We all have days where we feel we can't go on anymore, as if we're all alone. In this poem, I guess I was trying to depict the mind of those who come closer to not going on than most. The people who sometimes choose a permanent solution to a temporary problem. A reflection in the mind of those who contemplate the end...suicide.
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THIS POEM IS ONE OF THE BEST I THAT READ SO FAR N A SCALE 10 BEING THE HIGHEST IT WOULD BE A 10. INFACT I AM GOING TO WRITE A POEM LIKE YOURS YOU INSPIRE ME GREAT
crystal
i know how it feel to belike that all the time. because when my dad died.
shannon
this is a very good poem i love how its been written about someone else it just makes it more appealing to me but i love it!
Jay
I have been thinking about suicide all day but reading poems like these lets me know that im not alone in my pain. It has helped me so much. Thanks. I will think twice about my solution to end my pain
chicana
WOW! i have to admit You are a really good writter. i now exactly how that girl felt. It makes you wonder if someone DOES care.
ilona
ey gud poem n im sry u felt pain i hope u feel betta
Deep
You are a great writer. My real name is Shanik. But I express the "Deep Truth," in my poems.
Taylor
i really liked it i am so in to poetary it is how i let out all of my fellings it was verry good!
LCO
this makes you think, is it really the solucion?. its not. your poem was great
Amy
this peom reminds me of one of my friends
charlotte
i loved it. it made me think of me and how my life is im married and things r not to good he left after 3 years at times i just wish i was never here and maybe things would be better for him even though he dont know it hes still my life
stephanie
I think that this is a really touching poem and can relate to it. I think u did a really good job on writing this poem and I hope to see more of them!
Tj
This was awsome . . i put it in my profile so more people can read it
Leesa
I this is this is one of the best poems ive ever read. it says everything.
lisa
left me speechless! lol not an easy thing 2 do! amazin! wish i cud write like tht! xx
Stacey
This poem reminds me of how my life is right now. I think is the best one i seen all day.
helen
this poem is brilliant. it has touched me so much, i know how she feels, i've been there.
Erica
i like your poem alot.
Jamie
This poem really touched me. because there is always that second were you think will i or won't and that second determines the rest of your life.
Chelsea
This poem is one of the best ones that i've read so i will really like to see you win for this poem because it really tells the truth.
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