This poem was written because I feel that a person doesn't always explain how they feel when they are in a relationship. In this case I was the victim. So confused, and vulnerable.
Some days you seem so close
like you stand right before me
But then the next day you seem so far
like each other we can't see,
Each day is like a roller coaster
with my stomach turning upside down
You stand there looking
but yet you don't utter a sound,
I feel so confused and
my heart is being torn at its seams
And every night that I sleep
you seem to linger in my dreams,
Every time I look at you
I forget all my thoughts
And right then and there
it's you that my heart has sought,
Every time I hope
it turns into something bad
So for right now I'll stop thinking
And maybe things won't end up sad.
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I loved this poem, it tells alot about how people feel in their love life. Most people cant say what they are feeling and this does it perectly!
Joe
This poem is awesome. That is exactly what I'm going through.
Cayley
i have loved this guy and this poem has really helped me think through if he is really worth it. to people out there that are waiting for love or happiness to caome to u have to get into gear and do something about it. there are plenty of fish in the sea. but be careful. peace out!
SHAKEELA
IT WAS A REALLY GOOD POEM IT'S EXPRESSED EXACTLY HOW I FEEL.
Jonathan
hey this poem is great the endind is so what i feel this momment love it nice job gurl -x-
Jon
I know exactly how you feel, i am going through the same thing, i love your poem
audrey
i love this poem its really good i couldnt of explained how i feel rite now any better.
mia
wow. Best word that can describe it. I related to it a lot!
keta
it's great!
Bryan
good to know we're not alone in that situation. sometimes its really hard when your partner doesnt explain whats wrong. thanks for this poem
Nataly
this poem is great an amazing it shows how much did she care about him and thata's how i feel to
Toan
That was a very sweet poem. perfectly describes how many people feel in their love lives right now and in times to come. I normally do not vote and write comments unless it's something very good. You must be a very touched person. Hope things are good for you in your future. keep up the good work ^-^
sara
This poem was wonderful. I loved how the author expressed her feelings in such a deep way that her emotions seemed almost mystical, yet understandable if you thought about it deeply enough. I am only 13 but her poem really inspired me and made me feel as if I've been here for centuries longer. as if her experience were my own.
Mandee
I just feel like my boyfriend is never there when i need him. I wish that he will be there, but right now i feel confused.
Jamie Lee
AWESOME! Thats the first word that comes to mind after reading this poem, touches me close to home. I now know I'm not the only person that is "confused". Thanks keep up the excellent work! great job!
MISSI
Reading the poem was a way of realizing that I wasn't the only person who felt this way. It's great to know that someone can come out and write how they feel. Awesome poem!
ben
this poem is really touching i hope i can read more of your poems
Amanda
This poem is great! Ilove every word. It fits perfect for what situation I'm in.
James
It really hit a sore string one the harp of my heart.
gaby
i luv ur poem. it shows how i feel right now with my bf and how confused i am. i really really like it. :)
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