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If These Walls Could Talk by Christelle Duvenage

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jake
yo yo, this poem was just yo cool
elva
omg i loved this poem so much! its so true!
Marie
this poem is so touching! i love the style it is written in and how you can tell the author really got into writing her poem with the amazing details!
lynette
i loved your poem it is so good it reminds me alot about my life.
Amy
I love this poem. It akwardly explains how I've felt lately even though I don't even know why. I LOVE YOUR POEM!
Deanna
this is 1 of the best poems ive heard so far! thats because cause i can relate to it, probably as much as u. except for the last part.
Kai
Yes there is one! I was very touched by this poem cause it descirbes me and how I feel! Then It got me thnking what if the walls could talk??? Then if they did. they will tell everybody the same thing described in your poem! You are a really great poet and should be recognized by the world! not on the computer!
manda
wow! this poem was great. it really touched me.
Pinka
Thank You. You have spoken what my mind,heart,and words can't say. ^-^ Thanks.
Nicole
This poem was truly touching, keep up the good work!
octavia
the poem was very touchin. and sad but at least it made it made a point.
faiza
It's a perfect poem
T.J.
we are one in the same man. i feel ya. Try getting outside and just look at nature and think about it,thats what i do. Great poem.
pauline
This is the greatest in the world. Something inside me just blossomed like a beutiful saint of the great god. my excperiences were so the same as the masterpiece. i cried so hard when i read it because it related sooo deeply. the children at school bully but the poem evapourates my problems. BLESS YOU THANK YOU LOVE YOU
Tiffany
I loved this poem. I know how it feels to think your alone,but you've got to remember God is always with you & is not going to make you go through life on your own.
Felicia
I LOVE IT! IAM JUST NOW REALLY GETTIN INTO THE LORD AND I THINK IT WAS GREAT THANK YOU, I HAVE COME FROM MY DARKER DAYS NOW TOO !
bri
I love this poem it was really good! I hope there are more like this 1
Sasha
Beautiful
EDMEE
THIS IS ALL ME IT'S JSUT HOW I FEEL THIS WAS SO BEAUITFUL WODERFUL AND GOD GIVE YOU THIS TO SHARE YOU GIFT WITH OTHERS I LOVE IT I WLL GIVE IT A 20
silla
wow i relate to this poem so much. this poem helps me to realize im not the only one who feels alone. its great!
Irsis
Its a very inspiring poem.
Middleton
I loved the poem. My mother passed away in April and the poem described exactly how i feel. I want to tell the writer to keep up the good work and Thanks for writing the peom.
kimberley
that was realy cool i feel exactly the same as this poem has said if only walls could talk then wed noone would eva b lonly good poem keep it up.
Lern
been der before and I knew the feeling
Sheila
OMG! where should i beging this poem was amasing and incredibly well written. i have no words to express how wonderful this was!
ciara
I love this poem , it touch me in differents ways.
katie
this is exactly how i feel. i loved it. this poem reminds me alot about my self. you did so good writing this
lea
It is a very good poem thank so much for a nice poem. keep it up.
Ivy
This is one of the best poems I've heard in a long time. I felt like I had written the poem, like it was about me. Exactly, there wasn't one thing different than what I'm going through. Great job! I am going to paste this in my notebook.
Laura
I really liked that poem because of the reference to the demons haunting at night. I can relate to that. P. S. a reference to God is always awesome when its a positive one.
shahbaz
Its really nice poem, impressive
Demishea
thats was a great poem and if my walls could talk they would say the same thing.
Silent
Great poem! it reminds me of how i feel at certain times in my life.
tiffany
i appsolutly loved that i can trully relate 2 that it sounds like something that i've been going through recently i've been going through madd stuff so im slowing coming out of depression. and about the part with demons nice touch we've all gone through stuff we dont like or done something we regret and i opened the door 2 something really demonic but i am also slowing coming out of that and what i wanna say with all of this is that your poem really touched me and keep up the good work
Cheyne
this is truer than most people know. and it really takes apart in me.
jenny
i loved your poem it was so cool i printed it out and gave it to a firend and she loved the poem alot so thank you for writing this poem and it was awsome so keeep up the goood work ok bye
sherry
this poem is wonderful it spoke the words i always wanted to say , but could never find ,, i really enjoy this very much thank you
amra
i just really liked the poem.
Amanda
I love this poem I can so relate to this poem i just became a christian and before i became a christian there were demons around i could feel there presence but now there gone cause i believe in God and I scared them away.
Angelica
Ha!I really liked your poem.
Kameron
Your poem really touched me and related to a lot i was going through. I'm happy to know there's someone out there like me who knows and understands what I'm going through.
Leanora
I really liked this poem because i can relate to it alot
Tiffany
Hey i just wanted to let you know this is a poem that i feel on the real
Angel
this is a very good poem.
jessica
that was very good it relates to me in so many ways that one
Staci
I never vote and your written word touched my life. First time for me. Keep it up and continue touching lives. You DO make a difference.
Jennifer
i really love your poem I can see myself in it
Amanda
your poem gets five starz from me. i think this is a really great poem because it realtes to me and the things in my life. it deserves five gold starz
ashley
the first word that comes to mind is wow. this author should be totally proud of themselves. i love this poem! it describes a position i've found myslef i time in and time out.
anna
great poem keep writing
Brianna
hey this is such a great poem. it means heaps to me right now because of everything i'm going through in my life. you have a great gift with words, and know how to relate, thanx.
Aja
this poem is really good, even thoughit's a sad poem its ends with hope.
MARY
good job i like that poem alot
sydney
your poem as the most amazing thing i'v ever read it touched me like nothing had before
phathizwe
i really enjoy this poem i feel like i can read it again & again it really touches me i want to encourage the author to cotinue and do the good job
frances
I can relate to this poem, because i am going through aseperation and most likely a divorce.
erum
amazing poem. good job
Khristiana
Wow! that was excellent. I feel that way at times, and I even wrote a poem about my demons, and I sent it to a publisher. Anyways, all I wanted to say is God bless you, and hope the feelings stop.
suzynarita
Your poem has really touched my heart. It depicts my very own experience. The mixed emotions of anger, afraid and scared had been swirling in me for quite some time when someone I treasure most ditched me. On the other hand, as I read your poem I realized that somehow, somewhere God is watching and has indeed send me an angel to look after me in order to make me a better person. And I thank Him too for giving me this chance to "accidentally" surf this website and found your beautiful poem. My gratitude goes to you too. Your poem has opened my solemn eyes and has enlightened my melancholy heart. Keep up the good work
olivia
I really liked this poem because it reeally explains how i feel when i'm without one.
Kevin
Awsome Awsome poem. I feel exactly the same way about my life.
same
i loved your poem. you really spoke from your heart. I know how you feel just stick through it and you'll make it. you'll feel really good once you won the fight against life. it just takes a little bit of time.
Christine
I love this poem because I can relate to it in so many ways.
Mindy
I love this poem! That's how I feel. This poem shows how we express feelings, from a different light.
shannon
GREAT work
Katie
ohh my god! i luv this poem. it resembles me too! i luv it! great job. it's so sad
arus
that's how i sometimes feel. i really liked it. sometimes God is really my only hope and strenght, and i wish the walls could really talk cause i always find it hard to describe how i feel inside.
Annem
After reading this poem, it has made me realise that I am not the only one with these thoughts. Thankyou for expressing these feelings.
julia
this peom means a lot to me it makes me feel better about my self. it also tells me that i am not alone and not the only one going through that
Val
I could really relate to this poem and I just want to say that I hope you don't feel like you have to ba trapped anymore because Jesus has, and always will LOVE you!
uzma
i just love this poem a lot , as i have been through just like this and i write poems and i read it so many times and the more i read the more i feel i wanted to write this myself too, it is true reflection of what i went through as agoraphobic , i am in love with this poem
Tamie
Great poem it was very deep and moving and insiteful.
meg
I loved this poem very much. I write my own poems, and this tops them all. I can relate to this poem very much, and it is kind of scary. One of these days maybe you will see one of my own poems on this web site.
Robyn
This poem helped me to remember that I am not alone. Thank you for reminding me that I can always depend on God!
lacey
i thought it was great, keep up the good work
VICKY
when i read this poem it was like someone was telling me how i was feeling. i love this poem. its brill.
Zoe
i read your poem a while back and printed it out, i came across it the other day and it brought me to tears again. and i am on here now, i have read it and it has made my eyes bleed. i love it but because it describes my whole life in just 3 paragraphs. thankyou for letting me know there are others. god bless x
Brianna
wow this is a great poem and i love how you turn the sadness into happiness at the end by talking about god and how he heled you i have been depresed before and it is great to hear that im not alone thank you
Jewel
this waz great i can really relate to it i will show everyone this
suzzy
great poem its deep.
Angel
Great poem thar makes you think.
Charoula
this poem described my life in a few emotional lines,its comforting to know that out there i m not alone ,someone can put words on paper about all the pain and suffering a person goes through .put through by others.thank you for giving my pain words that would never come out
Jasmin
This is a beautiful poem, it really touched me, and let me know that there are others who feel the same way
Clarice
I really like your poem it has a lot of stlye. You have a lot of great talent. I loved this poem. Keep on doing what you do.
natasha
I really like this poem because it remines me that some times I feel the same way that this person was feeling.
Diana
So very close to the heart,can relate ,would love to share .
Elaine
This poem really touched me, it explains real emotions that all people feel at times.
Kacie
Hey I really like your pome. I can relate to this pome. It sounds like me I dont ever talk about anything and act like nothing is ever wrong.
Briana
This poem is wonderfully written. There is definately a lot of feeling and emotion here, a lot of hurt.
ShebaBaby
This is a very deep poem!
kathy
Very touching,real feeling poem
love
even though it is depresing i feel it is a good poem
Regina
My Mother remarried when I was 13, to an alcoholic. My Mother had always been physically abusive, but now I also had verbal abuse. Thank you for putting my feelings into words.
robin
Your poem was so uplifting. I loved it so much especially the ending of it when you wrote about that God is watching over us, so we're really not alone after all. Thank you for your wonderful poem...
Kristi
I know exactly what the author is talking about. It really touched my heart and put all my feelings into words
Ali
this poem is so sad. but very meaningful. trust me i know u feel.
Kary
Exactly how I feel. Is like the author is seeing through my eyes.
Julie
Deep, a lot of emotion, I could almost hear the pain crying out. Wonderful writing.
keali
I can feel the feeling in this wonderful poem......I understand. I've been there .......
Amanda
This is a very beautiful poem. I can relate to it in my own way and that makes it very good. It's just a very cool poem
Stephanie
It was a beautiful poem. It's hard to believe that someone feels the same thing that i feel.
keith
this poem is ever so true
wawaskones
after reading your poem, i don't feel so alone, now i know that some one else out there understands,thank you so much for that poem