This poem was written at 2 am in the morning. It is rather long but my pen just didn't stop. It comes at a time in my life when things are very confusing. It is my thoughts.
I am at a stage where things are changing rapidly and for lack of a better word, I'm scared. It's about not taking the usual path of life and finding what makes you happy and just doing it no matter what and doing it soon. I have just turned 20 and I know I don't want to be old and wondering 'what if'.
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Awesome! Written with elegance and true poetry. so true to life. Thank you
Tina
So Young. Yet so deep. WOW
ricky
cool poem you have a great vision!!
April
That poem was excellect. I really did touch me.
Mona
This so relates too me.. its a REALLY good poem :o)
Edie
Enjoyed your poem very much. Something must have caused you to have this inspiration at 2AM!!
ALMA
WOW WHEN I READ THIS POEM MY MOUTH WAS HANGING WIDE OPE. YOU GOT TWO THUMBS UP FROM ME!
Jason
I think this poem was a really good poem. It must have taken a lot of time to come up with. I really like the words you have chosen and the poem is very descriptive. It made me feel so full of joy and happiness while I was reading it. It gave me motivation to make a poem and now I am going to make one. I think this poem is very good for people to read and you should publish it (if you haven't already). Thanks a bunch for making an incredible poem.
Robyn
Loved it!
melissa
I really liked this poem.I believe you expressed everything any young person would wonder about.Good Job!
lauren
this poem is a true acount of the way i feel
Thayne
This poem is an inspiration. It's great, it paints pictures slowly, in your mind, but as you read the poem on, you see it's true meaning and sign. It gives a meaning, to life itself, to tell you that one thing is true. You can control your destiny, as Jesus Christ did too.
Josh
One word... GREAT keep them coming
Patience
This was a great poem,I can really relate to the author.
Myka
Wow, incredible!
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