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Corrupted Love by Angelgirl020

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monica
i enjoyed you poem it was very emotional but realistic.
shakena
this is sooo true.
Judd
This was beautiful. trite comment, I know, yet it's the only word that applies. I am, at the moment, involved with someone who will appreciate the feeling behind these words.
Josiah
Best lines for moments of swallowing gone love
Cassie
this was a really good poem it made me feel like someone was reading into my life i vote yes
jessica
i was feeling very low about this man i have the most amazing attraction to, i kissed him and it was the most perfect kiss you can ever imagen only to realise i can never have that feeling again as we can not be together. This poem discribes exactly how i felt and feel it is amazing and so perfectly writen i just hope you did not have this pain yourself. brillient poet.
Courtney
i could kinda relate i loved it
Joyce
I am having such a hard time dealing with my recent break up I been beating myself to death trying to understand what happened and how, this poem has helped me to understand I'm not alone, it touched every part of me my thoughts as well as how I've been feeling,questions i'v asked myself over and over, it is a releif to know this is normal, that I'm not loseing my mind keep up the good work, you never know how your word can help a person when they need it most. Thanks
ashley
this poem really touched my heart!
Katie
because i feel the same exact way don feel alone because you aint
Tasia
I like, I like!
carla
great is all i can say took my breath away
Brittany
this poem really spoke to me.
Steve
This poem explains completely how I feel. Because my spouse and I are having problems, the words in this poem expressed everything I have been feeling in my heart since she has been gone. Angelgirl020, thank you for writing this poem, because my feelings have now been put down on paper.
Alicia
I think that this is a poem alot of girls can relate to. She thought she was ready for a stronger love and that he was filling what she was but in turned out that it was just for that moment and everything that meant something left with him. Now she is empty and crying out for the love that no longer will answer.
debbie
my eyes are already sore frm crying
christopher
man u no how to write good poems
shanna
i totally vote for this poem it touched me and it is me so i guess that is to me why it is so good
megan
I relate to that cruel cycle of thinking every thing is great and in a second its gone. you said it better than i could. Glade im not alone.
Mharestel
Oh! that was really awesome. I mean it touched my heart so deep that I couldn't even stop the tears from my eyes.
Nichole
Awesome poem I give you props definently
Claudia
Yo Gurl. your poem almost made me cry, I Know how it feels when someone plays with your heart, and I totally relate to this poem, In a scale of 1-5 I give this poem a 5.
raven
i love your poem it is so awsome, i can relate to it alot, great work, hope to read more bye you!
MJ
Wow this is amazing, and while i love my boyfriend loads and am not in this position i will be one day and its amazing. wow. x-x-x
Kati
This poem can relate to anyone who's been ripped apart by a lover. In my case it was my choice to leave out of self-respect,but the actions that took place after the break up,left me so confused on what love really is, that I honestly don't want to love again. It's too scary to anticipate times that can be so good and then taken from you and it's too scary to anticipate times that can be so bad. I liked in the poem when she says,"Slowly the reality over powering the lust and fantasy, leaving me emty. " When a dream is proven to be impossible there is an emptiness that can't be filled. Builing a new dream can be like building a new house after your home burned down.
LyDz
WOW that was awsome, not that many poems relly grab mt attention as much as that did- I relly felt empathy for you- may all your dreams in life come true.
Jolene
This poem touched my heart and brought me to tears because I had just broken off my long-term relationship with my steady boyfriend, a man who was there beside me while I had watched my own Daddy die a long-drawn-out, agonizing death at the hospice. My baby love was a part of my now-dead Daddy, so now that it's over between me and him, a part of my Daddy left with him too. To lose a loved one by death is a killer; to lose two loved ones one by death and another by the inevitable "good-bye" is transcendentally painful enough to kill the strongest being alive--from the inside out.
damian
i love your poem so sad and heart felt
rachel
your poem has allot of meaning!
Bianca
This poem was a very touching poem to me. I love it and keep writing them so i can read more of them. Your number 1 fan!
angelo
how nice, it made me cry, just like mine love-life till now I had a lovesick.
kendrea
I really felt wat u were tryin to say in this and i loved it i can tell that u have been hurt just by the truth in this really liked you poem
felicia
you a very talented i feel the same way too
Emily
Absolutley wonderful poem. it truly touched me and I could relate to what this person is feeling. Thank you! You're brilliant!
angelie
Your poem really,really touch me. I guess that the poem is for me. hehehe. Anyways,it's really great and what touch me the most is that,you wrote what I feel. love yah. nice job! :)
Yashika
I found this poem touching to the heart. It said what many were feeling in their hearts but can't find the words to say them. Everyone has felt what your poem is about so it is a knock-out in the ring. Thanks for your inspiration.
Heather
Hi its heather again this poems seems to make me think of my ex fiance. his name was chris i really feel pitty for him in my hole in my heart.
Justin
great poem, and that recently happened to me. thank you for putting it into words.
Audrey
I really like this poem. There are alot of us that have felt that way about people. Keep doing what u do best!
Betty
I really like your poem alot. It reminds me of a relationship I just had. It really moved me because I really loved him.
red
This poem remined how my ex friend and boyfriend hurt me. Yhank u so much and God Bless.
lutap101
sometimes the reality of what a relationship can be is both, the most beutiful and the most ugliest of all. "Love can make you feel like you're on top of the wolrd or it can make you feel like your lower then dirt. " It always helps, releave the anger, the sadness, the betrayal, and the hurt one feels when we are reminded that we all go through these experiences. "With every silent scream that goes unheard and every tear drop that goes unnoticed, there is blessing hidden in the midst of our confusion. " Your poem descibe word for word what has transpired in my relationship.
Elsie
I could really feel what was happening in the poem, i don't mean this the wrong way(if you happen to be thinking it) but while and after i was reading it, i got this really strong image of the poem, especially from the beginning. . . I really liked it.
NICK
Great Poem !
Bree
this poem is so good i can actually feel how you were feeling when you wrote this. i can relate to how u feel as well
Stacy
I belive that your poems was real nice and that you are a god writer. And keep doing what you are doing
Vernon M.
Your poem touched the depth of my soul as though I was reading a mystery novel I couldn't put down.
Lucy
this poem made me cry and yet i really liked it. if the preson that wrote it reads this, your a very talented poet
Cassie
I write poetry and songs. This poem really touched me, and let me say, I know exactly how you felt or feel. Even though it dosen't seem now, you will get over him. He was obviously a jerk and if he didn't cherish your love, then he wasen't worth having it. Good luck gurl.
Destiny
Wow,this poem is all about me and i cant believe how much this relates to my feelings thanks for makin this beautiful poem! Destiny
Courtney Elaine
This was a really good poem. It explains exactly the way I'm feeling now in an unwanted situation that I put myself in . With no intentions to hurt myself. I thought the guy was for real, and now I'm left wondering what I did wrong to get this type of treatment. It's good to know that I am not the only person going through this.
Shelby
I love the poem it makes me feel as if I'm not the only one that lost someone after 7months of happiness and now only lonliness and sorrow. The poem is very good and is sad at the same time.
Jennifer
This was a truly awesome poem. It really made tears fall into my eyes. Bravo. This poem really hits the soul. Bravo once again.
katie
this one is really grate wonderful as well thanks for the read.
Theresa
I think it is great to bad you had to deal with it to write it . Peace!
nathaly
i loved your poem it touched me and it made me think of my exboyfriend i really really liked it muah muah bye take care GOD BLESS!
amy
what more can i say but you go girl you hit the nail on the head!my heart feels the way you have said and i thank you for letting me know that somebody other than me feels the same!
Joyce
wonderful! Made me cry!
Harash
its really a fantastic write.
Deon
i liked the poem it described what all of us feel at some time in our lifes
Megan
Oh my goodness i love this poem! (really everyone does say this lol) I am going something just like that now and it's really hurting. maybe if i say that poem to him he'll understand. good poem!
kayla
If you wrote this from experience. i just want you to know. I know how you feel.
minerva
i can really relate to this poem,and i know how it feels but it was a great poem
Travis
great poem this relates to me a lot but my girl was tooken away form me by my best friend so ya life suck and i wana die but other than that great poem
Ross
I wish I had wrote this, it speaks the words I cannot say and feels the intensity I have from day to day.
Kymberly
Oh my God I love that poem, it is so true and real. We often have false hope about love b/c we won't to find it so bad! I hope you stay strong and never let a man,women,nor love hold you down! GREAT POEM!
Kathy
i loved you poem that is how i felt when me & my ex boyfriend broke up. u know exactly what to say. great job!
monica
I think your poem was awesome and I really what you said, I share a similar connections.
Jessica
I liked you're poem. i found it rather good!
fawzi
hey i loved ur poem. it has so many meanings to it meanings that touched my heart deep inside. keep up all the good work. i loved it
tierra
WOW! that was EXCELLENT! I mean you really opened my eyes. I too have fantasies and now I know I am not the only one.
Nathalie
This was a really good poem. I could really relate to it. It happened to me, It's really sad when you find out that the person you love, was only playing with your feelings
Kemi
Your poem is soo good. You are telling it how it really goes. on and on never ending till he's gone. your good!Don't stop writing!
dolphin
i juz appreciate tis poems alot. i m not sure of how i m feeling nw. i love my stead alot. but it's juz tat he dun realli shower mi wif love. i dun feel happie 'bout tis relationship. n the poem express 'bout my feeling.
Willy
This is a great poem. (i know everyone says this but) i can relate.
letisha
You write very good. I understand exactly what your feeling my boyfriend did the same thing and sometimes I feel alone in a closed and empty space,but now I know I,m not alone and I'm not the only one .
D
I went out with this guy for 2 yrs and I put everything I had into the relationship and he just flipped out on me, your poem described exactly how I felt.
Nina
This poem really gets to the point, I went through such pain myself, but I don't know how to put it in a poem. you just did! Thank you million times.
Jeani
Bittersweet yet beautiful
CeCe
this poem rocks
Sara
this was a great poem i also just broke up with my boyfriend and i feel the same way. much love for all the lovers out there
Kelz
Ilove this poem so much! its talks about love, life and truth. Thank you for sharing it. I voted for this because it relates to my life.
Daisy
that poem so goes with tha way i fell for my first lost love. thank you so much for sharing that!
MaRiE
hay, well this poem is great, i really enjoyed reading it. hope u feel better. i have gone through that before but i have learned to be independent and move on to better things in life. dont let any guy make your life miserable, stay strong and always remember that u must always be independent and never let anyone or ANYTHING get you down.
Miz
I just discovered my fiance and a girl online have been sending lovemail and talking on the phone for the last 9 mos. This poem is so close to how I feel right now. Thank you .
mel
i can so relate. this is exactly what i feel. my best friend did this to me she went out with the guy i liked & was about to go out with. that hurt! i am glad that there is someone out there that feels the same way.
Alicia
omg get out of my head! i can say that this poem is the beast i hope you keep up the awesome writting!
Silly
This is a great poem I can totally relate to it. It hurts less to know that others share my feelings.
Tim
I love that poem its like you writing what Im thinking
sad
realli sad
serena
I just broke with my boyfriend and this poems discibe eveything i am feeling thank u
dana
nice it was so sad but it was kickbutt
Zomis
Hey! That's how I feel. good to know that it isn't only me.
Kaila
Wow! I read poems and try to relate them to myself. Its not very often that I read a poem and have it decribe an exact feeling that I have had in the past. This is an amazing poem
dede
I loved this poem. It expressed everything about feelings and loneliness. Very deep feelings.:)
Markuitta
I understand every part of your "TRUE" poem! keep it up and you'll suceed in life!
JENNIFER
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM BECAUSE I'VE BEEN THROUGH THIS MYSELF.
sharon
deep
Jennifer
you poem as inspired me.I am one to Feel likesit ad fall so deep in love.
Nina
I loved Your Poem thanks for sharing it....
Insane
Love is for suckaz, this poem epitomizes this idea. 2 thumbs up!
Krysten
I love that poem...It is kind of what I have been through in the past, that poem explains it all really good...you are a really good writer, keep on writing!
Lisa
Before I could even finish the poem I began to cry. I just recently been through the same exact thing. And this poem decribes everything I felt and still feel.
Sh0rTiE
This is a great poem! My boyfriend broke up with me & this explains how i felt exactly!
Yulia
this is a reaallly great poem. it uses everything in such a way, that you can even picture it all, and feel the same sorrow.
sonia
this is a very good poem!
martina
this poem was great and it shows exactly how i feel at times when i think my love has done me wrong and its the same feelings that i feel that are expressed in this poem i give it two thumbs way way up BABY!
Riggity
This poem is a truly remarkable expression of a beautiful young woman's pain. Bravo says I.Bravo!
totram
Good usage of words, very powerful meaning, I can definitely relate to the situation, it brought back unwanted memories, but showed that I can move on.
Jason
Very, very good poem.the pain i know all too well
sweetness181
I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE I BEAN THERE THANKS ALOT IT HELPS
Terri
This was really great!
vietasian20
the poem was very good i can relate to it .i felt that way onces the grul then she broke my heart.i would say this is the best poem . ps keep up the good work
Sharon
'Lost Romance' was so sad and beautiful. I could feel the want and need.
jjdbcakjfdv
This poem was so touching it broke my heart
Navarrete
I loved it, and just to read one's poem that frees someones emotions and can express them selves in wonderful words like these.
matt
I wnated to go jump off a bridge after reading this. No just kidding, it was very good, i think we can relate to the problem of being dumped, unless your me becdause i am the best
Christina
It really expressed exactly what I am going through right now, At least I'm not alone.
Adrian
Good representation on how i have felt in the past
Annette
This poem is very good. the author is very talented. It is very noticable that this author has had boy trouble. I just want to say good job to the author.
Delcie
all i relly want to good gradulation. keep up the good work
Angela
AWESOME USE OF WORDS
Michael
A wonderful enchanting trip through the mind of an empty, ever yearning soul. It reminds me of a girl that I've once dreamt about. This poem could only have been thought up by one really hot chick!
Jodi
This is a very good poem. It explains the loneliness felt when loosing a loved one; not neccisarilly just by death. How fast the happiness can come and go, leaving you dry and lifeless
Heidi
Great poem!
glo
wow-my thoughts and feelings exactly..
Pamela
I love this poems.It really does express a lot of emotion.Great work!
dawn
WOW. very deep. keep up the good work
JESSICA
I GIVE THIS POEM FROM A 1-10 I GIVE IT A 10
TAMMY
GREAT POEM.!!!!
bibi
hlllo there, a beautiful poem you've got there. i really liked it.