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This poem was written the day we found out that my friend, Angela, was in a car accident. She died about a week later. I went to visit her in the hospital but the doctors wouldn't let us see her because the injuries were so bad. She was only 14 years old! Her sister had to have lots done to her face, but she lived. I miss Angela so much! We were best friends.
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katie
my friend died in a car accident 4 months ago. she was only 17 and she was everything to me. she was my star. i really like this poem.
paige
I really liked it!
kayleigh
woooooooooooooooooooooow i absolutly loved your poem im no great poet myself but i find that writing poems out on paper is a way to express my feelings! its kind of weird but. i know how you feel about losing your gran i felt the same way when i lost my gran! she died of lung cancer and i was next to her whe she died she wouldnt let go of my hand and it was soooo sad i absolutly love your poem it was great-!
josie
this poem really touched me because a friend of mine was in a car crash she was serioucly hurt but shes fine no i havent seen her since a month before the crash it was a hard time of me because i had sais some things about her which i regret she coached me in a sport i have now dedicated my life to that sport i will be a champion for my friend my friend who i will probably never see again
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My Star |
| by Bri Biggs |
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Breaking through the darkness I see no light, I'm in a dark mysterious night. In the corner of the room, My tears no longer can be consumed. I walk over to a little shining star, What is it? It seems very far. Closer I walked to the star, Then I stop, it's the head lights of a car. The car comes and goes through me, It flips and tumbles and hits a big tree. Soon other cars were there, The lights from them looked like a fair. They pull two bodies from the car, I see one of them, it was my star. I followed it to a small room, And I enter it I hear a familiar tune. There's a small little bed with a small child, As the doctor left I waited a while. I approached slowly and I saw, My good friend lying there looking so dead. I collapsed in agony and cried, I told her don't you dare die! But too late. She grew pale and was gone. But she went inside of me. And through her friends, She said to us, I'll be with you till the end. |
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Kate
Its sad but so true. A fellow classmate of mine just died and i know wat exactly this poem is talking about.
colleen
your poem was great i lost a friend when i was 15 i know what it is like she fell from 3 stories high and hit the pavement and died 1 week later your poem really touched me
matheus
this is perfect! helped me with my hwkkk dont worry i put quotes :P Thanks!
Triona
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Bobbee
this is an awsome poem and i am giving it to my sister because her names starr! thanks soooo much!
salena
this poem realy touched me. its a very wonderfull poem. ill give it 100% its so cute n sad.
o
thank-you for this poem, it really hit home to alot of us. My god -daughter past away September 9th, we haven't been able to see her or say goodbye because her brother and sister are down in Cincinnati(Shriners)and we have been busy trying to comfort them and make sure they are going to pull through this incindent. They were all involed in a truck and tree accindent, which took the life of our fourteen year old little girl and put the other two in the hospital. There is no body to hold or even kiss because she was unable to get out. I now realize that there are others out there, but I am having a hard time dealing with the thought of not having a body to hold or see or kiss or bury. This poem helps me ! THANK- YOU
kayla
this is a really good poem! i no how u feel i lost a bes friend on sept. 24,2006 to a car accident she was dead on arrival and was only 15 years old. "rip amber"
laura
This poem really hits the spot, my twin who was 14 and my mum both died in a car accident last week. It doesnt seem real it hasnt sunken in yet. I am just thankful my brother and dad didnt lose their lives aswell
Mercy
Beautiful. this touched my soul
Kathryn
Hae, I love your poem, i lost a friend in a car accident 2yrs ago in november. she died instantly left us all shatted and even till this day i miss hur like crazy. i feel for you :)
Jaylnn
I really loved your poem it reminds me of my friend she died in a car accident 3 months ago and it is really hard to lose a friend i know the way you feel sorry about your loss
antaka
wowwww. really it's a gr8 poem i like it so much
janina
the reason i like your poem, is becuase it made my believe again. it made my believe that best friends do exist and that true friend care for each other and that girl was lucky havign a friend like you in this world.
Mandy
Oh my gosh! What they must have gone through! I promise you I will pray for them. The Lord has not and will not forget them. He is right beside them. God Bless
Christine
I lost one of my friends last year in a car accident! she burned to death after her car aught on fire because she was with a drunk driver! I know how it feels to lose someone that you care about! i miss her so much and i just wish that i could have told her good-bye! In Loving Memory Of: Shanell Jane Williams July 6, 1991-October 15, 2005
Emma
It was a beautiful poem it touched me from my own experiaces. Bri Biggs is a person that has talent that everyone should know about. I will tell everyone about this poem. Bless You.
Li
It is so good,its lovely,The moment i read it,i sated feeling smthing inside of ,i nearly cried.
Devin
i just was recently in a car accient 12/7/05 and so was one of my best friends, adn she didnt make it . i never lost some one close to me and its the hardest thing in the world. theres not a day that goes by that i dont think of my little angel. its just not far she was only 14 years old. and it was all becuase of drunk driving. so please dont ever drink n drive its that worst take my advice u never want to go through what every one close to me or alyssa went through.
Kelly
Hi, I lost a best friend, but ti was too cancer so I do kind of know hwo you feel! You just have to keep thiunking of the good times and no that they are there with yu all the time! I will never forget her! R. I. P Sam Miss you! xxxxxxx
shannondawn
that was a good poem
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