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I wrote this poem about my father, whom left my mother almost two years ago. They were married for 24 years.

Why?

I remember his hands hard as steel,
But never was I without a meal.
He was with me throughout my childhood,
His love was unconditional, and he always understood.

A strong love I thought we did share,
But why did he leave without a care?
When he left, I was devastated,,
And a lot of times quite aggravated.

My father gave up everything he had,
Sometimes I think he must have gone mad.
This all from a wonderful man,
In my heart I just don't understand.

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katlyn
heyy i love the poem it reminds me of my dad alot. umm we have the same last name. i dont no if we are related though. i live in alabama my name is katlyn carpenter. mabe we are related
Alex
Hello i do not no how to start off well any ways my name is alex and i thought you actually did pretty good that was the same thing that actually happened to me too . well i have to go you did a pretty good job and keep it up
sandra
This poem touched me because my 5 year son and I were left by his dad 21 years ago. It was a devasting time and we both didn't understand "why?" or what we had done to make him stop caring. Every night I prayed over my son, Lord please don't let him become an angry, bitter statistic of divorice. Lord, let him grow up to be a good productive man with a wife that loves him with all her heart and children that will share in their joy and love, Amen. Today, my son is 26 yrs old and has exactly what I asked God for. How beautiful that Mindy can be productive and effective with a gift that God has given her. Keep up the good work Mindy. Remember, that everything that you are today, is a result of everything you've been through. Embrace your calling to minister through your poetry. God Bless You sweetie.
mary
the same situtation happened to me over 20 years ago and until reading this poem i never thought that anyone had ever been through such a thing. i love my father with all my heart and i always knew that he loved me but he left me with a broken heart.
Sasha
I really like your poem, keep writing!
Mel
wow that was deep although it was very good keep up the good work
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