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This is a poem I wrote to scare my self from committing suicide. It has helped me through hard times. When ever I feel that the world is to scary to live in, I read this to myself.

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Samantha
this poem really got to me because i have a really good friend who has just recently become depressed and told me she really wanted to kill herself. i talked to her and she no longer wants to kill herself but still thinks suicide is the only way. and i am going to be by her side until the end of her depression. and of course i am going to give her this poem. Thanks.
Cc
Wow this is like i think the most inspiering poem, see i hurt myself like, really hurt myself i find any object (mostly knifes) that are sharp and start cutting away and sometimes i can get dizzy but after reading that poem it mad me think differently! THANK YOU SO MUTCH!
Edith
SIMPLY love the way u illustrate the definition of "LAST". Keep it up and hope to see more of your work soon!
Amanda
omg this poem is so great i have struggled with suicide and still am. my life is a wreck an d i feel like i have nobody left in the world my life is just meaningless to me but this poem is so true, and if u can get help then mabey i can to. THANK YOU

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Last

For everything there must come a last.

A last minute, a last hour, a last month, day, or year.

A last drink, a last coke, a last tequila, scotch, or beer.

A last love, a last heart, a last kiss, hug, or rage...

Or even the last words written on a page.

But the worst last thing is your last breath
because what is to follow will surely be your death.

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

bri
this poem was extremely freakin' awsome your a great writer. even for it to be so short and seemingly simple it said so much i loved it!
paige
this poem speeks the truth thats y i love it
Val
i loved it! very different. but very awesome!
fran
powerful poem, i loved it! it just made me think wow everything ends! its truly amazing! x
paige
wow i love ur peom. !
Shelby
I love this poem because it reminds me of me and what i go threw in my life me and my friend love this poem!
Alana
I liked this poem in that the overall message is a positive one. Perhaps next time I'm feeling suicidal, I will think of your poem and wonder if I really want this to my last day, meal, conversation, etc.
Jami
All i can say is this is a very good poem
Makayla
Wow that was so good. You are like such a genius for writing something that good! So congratz to you :)
Tiffany
hey that really touch me. That was real deep. Thats a good way of looking at your life.
Sam
Very very very true, been there n tryed to commit suicide n what this poem says is true! Love it!
kelly
oh my lord this is truly amazing,every thing you said i felt i lost my father a mounth ago today and i know that the worst thing is their last breath.
Alicia
i love ur poem it only the truth i have tread committing sucide but ur poem has just scard me from committing suicide so i know how u feel
emily
i found it very unique, i was very impressed
Julia
OMG! Just a few days ago I wanted to commit suicide. then I remembered this poem, and I got scared. I figured that wasn't going to be the way I die. I cant say I won't commit suicide, but I'm still here now. Thank you so much.
Eryn
This is a really good poem and has helped me, its pinned up on my wall
Sonia
Excellent-makes you remember how precious life is
kaylee
i love your poem i would like to write poems but i just can make them sound right but i love yours. if i could write my own it would be abody all the boys and gurl that brake eack others heart. and all well i just like u 2 know i loved youes.
karla
wow, i have never thought about that perspective of the word/meaning of LAST very nice i enjoyed it
coral
BEAUTIFUL. VERY TRUE INDEED
Delcee
ouch. Beeing a multiple suicide attempter, i must say, thank you for writting this ! it really hit me. god bless you !
sophie
i feel like comitting suicide everyday of my life, it can really hurt if you feel like i do. thankyou for writing this because it can really open my eyes, i always try to stop myself, i find a good way of keeping your mind off cutting is to find something easy and quiet to do that will destract you, keep up the amazing work!
sheree
i love ur poem its nice and kool
lauren
this is a truely amazing piece of work! so clever! im lost for words with how amazing that is
monica
i loved thepoem it was a bit sad but realy good it makes you think of the more important things love mon
HEATHER
very clever and sums it all up. many a time i have felt like that
kelly
omg this poem is sooooo ace i loved it.
ilona
ey. gud poem im sry bout how u feel i no it must be hard and i hope u get threw it . and dun have to hurt no more
jazzy
i like your description i might use this once
Brandie
I thought that this poem had a very good understanding and it was very interesting to read.
kalyn
wow. it is very nice. i just wish i could write poems
sydney
your words are so true, those who must read it have probably realized how deep your words are, like a knife cutting through pure flesh, it struck my heart, it kept me alive i must thank you.
emiley
this poem is really good. when i read the last line it made me cry. it just brings to life that when we die that is it nothing will ever be the same again. brilliant
mari
I like it. I understand alot of what you've written. The last breath is the word you leave the world with to remember you.
Brittany
it makes me realize that there truley is an end to everthing sooner or later.
micky
Its a great poem, my bestm8 nathan killed himself bt no-one nos why, we all think e got to the stay off depression n i neva new how he really felt so this poem has really made me think. Thanks
carlos
this poem really gave me a better outlook on life. your a great writter keep writting
BeckiAnne
i LOve it it's so very clever but it gets the message across perfectly short and still beautiful!
natz
I love this poem, its great! good job
Katie
I absolutley love this poem. I am a grade 8 student (13 years old) and I love to write and read poems. I have gotten some published but never any as good as this one. It kind of gives me this scary wow feeling ans it just inspiers you and makes you sit back and think. I love it thanks, Katie
Ametria
this is a great piece of work. i write about almost exactly the same thing. i'm tired of people picking on writers like us.
katie
wow amazing the rawness of this caught me off guard. i love it hang in there
SADNESS
THIS IS A GREAT POEM. IT REALLY DID TOUCH ME. IT IS SHORT BUT IT IS REALISTIC.
kai
This is an excellent poem, it's relistic yet short!
Alicia
This is a very good poem. It means a lot to me as I am very depressed right now. Thank you for submitting your poem. It's very well written.
megan
i really liked your poem, it hit home for me and helped me to realize the gravity of my situation. thank you for this poem, its wonderful
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