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When You Love Someone by Preppie

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hussain

well i really love a girl and in the begining me and her were so crazy in love never stopped thinking bout each other. but after a few months things changed she acted as though i wasnt anything to her. i would see her in the halls of our school and try to go up to her and talk to her. she was always surrounded by guys and when i would want to talk to her it seemed as though she had no time and would walk away. i really love her and i thought we would marry but all she does is put me down and doesnt know how it feels she knows i wont leave her since im too much in love with her so she always does stuff to hurt me but im not the kind to hurt back so i just leave her alone and walk away me and her are still together been together for almost 2 months over a year and i dont know if i could still be with her the way she is i would love to meet a person who has gone through this and would never treat a person like this.

sara

this was a really grate poem im sorry that the boy dumped you. it hurts i know i been there before too so i hope you find someone really true i did 4 years latter.

Andeshia

I liked this poem alot it really made me cry

heather

i love the poem alot it reminded me of what has happend to me and if this has happend to you all i can say is hang in there it will get better i promise it may take some time but i promise youll get over it. once again i loved the poem and if writting helps you then write until your hand cramps thats what i did!

Jasmine

This poem was so true you want it to true but all he is is not true. I feel you gurl I feel you

rose

i think this poem is awesome. it reminds me so much of me.

Mandy

I absolutly loved ur poem it so has to do with me and my boyfriend! Some times he is so clueless!

Lili

This poem was a great poem because it is what i am feeling right now and the same way they explain it on the poem, thank you that helped a lot.

Kait

This poem was nice!

Courtney

This poem was so like the way I have been treated for so long! I finaly relise I am not the only one thats being treated this way!

niya

UR POEM IZ SO NICE AND IT MAKES U THINK ABOUT THINGS SUCH AS DO WE REALLY WANT TO FALL IN LOVE BECAUSE 2MORROW IZ NEVER PROMISED. GOOD POEM

linchea

the poem was nice so ill give you me vote

Brooke

this is the most touching poem and its so true! thats jux tha thing i needed to hear!

Loren

I REALLY liked this poem. I gave explaination without just spelling it out. You had to read and pay attention. Those are my fave kind of poems and this raked in my top five. Great job!

Kimberley

i loved your poem its really whats going on in my life now i just send it to him in an email and it even made him cry. thank you

katie

wow i really liked this poem. I t describes everything i am going through with my guy "friend" right now. I never knew how to write it in a poem but thanks to you now i do. but don't worry i wont copy it.

samantha

This is cute poem this reminds me of lot n my life

vanessa

it's kool

Amber

I relly liked this poem and i just wanted to let u know.

Jessica

I think that this is such a good peom that I was touched by it Love Jessica Salinas

lexie

OMG! i felt that you looked right through me. I mean that is exactly how my ex acted. I got so fed up with it that i DUMPED him. your poem told my story so exact that it's not even funny.

kiera

the reason why I wanted to vote is because I think that this poem is very toching I can real late to it in so many ways and how I thought that life was going to be perfect but its not and at first I thought it was a lie but I need to get over it tell the one day it happens it all comes crashing down on you and you cant do anything about it because its to late then I realized that it was true

Matthew

Hmm, a most excellent poem indeed. Your talent surpasses most I've seen on this site, excellent job. This poem, even though I haven't had the same experience, really got to me.

angelina

this was a good poem hope to read more of what u wrote

bernadette

This a great and touching poem I went out with this lad once and everyone told me he was bad news and it wouldnt last. I brushed it off because I loved him. Now I am happily married but not to him. That relationship went wrong. he put me down too much and i couldnt cope. I got so bad I sunk to depression but now I am over it and the reltionship. The poem is great XxXxX Bernie

raquel

This was a very good poem I really like it this was the best poem ever read in my life keep it up maybe one day you can write your our poem book.

Juanita

this is so poetic i love this!

VANESSA

i loved this poem it remind me of someone and they need to he this please make more and i give this poem a ten :] .

Sarah

This poem is very touching, I know what it feels like to be treated that way, its not long since happened to me, this is one of the most incredibly brilliant poems I have read before

Mikayla

Hey That was really deep I'm feeling the same way about a guy too! it's like you're me tryin to tell my story, only I can't!

Dominican grl

OMG I REALLLLLLLY LYK DIS POEM IT REMINDS ME OF WHEN I WAS WIT SOMEONE LAST YR. HE CHEATED ON ME ACTUALLY WIT ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS O FEEL SOOOO BAD FOR LETTIN THIS HAPPEN I FEEL LYK ITS MY FUAL TTHAT HE DID IT BUH OWELL. I GUESS I HAVE TA MOVE ON N' I DID IM WIT SUM 1 DAT IZ TREATIN ME SOOO GR8 U DNT EVEN KNOE I MET HIM ON MYSPACE

Vianna

your Poem Was really Sweet i really liked it. it hit close o home. keep them coming!

victoria

pure class an oh so tru!wel done!

laur

i like this one alot

FOFO

wow its very great poems i feel the same way that u write with the one who ilove i wish to u to complet in this way thanx for u

Beautiful

I liked this poem because of the fact it reminds me alot of my ex girlfriend supposably she was in love with me but all she was doing was running game but you cant run game on a player that's already pimping you. I thought we were at least going to last for a good while but the thing was she already had found her true love and i was someone one the side. She broke my heart and now I dont even know what to do

Lindsey

This poem is just what i went through with my ex-boyfriend. It really touched me in all the things it said. I really loved it

edna

Ilove this poem,I think this happened to me when I was in love,too with a stupid guy.

ciara

this poem is relly nice it relates with my life

Crystal

this poem is awsome! i really like it. i know how u feel about that guy it happend 2 me 2 im sorry but ur poem is so awsome love always Crystal

abby

thers nothing to say exept. wow,thats great. the emotion makes it that much better.

Jasmine

I LIKED THIS POEM IT WAS SAD BUT IT SEEMED SO REAL AND HEART FELT

Andrew

I tell u, tis is lyk ta best poem i hav eva read! It tell u wat, it made me reflect on my actions, n i found out tat i had been lyk tis. . thks 2 tis poem, i hav realised my mistake n i will try 2 change. GO PREPPIE!

Britt

i loved it it was so sad it really touched me

Kayla

Yoou have great talent to write such a poem. It touched me the first time I heard it because I use to feel as if I am in that same position. Great jog on the poem and I will love to read more from you!

Kay

I REAALY LYKED YA POEM BCUZ IT WAZ REALLY TRUE N I HAD ALOT OF EXPERIENCES LYKE DAT BEFO N MY LYKE

maria

this is a bom poem, all of this is true

Tiara

This poem is really good, i think that if Preooie's ex read this poem that he would relize what he did to her an how her heart was broken but i guess thats a guy for you!

Nancy

THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM IT IS VERY INTRESTING!

Dee

Good poem!

detesia

this was a very nice but sad love poem i give u an 7

Andrea

your poem really touched me in a very personal way. right now i am dealing with a problem like that with my boyfriend and just like you said how we wish that things could go back to the way they were, and they change and become a person that you never thought that they could ever become, but yes i understand, i miss my man and he started treating me bad, then one day good, then back to the same patteren. your poem helped me though alot of my pain. deepest regaurds, Andrea Lynn *thanks*

Cashae

i love this poem so much it make me think about my last love that hurt me.

amanda

i really like this poem it touched my heart the same thing happened to me. u are an really godd poem writter.

Jasmine

I love the poems I love you and When Someone Love you and Saying Goodbye. Please e-mail me more Thank You, Jasmine Manigo

bambi

I loved this poem, it is really great it kind off reminds me what i write in poems I writer similar to you

Amy

If i were to rate this poem out of 1-10, i would rate it 10! it is really touching and i really understood it. It nearly made me cry, probable because i have been reading lots of other sad poems. ok. i really loved it! Bye Amy

Coralma

This poem was sooooooooo nice omg it really touched me. i really like the flow omg this poem made me cry. Cry because all this poems says its true like what every couple goes through and especially my friend. I really love this poem and datz why i have it up on my wall THANK YOU for writing this poem yo ur the best. Sincerely, Coralma A. k. A Flaca!

simone

i can really relate to this poem. It ties back to many of my relationships. Its beautiful and it really touched me!

Jalissa

That is too deep man. i felt dat a couple of months ago! :(

Kaycee

this is wonderful poem, because my relationship is exactually the same as the poem. Talk about daja voo.

laporsha

wow i loved that poem i realli understand were u are coming from

holly

i really like this poem because me and my boyfriend just broke a relationship of 7 months and he was just like that soo great job.

Amy

This poem was very touching when I read it. It is true when you love someone you want them to stay.

ashton

this mis a wonderful poem and i can so relate. It was like if u wrote this for me

Brittany

I can really relate to this poem it sound like it was written just for me

Shantique

I think this was the best poem that i've ever read. I mean i am a teenager that hasn't had a lot of experience with boys except one which is my boyfreind. His name is charlie and he's the love of my life, but we have our ups and downs, but he's actually a nice guy and i love him and this poem reflected on our love and relationship. And i would really like to see more poems online by Preppie. Great job!

Jasmine

I got to give you yo props. this poem was off the chain it made me cry peace,love, and chicken greece

amanda

I ahev to say that peom was very touching cuz i had something just like that, my first love, the only one so far that really had me think that he was the only one i need and the last one. but he didint want me anymore and he was ingoring me after it, noteven saying hi. it hurts. im still not completly over him but i will evnually, keep writing that beautiful poetry, and ur not alone

Lolo

this poem was really good. it touched me deeply

Martha

WELL ALL I WANTED 2 SAY IS THAT YOUR POEM REALLY TOUCH MY FEELING. I ALSO WANTED 2 SAY THAT I KNOW HOW DOES IT FEEL'S THING THAT HE IS PERSON U WANTED. N THEN LEAVING U .

anu

this poem doesn't concern me, but at times this happens to me, because my bf is a jerk to me , but like I always tell him, that I run things around here, and then on out he listens to me,but we argue oever that but then everything goes back to normal,and that's why we are like this, but I really like this poem and I hope that alot more people read this.

Rashida

I think this is a great poem for the ladys. Holla at your girl if you write anymore.

Ashton

I love this poem. I am going through the SAME EXACT thing right now as I write this. Me and my bf went out for almost 6 months and then he decuded we should go on seperation. Well the seperation lasted for 5 days and then we got back together and things are not the same between us and I think I am about to break up with him. This poem really touched me and it hit home.

sylvia

this poem let me realize how there can be guys so cruel and self centered it really showed me how to think of guys

shenean

this poem really touch me. I have been through this situtation before! it hurt me bad!

tiffany

omg thats was the best poem i have eva heard!

Sheila

For the first time I read "When You Love Someone" Iwas really touched by this poem. It remind me of how my boyfriend treats me. Sometimes i have mix feelings about the relationship iam in but its probaly that i need to let him go and i wil even if i get my heart broken but is better for me then no love!i give the poet 5 thumbs up!

Faith

this poem is so true i thought who ever wrote this was following me because my x-boyfriend broke up with me rite before ten and on a saturday night i thought i almost wrote that poem. i loved it

TROYNESHA

I LOVE THIS POEM

krystal

i understand were she was coming from i truly hearts.

sommer

Iliked reading it and it made me think about of me and my boyfriend. I have the same feeling like that and sometimes i just cry about it because it makes me feel better and i know he loves me alot but sometimes i'm not sure about that and i don't know if he really does or not but than i just think of the times we have together and think of him holding me in his arms and than i know just how much i really love him and how he really loves me too.

kierra

this poem is s peaking about what im going through now. i loved it.

Amanda

This poem reminds me how I feel about my ex-boyfriend. Maybe he should read this poem. I really love this poem, you're really good.

angie

I know how to feel when I read the poem. I feel like that with my fiance. He stopped all the great affection months ago and when I bring it up to him That I'm hurting he gats mad. you Are not completley alone. angie

Bekah

I thought this poem was awesome because it reminds me of the tough times I was havind with my boyfriend at the time and everything that poem said as I was reading it felt like it was what i've been through. I would love to read more poems by this author and see what they have to say about other stuff that teens go through everyday. Well, g2g so,l8ter. LOVE ALWAYZ, Vampire15 a. k. a, Bekah

karissa

i love this poem it touched me deeply and i was a witness of something like this. thankyou karissa also i'm a poet.

shoneequah

This poem I believe it was for me to read today. I went through this same thing with my boyfriend. He stopped calling me for 4 days and then he called sweet talking me and stuff and then he got a female that I don't get along with to call my cell and tell me he wanted my friend instead of me I and I didn't get mad because im 16 he's 19 and she's 14 so I thought to myself he broke up with me for a child. He a child his self but he did play slick and got his friend to call me asking me questions while he's on the line listening but me and his friend is not together but we have freindly conversations, but now I know who my real friend are:GOD,my mother,and my cousin Courtney but the only thing different was I got my bad news Monday insead of Saturday.

Keetra

This poem reminds me so much of me and boyfriend girl u kno how 2 write a good love poem i was almost n tears because of this.

Tia

I loved your poem because the same thing just happened to me. I mean it was almost exactly the same but he ended up going out with my best friend. I know how hurt you are but everything will eventually end up being okay.

Alisha

I liked your poem alot! Its the perfect poem to describe me and my xs relationship! i printed it out and im going to give it to him. i write poems sometime and ive tried to explain how i felt about him in them but it seemed like i never could find the right words and this poem did it i think! i liked it alot! Keep writing!

mariah

This poem is GREAT! you are a great poet keef it up.

Brittany

I really think you did a great job and you should do more because you are realy good at them. Good Job

Angie

owwww that was cute

Amanda

this is a good poem it reminds me what my ex-boyfriend waldemar one day he was mean the next he was nice and now he has al these other girls but i dont care about him anymore

Kayla

That poem really did touch me. I almost cried when I read it. Whoever wrote this is a true poem writer. Very Very Poetic.

Kristie Marie

this poem made me cry. it reminded my of my ex-boyfriend!

samntha

its a really go poem and i love it

shari

I loved your poem and it was really good. It made me think alot. good job!

ashley

i liked it very much thats how i felt about this 1 relationship!

CRYSTAL

WELL I THINK YOU HAVE A GREAT HEART AND YOU NEED TO KEEP YOUR HEAD UP

Sheka

This poem really touched me because I have been in the exact same situation and I believe I am going through it AGAIN?! But my shout out goes to Preppie! Thanks to this poem I have the courage to stand up and forget about this boy. Thank you much

Zak

wow. thats all i can say . i know kinda how ya feel ya know i got a couple poems and they arnt as good and deep as this one. how did you come up with it??

Samantha

I liked this poem because the same exact thing happen to me.

ashley

this is a very sad poem but it is very good it sounds like it is coming from the heart and you should keep writing if you feel this way 5*****

jami

oh my gosh i love this poem,because i can so relate thats what exactly happed!i love this poem becaus its so true and touches the heart and really describes what gose on in a situation like that i loved it write more. ~jami quinn~

taylor

my sone loves someone.

alin

that once happend to me and it's pretty cool. it's all true i think everything goung right but then it breaks so it's a cool poem!

helen

I loved this poem when i was in 8th i was in a very abusive relationship. I stayed in it for a whole year always thinking that he did not mean it and when he apologized he really meant it and would not do it again. He would always say how i was not pretty enough and he would get into fights with guys that i talked to. I never really talked about it and i only told my newest bf 4 months into the relationship. This poem gave me the courage to finally talk about it and tell my bf thank you for writing this and i hope you keep on writing you have alot of talent.

cody

OMG this poem is the story of my life when i was goin out with one of my ex boyfriends i love it so much this poem is the best

natosha

this poem is sad i touchs me to kow there other girls out there that has had the same thing as me.

Janette

really touchin!

nicole

this poem is very sad. it reminded me of how it was when me and my ex michael were going out. thats exactly how he acted before we broke up.

kelley

heyy i really liked this poem!

Karen

I love this poem I dedicated this to my boyfriend to tell him how much I love him.

Markeashia

That is a nice poem

Georgina

this poem has touched me deep down I could tell the feelings of this person so easily. this poem made me cry

Noeleen

Just perfect!It felt good to read the exact words that are so hard to put into words by myself as i was there once too. All the best for more poems. its everything i expected to read! You've got what it takes to be a poet. I just hope nothing so heart aching ever happens to anyone!

Samantha

I really liked the poem it touched me so much. I can relate to it. Great poem!

veronica

wow. that is so awesome and very touching. Thats about how it was for me. this is one of my favorite poems.

kelly

9 1/4 ThAt WaS So GrEaT iT iNsPiReD mE. GOOD JoB

Katrina

I love this poem. I can relate to it so much. I like poems that I can relate to and poems that touch me. And this poem touched me and I can relate to it

Thao

Its a great poem that i had read. i love when at the first time i read it. I can feel the strong sadness feeling as i read it. well its hard to express the feelings. so just wanna say its a very wonderful poem n the author has a very good wrote n a very nice structure of this poem. atlast, Thank you very much for sharing the poem. n i would love 2 copy n keep it. !

Holly

this poem is very sexy

kassie

this is a really good poem, sad kinda feel sorry for u but it was good u know. keep it up hopefully none of this happens again

KRISTEN

This poem was so touching cause i know someone who is going through the same things, all we can do is move on

pratichi

hiya . tis is d only poem in d whole of ma life i was searching apoem whch will exactyl eman n defien wat i want n it has d material

ashley

this is a great poem it is true with me 2!

nola

Your peom was nice i liked the way you rhymed it.

Nana

As i was reading this poem it felt like about the same thing i was going through,He would tell me he loved me and that he would never leave, I see u went through the same thing but is there more 2 da srory??? He could of just told me and i would of left him but no, he would beg me not to leave him, but there he was doing his dirt behind my back, If i would of know back then, shit would of been different now. BUt this poem was BEautiful how Ironic that It went down on a Sat exactly at 10pm LIke it happened wit Me, And On everything I NEVER Sn!tCh3d, Take It from a woman who WAS also Deep In LOVe

kelly

the reason why this poem touched is because the way she said those things relates to my boyriend that i have right now but i can't see him for 4 weeks and he's not my boyfriend he is my soon to be husband or whatever it is that you want to call so yeah well anywho that's what i think about the poem and maybe one day again the girl that wrote this poem will find true love until then im gonna say good-bye, kelly ann eckhoff

rebecca

i like this poem a lot i really did it touched me however you guys want to say it because my ex-boyfriend did the same thing to me so yeah!

Brittany

this is a really good peom i loved it.

Rosa

yes this really touch me it made me think about what happenend

Ebony

I really liked this poem it told true meaning and shows what can really happen in a relationship.

Veronica

This poemis ill it speaks da truth sry this happened to you. peace

Britni

This was an excellent poem. keep up the good work.

carolina

the reason i voted this poem was becuz i had felt that way b4 and when you finally met that special sum 1 and stupid you 4 thinking that he was the one that you saw ur self with in the future and then you are blinded by the sight of not knowing wut was goin on so you think it was sumthing that you did and probably 2 days later he wants to come back to u and apologize 4 everything that he ever did to hurt you but rite then you finally realize that he is not worth it and knowing that sumthing was gonna happen and you'll here it on the t. v. holla girl luv ya even i don't no u loved ur poem hopefully you make more poems so i can read them. ur a good poet writer

XITLALIC

I LIKE THIS POEM TO CAUS EIT HAS A POINT TO IT AND I LIKE IT ITS NOT BORING OR DULL IT ACTUALLY GOT ME INTO IT ANDREADING IT

hillary

I thought this poem was very good and it is very touching i loved it explains a lot about what i am going through

Ashley

I love what you did with this poem. I know how you feel. I once went through the same thing.

broken

this has heppened to me so man times i feel your pain and i know that it's hard but you'll make it through

jessica

i really liked this poem. it is so sweet and i want to congratulate who ever wrote this because it is so sweet and hey maybe next time she/he can write one about me (lol). i really liked this poem.

heather

i really love your pome it says alot. it seems like all women do the same thing we want to belive that he is the same and you are the one to blame but thats not the case. i loved the poem.

Brooke

I really liked the poem. It is similar to what i am going through right now.

Jessica

I love it ! It's so true !

diamond

that was cold i like it

raghida

its wonderfull

tip

that was a very wonderful poem i know how you fell girl

lavina

his poem touchs people in relationships and that guys like that are jerks!

sindney

this is a nice poem i had sent this to my man and he loved it. you can write preppie

Raesheania

This poem is true for some girl. For me it was. Im a writer too i like write poems but there all sad and things. I really like this one. It was true for me.

lady

this is a very beautiful and touchin poem when i read this poem i got tears to my eyes it touched my heart it seemed so resl when i was reading it like i was the girl believe some of that poem remonds me of me. i hope u win hun. good luck!

April

I loved it i can relate to it in so many ways i was with this guy for 8 years and this exact thing happened to me it felt as if the world would come to an end i really loved this poem and it touched me in various ways

CORRINA

I LIKE YOUR POEM ALOT

Jasmine

Girl that poem was so touching and i loved it i write poems i hope mine be as touching as that but i am only 12 going on 13 and that has happend to me before. GOOD LUCK!

megan

that poem is very well written great job.

Shatica

THIS POEM WAS GOOD AND I REALLY LIKE IT A LOT U DID UR THING

gio

this poem was of the hook n i could deftinly re;ate to it

moon

i loved this poem. tonight im gonna share this with my boyfriend. i remember giving him nightmares but i went back to him. now i know what he must have felt!

adrianna

this poem was soo touching. its amazing. it reminds me of the troubles my bf and I are going through . you are an amazing poet

lucylu

OMG! guys r absolute idiots! eva heard of revenge? get revenge on him, find his new girls and make up lies about him, preti soon he'll wonda y they can't get away frm him fast enough! trust me. i'm an expert in revenge! ive had serius practice. btw, your poem rocked! keep up the gr8 worK!

Ashley

i LOVE the poem keep it coming

Nana-Boat

I'm so glad that I logged onto this poem, because it was sweet, this poem also related to my boyfriend and I.

Kayleeshia

It was real deep I liked it a lot

terasja

this peom is the boom

lindsey

I really liked this poe cuz this poem that yall wrote fits perfectly fine to me and my ex-boyfriend.

mercedes

I relly liked this poem if there was a scale from 1 to 10 it would be a 10.

amanda

this is such a good poem. ! i love it

Jasmine

It was so sweet because im going through something like that, and this poem was telling the truth every wor dwas about me

elizabeth

it was great and sad but still great

Erika

that is a great poem it really touched me alot please keep up the great work and i will read more. dont let anything get into your way

sade

I'm also a great poem writter. Your words were so well chose and deep. There so true and I can relate to what you were saying.

krista

omg ur poem is ssooo cute it reminds me of me and my friend haha

Crystal

I feel like this could be the best poem iv ever read

baby

this is true, jus what happened to me mine was a shock tho broke up wit me one day at work

Danely

very good i like it a lot

muhammad

I loved this poem. it touched my heart, maybe because i went through the same thing with my first luv. one day he was tellin me dat i was sexy and that he wanted to one day marry me. dat we was gon go to prom together and dat i would be wifey & we'd spend the rest of our lives together. BUT 4eva didn't last that long! and now i got me some1 betta. and ur poem helped alot! THANKZ!

TARA

SADDD. =(

leanne

i really really love this peoms coz my boyfriend was jst lyk it and den i found out dat he cheated on me

LeighAnne

This poem was Awsomeit really tuched me and i know what you went through Because i am going throught the same thing right now! REALLY GREAT JOB

chelsea

i love this poem. i can so easily relate to it. it almost made me cry. great poem!it touched my heart. I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.

Jamie

I can relly relate to this poem, i just went through the same thing last month.

Ariana

This poem is sooooooooo sad. I really enjoyed reading it. Good Job! :)

Ana

yeah I understand it has happened to me before and it really hurts!

Autumn

I really liked your poem and I know how you feel, I can relate but it was an awesome poem.

Emma

i thought this was a very nice poem. i'm kinda confused at the last paragraph though, but i still liked it.

kasandra

This poem is PHENOMENAL. Not only i have felt the feeling love, then felt pain, grief and became heartbroken, it has made me stronger in so many ways. I do not regret my days with the boy i called my own because the past makes you who you are today. He made me who i am today. Girls dont let a guy bring you down because you may not feel like your not worthly. Your worthly of any guy that enters you life. LOVE is a strong word and a fantastic feeling. You will feel it again one day, trust me.

niki

i well i just like this poem. it kinda souds like my life because my bf is kinda like a gansta and one time i was about 2 lose him. i think he was gonna have a fight at school, i almost cried, but i didn't. i'm so lucky he didn'thave a fight because if he had he would've been transfer in2 a different school. and when i found out he was a gansta i cried at night during the moon was out and everybody was asleep, sound asleep. i kept thinking he might be doing someth'in dangerous right now. u know, i saw a small boy smokin w/ his friend. then i thought of my bf, and if he smoke. i'll tell u a secret i hate smokers!

Mariah

This Poem is so Good. I Love it!

JASMINE

I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS GREAT AND IT SHOWS ME THAT NOT EVERYTHING IS WHAT YOU WANT IT TO BE

Nicole

I just want to say that I'm going through exactly what this poem said. and to hear that others are going through what I am, I know I'm not the only one going through it. I'm sorry that you had to feel this way. and I just want to let you know that this poem is great and no matter what any guy may tell you. don't listen to it until you know for sure that he means it. and sometimes you never know when he means it or not. It's something that you got to chance.

Mercedes

I just love this poem it relates to me and my ex-boyfriend,what he has done to me.

Clarissia

I THINK IS ONE OF BEST POEMS I HAVE EVER READ. THIS HAS HAPPENED TO ME ONCE BEFORE SO I CAN FEEL WHERE YOU ARE COMING FROM. KEEP YOUR HEAD UP.

Jessica

This Poem touched me so good that i feel like i can go on with my life and the same thing happened to me its just good to know im not alone Thanks

Amanda

this poem is ecxellent and really touched my heart. i can really relate to it because i'm going through it right now

Jordan

I really. really like this poem it really touched me. I think that this would be one of the best "Tenn Poems" that I have read so far. adn I really liked it!

jessica

I Luved this peom it touched me cuz me and my boyfriend were having problems with our relationship we broke up and now were back together but it was very touching

tiesha

that really touched me. im also in love with a boy very much he seems right i hope im not wrong.

Kellz

I can Relate to this poem because thats how i kind of feel right now

matica

I love it!

ally

I loved it! 'caz that realy happiens. It sure happen to me. this poem bergins memmorise. thanks alot!

Samantha

This poem realy touched me because it reminded me of a realationship i had in the past.

Chryistal

The poem was really sad!

cherwaylon

that is a perfect example of ky relationship

Nicole

this poem is really sweet and it is true

gLis

Beautifully done. I can really relate to this one. As i read the poem, my tears fell down. . .

sn00pygirl

this has really happened to me. this is how i feel with my bf

Desma

I really like this poem

wani

it is reali a sad poem. i almost burst out crying n ur words rhyme. i reali love de words u used in ur poem.

katie

i like it. It reminds me of a situation that i was in before.

princess

it is a very good peom

kelsey

i really loved this poem it was sad but true.

vanessa

this poem was so vivid i could really relate to it how one day things could be going so perfect and the next its like everything is the total opposite how u think u 2 r gonna spend the rest of ur lives together and a few days later u 2 are practically strangers

Ricca

This poem really reminded me of my boyfriend and it was kind of true. It the truth from top to the bottom.

emma

the poem was really good i sent it to my friend n she had tears in her eyes its brilliant

Steph

I really liked this poem because a lot of people are going through the same thing so if someone is going throgh this too then you know you arent alone.

Sammy

i really like your poem because it makes me think. and make me hope my love never goes in that direction!

tara

this was very touching i could really relate this poem to my life right now. i am glad you wrote this and i read it; it made me realize that the man of my dreams will never be like th wat he was before when we were going out.

Tequila

I LIKE THIS POEM ALSO. U CAN REALLY WRITE!

Whitney

wow. i've personally been through that and its true. thats basically how it happened too. i loved your poem, youre a great writer. i give it a 10!

Mandie

I loved this poem. I just broke up with my bf after 3 years, and It happend to be on a saturday at round 11pm, lol, It really touched me and i could really relate

Carolina

It reminded of me. I had a relationship like that and one day I had to let go. nothing is forever

tiera

this was a really good poem but i was really sad!

Christopher

I really like that poem. Thats how my ex-girlfriend treated me.

jasmine

I REALLY LIKED THIS. BECAUSE THIS EXACT THING HAPPENED TO ME JUST A FEW DAYS AGO. I WAS SO IN LOVE WITH MY B/F N HE WAS THE SWEETEST PERSON EVER. BUT THEN HE STARTED CHANGING N BROKE MY HEART N NOW ALL HE WANTS IS TO B FRIENDS.

Rahkeda

It was a very good poem.

Samantha

OMG yo i feel this poem so much! this was jus ike my last relationship, mths ago, and im still cryin over it! i gave him everything but sum ppl jus dont kno wut to do wen they hav everythang in there face. so im def. feeling this story!

Stephanie

Your Poem Was Nice

angelica

I thought it was really nice and i think you should keep on writeing peoms beause this one touched me I have not been in a relationship like this but if I did this would have made me cry because of the memorys in that relationship

Gabrielle

It really spoke to my heart and I felt this way last year with my boyfriend

Kirsty

This is a beautiful poem. I like it a lot, it's so sad and bittersweet. Well done, you did a good job.

jade

this poem is so sweet

jenny

i like ur poem u know i loved someone so mich tat i cyerd but now . i still remember him cuz he gave me my 1 kiss and also we love each other but then we didn't. keep up the good work on ur peoms

zari

this poem was so wonderful it touched m deeply

Clarissia

I just wanted to say that I understand how you must have felt when you two broke up. I recently experienced a relationship like that and I just wanted to say to never give up. Life does get better.

Chelsea

I love this poem,it was amazing,great job and i'd love to read more by you . :)

Anna

This poem is kinda what I went through with my ex and it was nice to know I'm not the only one.

carla

this really touched me b/c it waz sooo seet i loved this poem man i wish i would 've thought of this first! hahahaha well thats all so bye

Tiffany

I loved the poem it really touched my heart. I thought that my first love would last 4ever into he broke up with me 1 day and then he wanted 2 get back and i love him so i said yes but i wasnt the same so i ended up braking up with him a couple months later. But the poem was really good

jenny

this is the most true poem ive read, i love it!

jeanette

well yor poem touch me I am 14 and i am going threw the same all though he aint gone yet but could be he is going threw the wrong steps and ignores what i say to him it feels horable

Samantha

The reason why I like this poem so much is because this is exactly what im goin;' through.

shakira

I really think that this poem was very sad and touching. It was also deep

lauren

this is a really good poem. it's how my last relationship was. a lot like it. it's a very moving poem. good job!

heather

That was a VERY touching poem! It brought a tear to my eye!

Becky

i loved it and i hope you make more

sara

sweet! great poem hun, keep going!

Victoria

I liked this poem a lot. It reminded me of my relationship with my boyfriend. I just want all ya'll to know that sometimes love can be blind but no always. There is still a chance to find true love.

Corutney

this poem touched me because i have a boyfriend and i am experienceing these issues and i know how it feels but to me it jsut doesnt feel right to end it so i jsut let it go most of the time and so it gets to me and when i finally tell him about it we have a fight and we always think thats the end of it but then we talk about it and it passes over. i enjoyed this poem very well.

jackie

I really liked the poem alot and thought it was really good. Mine sound somewhatlike that. But it was really good :)

richelle

i really love ur poem its really good it was so sweet

sandy

Hi. A really very heart touching poem. but for my case HE should be replaced by SHE

chevez

i really liked tha poem you r a very creative person and it really touched my heart b cuz i wuz like dat once upon atime

TYRONE

I LOVE THIS POEM GOOD JOB

anna

this poem is good & it toched me and it is so deep and i rite poems to and ur real*** good at it and i think that you should work on it & youll be eveen better at it when ever you get older and i think that poem is very great. to be continued.

Desiree

This poem made me cry and touched me in a very special way. It reminds me of the way my ex-boyfriend used to be so I understand what you went through. I tried to forget about him and move on even though I loved him with all my heart. In the end, it is not worth it. All that happens is wrong so get over him and move on. I know it's hard but you can do it!

Sonia

wow,that poem was like the best poem I have ever read you reminded me of my ex boyfriend and how I was really sad for a long time. Preppie you are really good poet! you ROCK!

Niza

tis story really touched me because all that it said was all true

Phaletrius

I really did enjoyed this poems. You are a good writer and I wish you the best.

Dawn

I really like this poem and know somtimes I can relate!

samira

i think the poem was great. it kinda reminds me and my friend.

Jessica

I love this poem, It touch me in many of ways. This poem tells the truth, When u think or know u love someone and you know u are always going to be there for each other, it makes u think on life and u will share it with.

Tashawnna

This poem touched my heart. If i had to rate this poem from 1-10,I would rate it a 10. I fell ya pain cuz. We need more people like u who can explain other people pain while at the same time explaining yours. thank alot homie,I could have never explained my feelings better myself.

Naomi

your poem was great i love it. you really get the emotions of someone in that situation across. i went through that once and it was exactly like you described it in your poem. your poem has real meaning to people in that situation or who have been through it. keep writeing you have a talent for it.

PHILLISHA

THIS POEM IS SO TRUE ME AND ME BOYFRIEND WERE GOING THROUGH THIS SO I GAVE HIM THIS AND NOW HE GETS HOW I WAS FELLING SO HE CHANGED THANX SO MUCH FOR THIS POEM

sara

dis touched me soo much it reminds me of my life

brittany

hey i loved it because i had a boyfriend like that once and i thought i was going to die when he left me.

Jacqueline

i think this peom really opened anther side of me. Thank-you.

Yvonne

THE POEM WAS GREAT! I LOVED IT ALOT. I COULD REALLY FEEL WHERE YOU WERE COMING FROM AND I COULD REALLY RELATE TO IT!

Kristina

Girl i can totally relate to what you wrotw. it brings back the memory of my first love .

kathy

i really liked this poem because it really touched ma heart alot and when i was reading this poem the only thing i could think about is him but keep up the good work

LaQuita

I loved this poem. It was like reminiscing on a past relationship that I just had. I intentionally went through the same things.

Samantha

i really liked this peom it really tells how it was in my last relationship of 1year and 1/2

cassi

omg thts so sad it reminds me of my ex and wht happened i luv it! its the best ive read so far!

shannon

i really likes your poem it touched me cuz the same thing hgappened to me . shannon p. s. 1 bein the worse amd 10 bein the best i give you a 9!

amelia

that was great me and my boyfriend went through a rough patch but luckly we made up it was not your loss but his he wasnt worth it

dyna

the poem reminds me of my boyfriend centered friends. they gave up everything and end up in nothing

shai

I LIKED YOUR POAM DONT WORRY THOUGH EVERY THING WILL TURN AROUND I BROKE UP WITH MY BOYFRIEND ABOUT 7 MONTHS AGO HIS NAME WAS DANNY ALSO BUT NOW I MET JASON HES MY WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH EVERY THING WILL TUN AROUND FOR YOU ALSO

kelly

this helped me its brilliant its exactly how i feel

brittany

this poem was very good im very interesteds inhearing more from you in the furture

mandy

I liked this poem, it touched me i know what the person is going through i have gone through it with the guy i like more than anyone and he puts me down sometimes he says hes only joking but sometimes i don't know.

Nessy

Wow, it just amazing poem. I'm truly felt same way before. I just had to blame my feelings, but now I know. Sometimes aint easy for be in relationship if you truly sure if you in love with someone deeply and kept going and going all after that, it went harder not to think "this is not what happening" but it did. Turn out into bad sides and becoming emotional with the pain that cause be heartbroken. Keep writitng.

sarah

omg! this poem is amazin ur a really good poet !

jocelyn

wow that poem is good sad and very emotional but i have a question. di that really happen if it did soory i feel that som of those things happen

pimp

this is like the best poem I ever read

TWINKIE

this is so cute and all so true it really touched me and it made me cry

raechel

"wow" thats all i have to say about this poem it touched me inside . I really liked this poem it was amazing and sweetand raw and o my god do i like this poem it made me cry and think all at the same time wow ,wow ,wow, wow, wow very good poem!

Oriona

when i read this poem it put me in tears cause ma x boyfriens was also like this so i just wonted to tell you this is#1 in ma list

Charley

I love this poem it really does not lie. Because i've had the same type of relationship.

NISHA

Its fantastic. a clear picture of what happens in life. its true.

Tanyka

Nice poem!

jocely

i love this poem i wish i wont happen to me but its so cute

princess

I think this poem really tells the truth cause most guys are like that treat you like a princess for like two weeks then starts treating you like dirt so it really is a wonderful and truthful poem

Holly

Omg this poem is a perfect description of my last relationship. I can definitely relate to it!

Step

This poem to me was touching and out there. it reminds me of a relatonship i once had, i guess that's why i was so attached to reading it.

Kelsey

I just wanted to let u kno that I really liked your poem and that you have talent. Your poem really touched me cuz it reminded me of a recent relationship i had that went wrong. Keep doin your thing girl!

patricia

I love your poem because you wrote it with your hart and soul

rachel

this is so awesome! i love this poem it is exacally how me and my boyfriend are but i hope that the end of your poem doesnt come true in mylife

helaina

omg this is the best poem ive ever read in my hole life aye. its exactly omg. this shold be published or sumfing aye. awwwww wow its soo good

Jasmin

This was a pretty poem

Shardae

i really like this poem . this kina like dsscribes me and my love ife. if i had to vote from 1-10 it would be an 9.

Michelle

i loved this poem it was like what i went through with my ex shawn i thought he was great but i know now i was just wasting my time until i found my fiancee my one true love that was such a wonderful poem

sandra

I liked very much

regine

this poem can so totally relate to me except the dating part. there was this guy i really like alot and he was so nice to me then all of a sudden he started ignoring me and now i feel like he treats me less then the dirt he walks on. i feel so low.

bri

awesome poem, great rhyming, really gets the story and feeling across. love it!

Macaila

i really liked this poem it really felt like it was really happening it was like i was in tha poem tha way you expressed it i really like it

ASHA

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL POEM! PREPPIE, YOU REALLY CAPTURED THE WORDS BEAUTIFULLLY ON PAPER, THAT CAPTURED MY HEART. THREE CHEERS FOR PREPPIE!

Haley

Hey. wow that Poem was amazing! seriously! I'm a poem writer and that was better then any poem i have ever written and its right up there with one of the best poems I've ever heard! Keep writting! ~!~ Haley ~!~

breana

the poem wuz excellent

angel

WOW!It really does hurt when think something is going to last and all of a sudden it all ends. Great poem keep it up!

Samantha

i really liked this poem alot and i would enjoy if this person send me another one of there poems like this because just by reading one of these poems it inspers me to do better in life !

Ashley

This poem is far by one of the best I have ever read before, just by reading this poem, you know that this could happen to you one day. I love this poem so much your a good writer/poet

Trisha

this poem was a good one for real

Raven

I really love this poem because it has so much feeling and it is also deep . All I have to say is keep riting because you inspire me.

Christina

I can relate to this poem. I was just in a recent relationship that reminded me of this poem. I thought the poem was very deep.

CiNdY

That's a great poem. describes what happened to me once. Love it! 8)

sayo

omg i cried it was so sad and good it reminds me that love can be cruel and that maybe i'm not the only 1 hurting and that i should smile for the good times now because i might not be able 2 smile later

maria

wow nice poem deep too

farhiyo

i really love your poem and i really touched me cause i haev a lover like that so i hope everything worked out for you okay and keep on writing those poems for us cause people that haev been thour wht u have been thour will read that so good luck.

vanessa

I REALLY LIKE YOUR POETRY BECAUSE I FEEL ALL THE AMOTIONS THAT WAS GPING ON IN THE PEOM I REALLY LIKED IT GOOD JOB YOUR WORK HAS BEEN COMPLETE KEEP WRITING MORE POEMS OK

Blanca

I think it was a really good poem and u expressed ur self and those are exactly the words that i wanted to say to my ez boyfriend

Alisha

I loved this poem.

Jasmin

This is a really true poem. I think you did a really good job on it. Keep up the good work and be sure to write more poems, I'll be sure to read them. I've had the same feelings before and I didnt think any1 had been through the same thing and felt the same way I felt before. -Jaz

i loved that poem is was very unique. i feel the same way bout my boyfriend. he was the nicest thing then one day he jus flip the script on me. love hurts. dont it keep up the good work

leemah

this poem was ment for me about my ex

Trouble

I really liked your poem, I thought it was good. Something like that happened to me and my boyfriend he broke up with me but now we are back together so hopefully it works out this time.

Jonathan

I love it. Who ever made wrote this, they should get a medal.

Darcel

This is a very good poem because it speaks out,and let people know that a man can hurt a women as well as she can hurt him!

jessica

i like it because it tells a story of what some women actually go through.

mini

I love your poem

Niki

This is a great poem it describes many teen relationships luckily I have not been in one of these relationships and I hope I never end up in one. I Love poetry I am a poet myself but I write poems of sadness and I got a few of Love that I had for a very close friend of mine. He was the best guy I knew back in my Home state. But this is a great poem I really liked it. Sincerly Niki Mckeag Age 17

Melisanda

I really like this poem because its true about do some of the guys out there. It touched me because the guy she was talking about is just like the guy I like and it wouldn't be a surprise that he come out in the news dead or in jail. It will hurt me a lot.

Terry

This poem really touched me it's like is exatly what I whent thrue. whith my boyfriend for like 3 years he was so nice and then 1 day he just stared treating like I WAS WORTHLESS! I'm really amazed your poem is very good you should keep on doing this it looks like your good at it.

Ashley

This peom was awesome. The rymes flowed together and it all mixed right. Be sure to keep writing! You can do anything with a little help from the power of words!

Genny

I love this poem it made me cry ,thats wat happend to me exeped the last part

Lauren

Your poem truly touched me. I am 14 years old and my boyfriend broke up with me recently. I truly think i was in love with him. Your poem sounds like our relationship and one day i hope he regrets what he did, but until then all i can do is wait.

jasmine

this poem was the bomb! whoever wrote this i give you mad props, i love poetry and this one by far was the best one. !

shanika

this is an sweet and true poem! keep it up!

Stephanie

I think this is the one of the greatest peoms I have ever read in my life! It's a very good peom.

Shelby

I like your poem alot it is really cool. It kind of sounds like me and i hope you can write more poems like that.

kirstan

keep up the good work!

Brittany

This poem really touched me it made me start to cry.

Chiquita

I feel you on the poem. Its like I just went through a situation similar to this poem. Good Job!

Samantha

I love this poem because it's how I feel about my boyfriend and I at a time.

debora

your poem is very nice. i liked a lot because i know that's true by self experience. good luck and write more poems

India

I loved what you wrote even though I was hoping it would end like a fairy tale. But thats life! It was so deep! But so beautiful Thanks 4 writing and sharing!

Brianna

This would describe my old relationship. Great Poem!

Tiffany

this poem was wat exactly happend to my best friend

Griselda

i really really like love this poem it so what teenegers pass through these days in theyre relashionships i would rate this poem 100

Sara

THis was touching because the EXACT i mean the EXACT same thing happened to me!

nene

i like this poems

michelle

i thought this was an exclant peom that realy move me althought im still quite young and have never experinced real love your peom was very touching cheers Michelle

whitney

i love it it reminds me of my first love matt i thought i loved him and i thought he loved me then a month later we split cause of his friends and i thought my world was coming to an end ut it wasnt and i was wrong so i picked up the pieces and moved on !

Isaiah

This poem was great. I was very touched by this poem because i'm really going through the same thing with my girlfriend

cynthia

the poem is true about me i know how you fell i had a boyfriend who was like that and that is a great to express you self.

Kathy

i love it i hope you win alot of money and great comments for your poems. its very touching

Lover

I don't know why but i related to every single word in this poem. Even the date and everything i really enjoyed it i even cried for my ex!

shauna

i love this so much

Cyndi

I really liked this poem I can really relate to it.

mandy

i loved it. it reminds me of myself in each and every one of my relationships

Adelina

This poem touched me so much i could of cried. This poem can probably relate to every single girl without a doubt. Good Work

Lauren

This poem has touched my heart in a thousand ways. I thought i was the only girl out there who was desperately in love with a boy. But Preppie, i have just read your poem which shows emotions exactly the same as mine. I know EXACTLY how you feel, because me and my boyfriend have just split up and i knew it was coming. I dreamt of marrying him and all the wonderful things you described. But teenage love isnt like that is it. It stinks! I thankyou for writing this poem, you have made me feel so much better now that i know i am not alone. Us girls should definately stick together!

melanie

i loved this poem because it touched me cause i know what it was like to go through it and have those feelings.

chelsea

This was a beatiful poem. It reminded me of what I am going through now. I love this guy, and we have been going out and breaking up for 2 years, and i always think it's my fault. I have to hide my relationship when i was at school. But that poem really reminds me of our history. One night he was sweet as can be, the next day it was like he wasn't the same person. We wouldn't grow together. It felt so fake at one point I wanted to give up. We are still together today. But I just wanted to let you know that it really hit home.

Jatoria

i like the poem because its a poem i'm sure alot of girls or maybe even boys could relate to. i never had a boy i was in love with end up the news but i can relate.

apple

after reading this poem, it really expresses my feeling as i am going through this stage now. everything is so unpredictable. we must learn to be strong.

shayla

man i really loved this poem cuse i can really relate to this this poem is so related to me afta i read it i juss cryed cause i kno how it is to feel like that and i kno it hurts and it is somethin that you wil neva for get ya kno well holla back at cha gurl

BNSG

I LOVED UR POEM, B/C IT DESCRIBES MY PRIOR RELATIONSHIP WITH A FELLOW STUDENT OF MY'N. I LOVED HIM DEARLY AND THAT'S WHEN IT ALL TURNED BAD. HE STARTED TREATING ME LIKE THE DIRT BENEATH HIS FEET AND WHEN I CONFRONTED HIM ABOUT IT, HE ONLY DENIED IT. I MISS HIM, I REALLY DO. AND IF YOUR READING THIS Z_C_ GON_A_ES,I NOT ONLY MISS YOU,BUT I LOVE YOU TOO!

Angela

this poem is so nice this is one of the poems that im gonna give to my boyfriend

shannel

I LOVED YOUR POEM AND IT TOUCHED ME SO VERY DEEP BECAUSE I WENT THROUGH THE SAME THING YOU DIDAND TILL THIS DAY I CAN'T GET OVER IT.

jerseylyn

wowwwwwwww! what can i say? this one really touched my heart. i can relate in this poem and i felt that its sincere. its the best,, its for every teenage like me who fell inlove.

kevin

thank you for this me and my gurl friend are suprised by how nicly vell this is.

Rebecca

This poem is AWSUM! :p . Its so true and is exactly how most relationships happen. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved it! it really touched me and i felt so close to the person who wrote this.

genesis

oh my god thats just how it is with me and this guy ryan and it sucks all he does now is treat me like dirt and it took me until now to come out and say it

abdul

amazing and lovely. but so true

cierra

this poem was excellent i really understand falling in love with the wrong man and believing that you could change him and his relationship with you was different. Remember you can do all thing threw Christ that strenghten you Phillipan 3:13. Be Good!

Ashley

????what happened to the boy???** Luved the poem. very touching. is it a true storey??

Catherine

This was a great poem and it really hit the spot. I have heard but like this one the best. I write poems all I want to know is what puts you in the mood to write poems.

nikki

good

mary

nice. it was sad. but i know one can do better. keep on trying ~mary~

Felicia

I really like this poem because it happened to me when i was going out with this one guy for a year and it really brought back memeries and i really wanted to cry when i read it but i didnt and now i am going to print this poem and but it in my box were i write my poems at so who ever wrote this thank you it really got me.

Kieara

I really liked it

Denise

hey, what's up? i know how you feel. i lost the love of my life.

olga

I could really relate to this because this is what the love of my llife did to me and now we are just friends but well that still works. I was so very touched and it was so well composed.

DOna

i like the poem and think the person that wrote it did a good job at writting it

priscilla

I think that this poem has a lot to do with my boy friend! I like everything but not the last part.

sasha

i love your poem

Ashley

my ex boyfriend was exactly the same way everything would be good and then suddenly it wouldnt. untill i found out he ws cheating on me with his ex. I still cry at nights whaen I think about how we used to love each other so much. but its all in the past.

Veronica

This poem remind me on what happend to me and my ex. I read it and made me cry. I give my congratulations on whom ever wrote this.

Roxy

This poem is really touching and happens often. 1st you think everything is going to perfect and then wow! Suddenly everything has change and you never expected it. You think why? But never really get to know the answer. This poems relates to many situations and I think that this poem is really touching and meaningfull. It lets you think about your own realtionship with the one YOU love. This poem has touched my heart.

Jenn

I really liked this poem i think its very true because somethin lik dis happened to me 2 before.

Kayla

I really loved this poem. It kind of made me think of my ex boyfriend. I was so happy with him, then he just changed. but any way's i love your poem. It's great. ~Kayla~

jade

i have only just began to get in to pomes, and with this one. it touched me in a way that i thought that has only happen to me with how yor ex has treated you and you thought it was your falt well our bad thank for this pome love jade

Shirley

I thought this poem was so beautiful it almost brought a tear to my eye. It reminds me of my ex-boyfriend. Wonderful Job!

meghan

i think this poem is great beause just abou the same thing happened between me and my exboifrind. just things went a little different.

Kourtney

Your poem is the best poem that i have ever heard. It had re***y tuched me i went through that same tradgic. He and I are so close now we are best friends I heard he likes me again and I hope that you and your boyfriend can become friends again like we are.

David

Right on. keep it up.

DASHA

i love this poem

alicia

i absolutely love this poem it touched my heart so much and i can relate to it so much i love this poem.

Marlene

I Love this poem it hits a certaint place inside and makes you realize it has happened to you.

Julie

Out of 1-100 I would vote this a 101 cause this poem explains everything bout me and this is how i really feel

sharon

Oh my gosh

Brittany

i just wanted to let you know that i love your poem and it touched me.

Vallencia

i love this poem because it reminds me of one of my ex boyfriends

April

hEY THIS POEM REALLY TRULEY TOUCHED ME BECAUSE ITS EXACTLY HOW I FELL RIGHT NOW IT MADE ME CRY I LOVE THIS POEM!

sabrina

tHIS POEM WAS SO SWEET AND IT REALY TOUCHED ME!

nesha

I really like dis poem it make me think real hard about boys like u don't know which one is Mr. Right but keep up da good work and may God bless with more poems to write.

Chelsea

I think that this poem was very touching because it talked sort-of about the real world. Because males in geeral will start acting different from when you first were with them. So i say that this poem was excellent!

ally

i absolutley loved it

corinne & christina

omgsh! this poems is so true. guys will be the thing you hope and pray for and then, he turns his back on you and leaves you cold in the dust. ladies be careful! much luv to all corinne and christina

lashona

HTIS POEM IS AMAZING IT IS SO TRUE! I LOVE IT AND I HOPE OTHERS WILL TO!

keepin it

i going through the same thing

Samantha

great poem! it was the best so far.

michelle

this is sooo close to home touched me very much i write dark poems and could never understand how to express love

Lyly

That is a great poem. It talks about something that can happen in real life

Mary

this poem was wonderfull. you have some real talent and dont let it die i always want to be a poet and poems like this well it inspires me. so keep up the good work. sincerly mary roman

andre

me and my gurl have some problems it touched me

Mysteryluv

Im trully touched by this poem. it seem like i have the same situation like u

amber

this is a very grate poem that reminds me alot of my ex boyfriend david who was all a suden there then found a new girl.

Michelle

this poem was really good cause it, kind of happened to me. it was good.

LaWanda

I had this kind of relationship with my last boyfriend, but the only reason why I didn't cry was because at the same time i was messing with someone who treats me much better. So I hope that u have meet someone who treats u like you his # 1 queen because I know that's what kind of boyfriend I have now and he is real good to me. Well I hope u keep writing the good poems because this kind of relationship happens to the everyday girl. Anyways, have a good life.

rebecca

THIS IS SOMETHING I CAN LOOK AT EVERY DAY

Elizabeth

This is a GREAT poem. I understand exactly were you were coming from. Love truly HURTS!

rachael

last saterday at about ten oclock i split up wid my bf lewis i thought he was so nice but he changed and i wondered y. the poem just fits so much i onli wish i had wrote it myself.

Jemma

your poem just touched me deep inside, it had truth about it as i could relate to it.

Jackie

I feel you truly my boyfreind did the sane. But, at least he didnt leave for another girl. I cried just like you. But, now I know life goes on. With or with out him. Even if I miss him so much. But that the way life choose it to be.

LaRosa

i like this poem

Brittany

this poem was so sad but good to this one is one of the best ones i've read

Jennifer

your poem was great!

krystin

This poem remindes me of some thing that happened to me . At first every thing was great then one day it went down the drane. I blamed my self for every thing that happened to us even know it was him . It took me a wile to get over him I thought I would never love again but give it time and rember there is someone out there that will love you like you deserv to be loved.

Tamela

I think this poem is alot like me and my boyfriend he is doing these exact same thing he don't call me i call him and he don't speak i have to speak he looks the other way.

Jade

I thought that this poem was very heartfelt and touching it sounds like it came straight from the heart and i respect people like that. Keep up the great work

florence

I like this poem i hope this author write more poems like this

keia

this poem was very good it touch me from the heart and im happy to say im not only one that feels that way.

Jorden

this is such a great poem it. i felt like i could relate to it.

Brittany

I think it was execellant it was so sad and iwanted 2 cry!

Delaney

the poem was exactly how i felt 2 DAYS AFTER MY B. DAY. he broke up with me. im only 13 but there is a lot of me!

Andrea

This poem is the very well like by me my name is Andrea and im 15years old and im was looking for a poem for a school project and im going to pick thins one its really helps and i will share it with friends

alexandra

this poem touched me ,because its ture . U think every thing is going great ,until u really get to know that person ,well

kisha

this poems was really touchin and i just had a friend pass away but i did not find out about it over the news i was talkin to a friend and she got a call tellin her that our friend kelly god rest his soul was just in a car accident and that he did not make it. i loved the poems and i hope to read more

Ebony

The only words i have is that it was great. keep up the good work!

La'Trese

This was very good. I can really relate.

amanda

this was great i mean it was exaclty how i felt with my boyfriend b4 he broke up with me.

army

it's nice!

faith

good

Stephanie

Hey my name Stephanie I will and always love this guy i dated. We have dated for i think two years on and off. And I do love him and everyone says its just puppy love. But he was so sweet when would go back out and then he just stop coming ot see me or ingored me when he would bring his friend around.

margaret

that poem was great my ex boyfriend did the same to me we are not together anymore he is with my best mate

Colleen

I loved this poem it was starting to make me cry. It sounds like my friends got love like that. Thanx it was a lovely poem. I really liked a lot!

coco

The reminds me of me and my boyfriend but he is still living but one minutes he is all sweet the next he is snapping at me

brittany

oh my gosh this poem totaly relates to me and my boyfriend now. i have tried tofind a way to keep out relationship true but he jsut ignores me. but my love for him is so strong that i cant bring my self to say goodbye.

andy

It's truly beautiful, I feel it is one of the best poems I have ever read.

Marissa

I rly liked this poem cause i can realte to it. I like that you wrote this poem about what was in your heart. They're not worth it hunny, i know it hurts but life goes on. take care! xox

desirae

I love this peom i can relate it to my ex-boyfriend leaving him was the best thing that can happen to me becuz now i am in love with this guy that cares for me the same amount as i do

Melanie

This poem was awesome! Good job.

Carla

i loved this poem i went through something like it with my boyfriend but fortunatley we didn't end in a breakup. everything got better and we are very happy now :-)

Riah Mae

It was pretty good!

Aarika

This was an awesome poem. It was written beautifully, I could easily relate!

brittany

I liked your poem it touched me because i have been thur something like that. keep up the good work.

tiara

i also liked this poem alot because it's so true, how things could be all good one minute and then take a turn for the worst because of no good reason

Lorraine

I loved ur poem, write more poems

gabee

this poem actually explains what i really felt with my ex-boyfirend and what happened

stephanie

That poem was really7 toching it gave me a tinkle

Shardae

this was vey nice

DANIKKA

WOW, THAT IS WHAT I AM GOING THROUGH RIGHT NOW. THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME WAY TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS.

Hope

This poem is NANG. Although it is very very sad. I hope she's okay, but i think that she should write more poetry because it is obviously a GIFT.

stormy

it was really good

stormy

it was really good

Autumn

Hey, I really liked this poem, though I'm not sure why, It touched me in some way, I've never been in a relationship exactly like that but one really close to it. But your a really great poet keep up the good work!

MIGUEL

I loved this poem bacause the things they are talking about happend in my relationship. All i can say is this poem really touched me.

Shakora

The Poem really touched me. The same thing happen to me and my ex-boyfriend.

kerry

This poem is so very true! thats exactly how it is too. im 15 and have had many b/f so far and they have all told me wounderful things and then finished with me like months later with no reason or explanation! I think this poet must have had quite a few moments like mine! and i hope shes happy now:)

hailey

kool

shanice

that poem reminds me of my experiences keep it up you will make it big one day! -shanice

ashley

i just want to say i love ur poem b/c that exact thing happened to me. i had a boyfriend and we were togther for 2 years and we were getting close we were argueing a lot here lately but then one day when i got home he called and said it was getting to serious and he needed space. so i felt like i was going to die b/c i loved him so much but we broke up a day after our 2 year anniversary.

Boom

I think this is a very nice poem. A little bit sad, but a nice one.

Olivia

good!

Amanda

This poem is really good. I loved it, it reminded me of me and my b/f. were just getting things back on track.

Alyssa

Wow, it makes you think of all the times that you had lost some one in a realationship. you have a mind dont let any body tell you different.

Lindsey

This poem reminded me of my first love, his name was Landon and I thought that it was very good. !

Zoe

Your poems almost made me cry. The same thing happened to me. he was my world and the same thing in ur poem happened when it sad he was sweet one night and two days later he started be mean well yeah one night my boyfriend curled up to me and told me he loved me so much and the next day before i went school he kissed me and sad i was the best then i come home and all his stuff was backed and said he changed his mind. i thought i was going to die and of course i tried to stop him but he wouldnt listen. But anyways sorry for boring but i just wanted to say ur peoms was great!

shorty

This poem is really good! my friend is going throw something just like this! I'm oging to send it to her. keep up the good work

Cynthea

I loved this poem it was very good and i know how you feel.

aurora- lee

love it!

Cayenne

I think this poem is great! I love the meaning and the point thats getting through. Its just what a lot of other people go through.

cora

i loved this poem it reminded me of me a month ago it was the worst day of my life i was just like this girl i thought everything would be so great but i guess everthing was a lie he was acting teh whole time o well though im so over it now i dont even care anymore i cried enough for that loser well i really liked this poem

Grace

This is the best poem ive ever heard. I am a teenager and this has happened to me until now people have said I was stupid for feeling like this and Im just really glad to know that im not the only one that feels like this. I just want to say i have heard a lot of poems and this one really touched me whatever dont stop writing poems you are such a good poet.

Lindsey

The poem touched me so much because it was all about pashenate feelings and true feelings.

erica

this poem touched my heart

Candace

This poem it has touch me in so many ways to the point i needed to cry. so many words can express but this one just not only express it has more.

brittnee

awesome

Capri

I loved the poem. I could really relate to it on each line. At the end, i was about to cry. I am 13 and have many love scenes like this one. I LOVED IT!

Brittany

Your Poem really touched me!I can really relate to it. Keep up the good work!You're great at it.

Noelle

this poem really touched me because this is how i felt about my ex-boyfriend. at first he was the sweetest person in the world to me and then he just changed one day and broke my heart.

misfa

i was really touched cuz it makes me think.

Charlene

I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was sad and touching. It was deep with emotions and I felt your pain. I could ralate even if I didn't experience it. But I have went through something simliar to this. Great write. Keep up the good work :)

saysha

this poem was a really good poem it had a lot of meening and was very true

anthony

i liked the poem a lot. it was deep and very sophisticated

ashley

this poem really touched me ,it reminder me of one of my ex. boy-fds. it sad in a way,but its sweet

Heather

I think this poem was great, it didn't really pertain to me but it does to a friend of mine

Nastacha

A really liked this poems and i just wanted to say that you really touched me and that you have my vote!

melinda

This is a great poem. It really touched me.

Daniella

Wow that was so like related to me and how my relationship WAS! Really Great Poem!

Josephine

I Love it. Great job who ever wrote this poem.

shardaye

this poem means so much to me i absolutely luv it

courtney

Ive been through this situation not too long ago Im still not over what happened. this poem brought tears to my eyes as i recalled the night it happened.

paula camille

id like the way the words goes. it really help me to realized that in my case i haved so much loved the person that i thought that can be ith me for the rest of my life. its great and fun to read.

Kenye'da

i think the peom was very realistic. As young ladies we face these sort of situations everyday and it was so Intriguing to read such a creative way of speaking the truth!

sarah

I love this poem . Its so true first they love you then they dont. I guess there is no rose without thorns though!

Janae

This poem was really good! I loved every word of it.

Chelsea

I Love Your Poem Chick! It reminds me exactly of what this guy is doin to me right now. He tells me he loves me then he ignores me for bout 3 days then calls back and says he is sorry and he really does love me and all this junk. and i feel stupid cuz i keep going back to him and i know he is gonna keep playin me and crap!,

khou

this is such a great poem=)

Julia

This just happened to me my friends he said he loved me and he would do anything for me and i let him take advantage of me b-cuz i thought he really loved me but, it turns out he didn't now i kno justt b-cuz you love them doesn't mean they love you bck even if they say they do This poem means everything to me now !

diadrah

i really liked this poem! and it tells the truth about how some girls feel

ashley

I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE ME AND MY BOYFRIEND WAS GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING AND I WOULD ALWAYS TELL HIM I LOVED HIM BEFORE WE WENT HOME FROM SCHOOL BUT WHEN HE GOT AROUND HIS so CALLED FRIEND HE WOULDN'T EVEN TALK TO ME AND HE ACTED LIKE HE DIDN'T KNOW ME SO ITS OVER BETWEEN ME AND HIM NOW SO I DONT KNOW HIM EITHER! BUT I LOVE THIS POEM I MIGHT NEED TO SEND THIS POEM TO HIM AND LET HIM KNOW HOW IT FEEL'S! BYE YALL I LOVE YOUR POEM

verlyn

this ppoem relates to me in so many ways i treated him wrong and i regret .

MICHAEL

I LOVE THIS POME IT REALLY GOT TO ME

tanya

I like this poem because i went through the exact same thing, and it all happen the exact same night just an hour difference. I love this poem!

Teonna

i like that pome for some reason that sound like what im going though with this one guy but it all kool

Christina

great job

chloe

I loved this poem! It describes whats happening with me perfect!

Adienne

this poem really touched me because i been through the same thing and after this peom i really know now that's it's not my fault

Constacne

Hello my name is constance dear and i live in wichita ks. I am sixteen years old and this poem reminds me of my last boyfriend everything was going so good untill one day he ended up going back to the hood and it changed our whole relationship. he thought that he had control over me untill i told him that i didnt wont to be with him,he hit me and everything else you can name and now that i have the lord everything has changed. I write poems now check out some of the websites their beautiful. Talk to you kater your poem was beautiful

Angie

I love this poem! it is so true. I am going through the same thing. The only thing is that I haven't heard of the news wheter we are through.

Amanda

This poem is very youching. It in facts describes the feelings in which I am feeling tonight.

Candace

Me and my Exb/f are having prolems and this poem really sounds beautiful.

red

T he same thing happend to me. But it wasnt the same thing my bot friend went to gerat falls with my best friend. I know how u feel always red

matthew

it is cool. that i rapped it while i read it.

Courtney

This poem shows the real meaning and feelings of teen love. It show exactly how a male would act toward love from a female. I really liked this poem and whoever wrote this has a goog sense of creativity and is a true artist at heart.

ashley

this poem really means something to me, because this exact thing was happening to me. but just want to let everyone know that there is always someone out there that isnt going to hurt you and there is always someone that truley loves you!and i think i finally found that person!

Maggie

i loved this poem because thats exactly what happend to me!

Janette

I loved this poem, it reminds me about me and my ex. I broke-up with him last week because I was getting tired about how he was treating me and i feel better about the choice i made. I still love him because he's my best friend and i've known him for so long but now I just prefer being friends with him and we still talk and hang out but nothing more. So your poem really touched me alot. Thanks and keep up the good work.

Amanda

I luv ur poem so much it makes so much sincea bout guyz and keep up the good work!

Jamila

This is so beautiful. It relates to my very situation. Preppie, you are very talented keep writing from the heart.

tessa

this poem really touched me as ive jsut split up wiv my boyfriend that i ahd been wiv for 6 months, it al sounded just how our relationship was always so nice then right near the end jsut changed to beign horrible then nice for a week again then bk being horrible then it was over.

Brittany

This poem really got to me. I have been writing since i was in the sixth grade, so for 4 years i have been writing, and this is real. It touched me in the sence that, that's exactly how it is. You get to know him, fall in love, hope it never ends, and he breaks your heart, and you never want to forgive him. It happened to me, i never thought it would, but it did. He asked me out, i fell in love and i thought he felt the same way, and he broke my heart. I got over it but i still wanted him. We got back together only to break up ten days later, i loved him, and he left me, broken, cold, and alone. My heart was abandoned by my first love.

Gemma

This is probably one of the best poems I've ever read. It made me cry in the first stanza. This author is exellent! She shouldnt feel so down but if it takes all that to write poetry like this, then, YOU GO GIRL!

Claudia

I like this poem very much because I could relate to it. Just resently me and my boyfriend of 2 years broke up. I thought it would also last forever but it did not. I really love your poem! =D

lanae

I really did like this poem. Its very touching. Its real

nicole

this poem is soo true it happens to other people all the time.

Cedric

its true and inspiring

tiffany

this poem is very well written it shows alot of emotion that some one has for a guy then the relationship just end like that. i made me think that all relationship are not perfuct and every one will get hurt at some point in their life some sooner then others. who every wrote the poem was very good at poem writing.

Stephanie

This poem touched me directly because I was in a relationship just like this one so I understand perfectly.

Danielle

i really like it becuase someone i was in love with died becusae his bother shot him i cried for months and months i just not got over of it

stew

well i think this is true because if u love someone u then think they are perfect and u remember all the good stuff so when bad stuff happens u just think its a phase cuz all u remember is them being perfect. lifes good enjoy it stew

Kayley

this poem is so touchin, itz a great poem, and really touches ur heart.

Eva

This poem touched me so much. Although I am very young(14), I was in love with a guy and it's been 5 months since we've broken up and I do still think of him every now and then. I like to write poems and ever since that happend thats pretty much what almost all my poems are about. I really like to read other peoples poems and try to relate and compare with my situation. Anyways, I really enjoyed the poem and I will try to move on.

stephany

ur poem inspried me. i am in the same situation but gurl keep ur head up men come and go like water

ashley

I think this poem is very hart touching

Nicholas

This peom shows how most guys are and how girls love him even if he turnhis back on her until they find another guy

Danielle

it was awesome