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This poem is about someone I met on-line. It was an unplanned meeting but ended up changing my whole world. I never thought that I could feel the way I felt during our brief but unbelievable encounter. This was the best way I could try to describe the way I felt about our meeting I met my soulmate, maybe at the wrong time in both of our lives, but I am glad it happened in any case.
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Moria
I really loved your poem. I felt that way when I first met my husband. We have no been married for 7 years. It was almost like you were right there when we met.
Heather
I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS POEM! every sinlge word kept me reading till the end. This poem has inspired me to realize that "we were there". is my life that i have had with my bestest friend in the world,. thank you so much and if you dont mind i would like to put this up on my Myspace site( i wouldnt claim it). thanks so much for writing this. Its very beautiful. i hope that you keep wirting more!
Raesheaniqa
We were there, was a good poem I love it. Im a writer too.
Stephanie
I just loved this poem. I met someone online and "we were there" at one time and wrong timing we just fell apart this poem reminds me of him and what we shared. I would give it 10 thumbs up if i had 10 thumbs. lol.
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We Were There |
| by Roxy |
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It was such a dream - We were there I felt you breathing I danced in your eyes I stroked your lips I stole a kiss It was such a feeling - We were there Oh so warm inside and out I laughed with you I talked with you I touched you I hugged you Our souls were together We were there Angels danced Stars twinkled a little brighter The moon smiled at us The world stopped No one can understand - We were there We became one for a moment in time We are now a part of each other for a lifetime It was the sweetest of sweet - We were there I took a part of you to keep I gave you a part of me to keep We gave each other a dream We were there |
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tameka
You did good with your poem. I dedicated your poem to our relationship.
prerna
u put in words what i was in my heart
s
lovely poem. so sweet. i had tears. one of the visitors was stephanie, whose boyfreind is from US Navy. my love is too. i'm happy for you steph, i'm not sure i'l get to be with my love in real. it's been more than 3 years now since we've met online.
Nicole
This poem took me back to time that I need to remember. Thank you
najib
I am in love with this girl that her name is Roxy too, i never talked to her or met her, but i see her everyday at school. whenever i get close to her, my body starts shaking, and when i try to talk to her, i can't speak.
Hiram
A marriage made in Heaven. It's a superpoem; all LOVE.
Brittany
Hey roxy o man is ur poem it explains just how my "net meeting" turned out. The guy I met and I are deepley in love and plan to get married in the near future. And i'm also glad i'm not the only one that didn't plan to meet the person but met and loved every minute of it! This is the greatest poems and I love it! very good work!
nigel
This wonderful poem say's it all. Been then, felt that, it is real. Roxy, you are a star
maggi
I met my soulmate on the internet about 18 mths ago. We met for the first time in August this year. A couple of days later he sent me your poem. I cried, it felt as though you had written it especially for us, thankyou, it is beautiful.
Juztn
WOW! This was awesome! I met my girl on da net. I thot I would neva find a girl that would luv me like she does, plus I neva thot the net would find her. This poem was soo sweet n awesome. If I was a tru poetry critic I would have sumthing mo intelligent to say bout it, but Im not so Im lost on words. This is a very sweet poem. Thanx fo sharing!
Sambo
I found my soul mate through the internet. Its starting to make me believe in destiny, because she shares everything with me, we are exactly the same mentally, share the same interests adn tastes and think the same about everything, on top of that, she's everything I've ever wanted. My life is complete now. I can really relate to this poem, becuase it's how I felt on the day we finally met. I love you Abby!
Jess
This was wonderful. It describes exactly what I lived two months ago. I met my boyfriend through the Internet and we spent 3 wonderful weeks together. It was Heaven. I live in Canada and he lives in Austria. In 5 days I will be with him again and I can't wait. It is great to know other people have been through this. I wouldn't be able to write such a great poem even when I feel exactly the way you did.
Connie
I loved It!
Stephanie
I totally loved your poem it totally fits into mine & my boyfriend's life. We met on the "net" one year ago & we just met like a month ago and it was totally Awesome! He is in the Us Navy but, we still are planning on getting married.. So there is hope out there still! Again, I loved this poem!
Jose
I actually have not personally experienced "Cyber love", but I couldn't help but be drawn in by the warmth radiating from this poem. Great job, Roxy!! The best of luck to all you "Cyber lovers"!
Ted
Good to see other people feel the same way, we are not alone in the way we feel. A very true poem.
nelson
wow this poem really touched me in the warmest places of me me and my current gf...who lives 400 miles away we been together over a year now and goin through some "rough" times...thanx roxy u donno how much ur words mean to me
Ker
This speaks to the way I believe it will be when I finally meet my soul mate.it hasn't happened yet (he's in the US, i am in Australia), but I believe when it does, it will be much like your poem. Beautifully written :)
Caree
I just want to say that this poem is very touching. A year ago I met someone on the internet and the time that we spent was so wonderful, we fell in love before we even met. There is no feeling that compares to the loneliness that you feel when you say goodbye for the night and turn off the computar. I am glad to say that today I call my computar love my husband and we are very much still just as in love as the day we met. This poem describes so well to me the feelings that I would feel at night when I would turn into bed after talking all night with my soon to be husband.
Madelief
That's what I experienced in cyberspace.Roxy is right. I vote for him.
Maria
beautiful words and sad too
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