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And Yet I Die by Marilyn

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Ameera

You really touch my heart, your words was so beautiful ans touch. God Bless You!

Cristine

I really appreciate ur poem i can relate it 4 my self dat the most important things to do in ur life thatu have do something b4 its too late or should i say do the noble things.

kathy

If only I could have put it like that in my own words!Ive felt like that for so long. But you know. you do see the good things,or you wouldnt have been able to write about them. Please keep up your writing. I think your really talented. Want to see more.

Tabbethie

Marilyn, your peom was so touching, and at the same time it is so sweet. i just want to thank you for that poem.

Vanessa

I loved ur poem, i suffer from depression so i get kinda how ya feel! but hopefully soon i will get 2 feeling better cuz i'm on medicine and i got help b4 it was 2 late!and i hope u can b strong, cuz poems r ur power, mine help me 2 cope!

Laura

this poem is really good, i always feel this way. it's beatiful.

Jen

I almost started crying while reading this. You can still feel the warm breeze and gaze at the roses with dew, but inside, your heart is slowly dying. This poem was so touching, and I loved how you were able to express the way you felt. Always remember that there's someone out there who will never let you down, and is always smiling for you. God bless you.

Joy

The poem touches me. It expresses what I am feeling at this moment.

SAIRA

one of the most sweetest poems i've ever read. the meanings are so deep u got me almost drowning. :) keep up the good work cheers.

simon

couldn't have put it more acurately. It sums up the beauty around quickly, then hides it away to be seen but not reached. Something i feel a lot these days.

ian

i can relate to this poem in a way. life is peacefull and yet nothing lasts for ever. this poem makes you think and reflect. all good poems make you do this, so this is an exceptional poem. peace

missy

Wow you've summed it up perfectly. Great job

Jasmi

i can totally relate to your poem, i feel the same way. keep on writing, it was beautiful!

Annalisa

I really love this poem!I feel like this almost every day of my life and it means so much to me.Good work!

Sadist

I love the poem, as i totaly relate to it and feel exactly the same. Well done Marilyn. Keep writing. It expresses the real you.

Ellie

trying to explain to people how you feel is difficult, it's sometimes easier to just pretend like there's nothing wrong...you summed up my feelings very well....have forwarded it to a couple of friends...to help them understand how lonely life can be...even when you're not alone.

Bobette

This is a wonderful poem - it shows your soul. I know to well how it feels to be dead inside. Thanks for sharing this!

I loved this poem, it really reminds me of my own life. ~smile~

Nuno

This poem is just ...wow... it's amazing. it's what i feel everyday of my life. its beautiful.

Linda

It speaks volumes. Only those who feel this way may understand its true meaning. I understand! Excellent poem.

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