wow that was deep although it was very good keep up the good work

Hi, I enjoyed reading your peom because my father left when I was too young to remember, however, I never understood why he never called or came around, there was never food on the table from him nor his sent was left unfound. Your poem lets me see that I can too let go of the hurt that he has caused because in the end will he ever be found?

i vote 4 u! my parents r splitin up!but b4 that happened my dad left n came bak 6 months later! y? i wonder maybey he met sum 1!but ur poem meenz alot!keep writin bout this shyt !its real gud!

I really liked how the poet wrote the poem . It made my father just come into my mind cause me also just like many people had a father that chose to give up on his children.

I really really like thie poem but make me sad in the same time. my dad left us about 12 years ago, he have a new family now. i have 10 more sibling and im 35 and im the oldest imagine how old my other sibling when he left and its a big diffirent too when they live in the philippines we dont have anything there it is hard to live without support of you dad. but anyway we learn to forgive but its hard to forget what he done.

i dont really know what it feels like to loose a dad that just walked out on you but just reading this poem makes me really sad because i cant imagine my dad leaving me. If he did i know i would be heart broken.

The same thing happened to us, only it was my Mother who left. It was as though Aliens took over her mind. Good Poem.

I ENJOYED YOUR POEM.

i think that your poem was a wonderful one. They say that a poem opens up memmories and allows you to feel what the poet feels. i didn't go through the same experience you did, but I can feel your pain and everything else in this poem.

This poem really made me think. My parents split up too and My Dad was the one that left.