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We all have days where we feel we can't go on anymore, as if we're all alone. In this poem, I guess I was trying to depict the mind of those who come closer to not going on than most. The people who sometimes choose a permanent solution to a temporary problem. A reflection in the mind of those who contemplate the end...suicide.

Remembrance

She remembers it all,
All the people who had said
They cared, but did they really?

She remembers it all,
The sound of laughter and
How happy she'd been, but was she really?

She remembers it all,
His arms around her and
He said "I love you," but did he really?

She remembers it all,
The pain she'd felt when he left,
How her heart ached, but was it really?

She remembers it all,
The feeling of being so alone,
The feeling no one cared, but did they really?

But now they'll remember her,
Staring at the knife in her hand
How easy to slit her wrists, but will she really?

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
sade
THIS POEM IS ONE OF THE BEST I THAT READ SO FAR N A SCALE 10 BEING THE HIGHEST IT WOULD BE A 10. INFACT I AM GOING TO WRITE A POEM LIKE YOURS YOU INSPIRE ME GREAT
crystal
i know how it feel to belike that all the time. because when my dad died.
shannon
this is a very good poem i love how its been written about someone else it just makes it more appealing to me but i love it!
Jay
I have been thinking about suicide all day but reading poems like these lets me know that im not alone in my pain. It has helped me so much. Thanks. I will think twice about my solution to end my pain
chicana
WOW! i have to admit You are a really good writter. i now exactly how that girl felt. It makes you wonder if someone DOES care.
ilona
ey gud poem n im sry u felt pain i hope u feel betta
Deep
You are a great writer. My real name is Shanik. But I express the "Deep Truth," in my poems.
Taylor
i really liked it i am so in to poetary it is how i let out all of my fellings it was verry good!
LCO
this makes you think, is it really the solucion?. its not. your poem was great
Amy
this peom reminds me of one of my friends
charlotte
i loved it. it made me think of me and how my life is im married and things r not to good he left after 3 years at times i just wish i was never here and maybe things would be better for him even though he dont know it hes still my life
stephanie
I think that this is a really touching poem and can relate to it. I think u did a really good job on writing this poem and I hope to see more of them!
Tj
This was awsome . . i put it in my profile so more people can read it
Leesa
I this is this is one of the best poems ive ever read. it says everything.
lisa
left me speechless! lol not an easy thing 2 do! amazin! wish i cud write like tht! xx
Stacey
This poem reminds me of how my life is right now. I think is the best one i seen all day.
helen
this poem is brilliant. it has touched me so much, i know how she feels, i've been there.
Erica
i like your poem alot.
Jamie
This poem really touched me. because there is always that second were you think will i or won't and that second determines the rest of your life.
Chelsea
This poem is one of the best ones that i've read so i will really like to see you win for this poem because it really tells the truth.
shauna
loved this poem it made me question myself. great write.
jenna
i think,this is a very sad poem!this poem will touch meny peoples hearts!the peoples heart it will touch the most is those who have lost thier kids for this reason!
Ashley
this poem really touches me b/c i just had a friend that comitted suicide last night and she is only 15 yrs. old.
Sheri
Your poem really relates to me. I was touched by the words. I used to think that was the answer for everything. by slitting my wrist. I have slowly stopped seems like each time I did it the pain was making every thing go away. but my life still isnt that great. but day by day Im surviving. enjoyed reading your poem though.
Whitney
Poem makes you think about who is really there for you in life. great poem
kayla
that poem was sooo good ! i loved it all it made me realize what ive been doing to myself is not the right choice thank you
sandra
I think your pome is great I hope you win. !
Crystal
This Poem is so in depeth, i can relate to this so much. because it is talking bout a girl who was going through alot and was wanting to kill her self. i have tried that before, but it isn't worth killing yourself over some guy or over any one. God has put as all here for a reason and he has a plan, i read that poem to my mother and she cried, because it brought back memories for her and she looked at me and have you ever tried that anymore, and i didn't answer her. i am 15 yrs old and i have tried it twice. So if any young people reads this, please take heed. and not take your life or try to take your life for anyone else. Good Job keep up the good work!
Angie
Awesome Poem, reminds me of when I was a little girl
Rum
I really loved this poem. I actually cried when I read it cuz thats exactly how I feel but I wouldnt c/s. Some of my friends have comitted suicide and its the worst thing to feel to lose someone you love so much.
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