better place.
every word you've said.
You move me
like the music I play in my head.
In this world of false truths
I know only one thing true.
I'd give up everything
just to be with you.
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