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A Soul Saved, A Heart Broke by Morgan Le Fay

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carly
i love this poem it reminds me of me it is a good poem #1 in my book
Jessica
This is a awesome pome. I have felt this way before too. Once again awesome pome.
amy
BRILLIANT! is the only word for this poem i have been searching for something like this far days now and finally i found keep writing the poems hunni!
Emilee
i love this poem because i felt like it was talking to me. i really enjoyed reading it and i think you should continue doing this. i wish i could write like you because it sounds like what you write comes from your heart and i'm not very good at writing or saying how i feel. So you should definetly keep doing this kind of stuff because you are really good at it.
Sammii Lynn
this poem was simply AmAzInG! i'm showing it to everyone i know!
nicolette
This poem caught my attention just by the title at first but then the words really got to me. It was a beauiful poem
tara
this poem is soo sad
DANIKKA
WOW, THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY.
natalie
This poem hit me so hard and made such an impact on me. Thank you so much to the author for sharing such a powerful message and telling such a heartbreaking story. Beautifully written and inspired.
joey
hey girl that was a good poem i loved it i hope nothin hsppend to u or u got hurt in any way juss wanted to let u know your really good at writin poems bye
gina
WOW. this is my first time coming to this site, but i have to say. that your writing has left a shadow of fien in my heart lol. meanin that you left me wanting more. gurl u go on wit ya bad self! that poem was HOTT~! keep up your touching poetry.
Chantel
i used to feel like thz until i met my romeo and he made the sun shine again. he calmed my waters.
Maria
this poe is soo good!
crissy
thats how i feel right now. i spent my nights thinking of him and the way he makes me feel when im around him but its not the sme for he has some one else and in our eyes we feel it but in our minds we know it could never be. your poem is great continue writing
Shanna
Hey one word for your poem. WOW! that i think is the best poem to express for what i feel now i cant get over my last boyfriend and your poem truley rocks! I love it! GoOd JoB
red
I thought this poem was great and i understand this alot because this is the way i feel
jade
i thought this poem was highly touching, it tugged at my heart strings that i never knew i had, it has truly inspired me i can now live a happy life knowing others share my pain of love.
Joseph
That was rely beautiful, loved the rhyime scheme, and it realy toched me, cuz i can relate with my ex gf she was like your romeo
matthew
thanks it expresses a great deal of emotion and has helped me thank you -x-
Caleb
I loved this poem and I love this website
kel
this is such a good poem. i love the the use of emotional writing in this one. i'm sorry for ur loss
Apryl*Dawn
I loved every single word. It feels as though i could've written it,because of how much it describes me & past experiences. It touched me, & it was magical. THANX 4 writtin' it,now i'm sendin' this 1 2 tha X!
Ashley
I really like this peom because I can really truly relate to what the poet is saying and feeling
Prescilia
It was just beautiful, and you could relate to the pain of the this juliet. i mean i loved the flow of the poem, i kept reading it out loud. wow you have talent. it's beautiful don't ever stop writing.
Kina
That was so deep. I really liked it, your very talented at writing. It was so beautiful.
Maria
OMG when i read this poem it left something in my heart, im really sorry bout what happened but i really do wish that u and that person would one day be together 4ever
lucia
this poem is awesome,it was so touching. ur so talented. keep writing.
Julie
This pome is really good. I have fealt that way to, but could never put it in to words.
Amanda
I just wanted to say that I thought your poem was awsome! You are a very talented poet! I also wanted to say that your poem touched me deeply for two reasons. your use of romeo and juliet. because that play/book had alot of influence on me. well thats what gave me the inspiration to write poems myself. And the feelings and words you use. the description of the way juliet felt in your poem is excatly the way I felt when my first love left me after 2 years. Now I am very much in love with the man that I am married to and wouldnt trade him for the other guy for anything but your first love will always be there in your past because if it wasnt for him/her you wouldnt know love. even if its only one sided love. Great job once again. and good luck ! amanda*
monique
that was the best poem i have ever read. and i'm not exadurating!that was so beautiful it's unreal. wow . there is not enough things to say about this poem . it is so beautiful. your an amazing writer! keep writing and you will go far. you have an amazing talent and don't waist it. that is all i can come up with at this point in time. i just wanted to let you know that.
nicole
i loved it because it shows alot of things about life while your in love
Pauline
i really liked this poem it went deep gurl you got talent i liked this poem alot
Maria
I love this poem. It says everything that I felt about my exboyfriend. Everytime that I went back to him he broke my heart. I want to thank you for writing this poem it makes me feel not so alone.
Susana
I absolutely love this poem!It brought back memories of when me and my boyfriend broke up and what happened didn't hit me until I turned around and realized he would'nt be there anymore. Thanks for writing such a great poem.
kim
YO,I loved your poem. It was so deep . Thats some soulful writing!
simone
this is a rele touching poem it rele got to me well dne to the writter i wil b sre to tel my frnds n famly bout dis webste well dun guys x x x x x
Casie
This poem is really good. In school I'm the one who submits poetry to the school mag. And, I have to say this one is good. it is the only one in two years that has left me speechless.
Amanda
This poem was great! When I was reading it I felt as if I knew exactly how you felt. Very deep! Post more. Id love to see them.
lynsey
i usually never vote. but i really liked this poem! its deep
April
I love this poem. it touched me deeply. it feel the same way about what me and my ex-bf went through.
helen
wow!,all i can say is ur poem truly touched me,it explained emotions that i cud not find the words to express x
Natalie
I love this poem. it describes me so! Because my love dumped me and left me feelin like she did and then we went back out and he did the same thing!
Kristina
Your poem is awesome!
Amy
That is a seriuosly amazin poem. Ithaught it was very powerfull.
Lizzie
I was reading this poem and really got into it, visualizing Romeo and juliet as i read on. I really like this poem its really touching, and very well written. I give props to the writter. :)
Paige
The poem was alsome I loved it, its like a mature poem and it really makes since i loved it i printed it and made all my frieds read it
amber
i really love this poem it almost brings tears to my eyes good work
Ashley
This is a really wonderful poem I enjoyed reading it. It meant something to me.
ashley
I love your poem it touched me truly
Mandie
I loved the poem. It made me think about my boyfriend and what is going on with us. And it help me think how to tell him that it is over.
Whitney
I really enjoyed your poem and it touched me. It was a reall eye opener and made me realize what i am going through right now. I finally found the love of my life and just as things started to unfold and work out i am torn away from my happyness. Keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more of your work
aqueelah
very nice work.
Brittani
This is a rally great poem. It made me think of every mtime my boyfriend walks out the door, how much i wish he could or would stay. So thanks for the little moment that i was in another world away from mine and his parents
Shelley
i love this peom so im voting gor it
Shelley
This is no kiddie poem,its mature and deep and the best one on this website i feel that a lot of people could relate to this if they can truely get what the author's trying to say. This one's the best!
Juliet
this poem was sooo good. it made me want to cry. it has so much emotion to it. Like i've been through it all and bac again.
Erin
I found this poem almost two years ago, in 2001, when a relationship I almost had with a guy I really loved came to an end. And now, after a relationship I almost had with the same guy ended again, I find this poem again. You've excellently captured the way I feel, and I thank you for writing this, because I feel less alone. Excellent work.
rissa
i really liked this poem it sooo reminded me of me when i had broken up with the boy who i thought i did love. excellent poem. keep up the good work
Dusty
I think that this poem is really good. I also think that when it is read it truely convays the feelings of the author.
Amanda
your poem was awesome. It awed me when I read it.
Rocio
Wow! that poem was sooooo good. You expresed exactly what i feel. That is what I wish I can do too, but I have to move on.
Rhian
i loved ur poem. I can really realte 2 u cos it describes exactly how i feel 2. your an awesome writer!
j
my unrequited crush is in the hospital, i fear he will not be with us much longer. i related to u'r poem tonite. i think it was divinely written just for me. Thank u from the deepest of my heart.
angel
This poem is amazing, probebly one of the best poems i have ever read! it also describes what i feel perfectly. Keep writting u have amazing talent!
Luxie
I thought this poem was fantastic! There are deep feelings displayed when you read this poem and you can see it was written with true emotion. Having gone through similar feelings once it is easy for me to idenify and sympathise with the poet.
Aiden
I love this poem! Its like my favorite, Thanks
just
this is the best poem in this site
daisy
I love this poem. I loved the way you used romeo and juliet. I give you a perfect 10 for this poem.
Tasha
I loved your poem as I read it, it gave me chills just to think that sonething like that happened. But I really liked the poem. Best Wishes
Laudie
Oh my gosh, what a beautiful poem! I was in tears by the end of the poem, it was so touching. It feels like all to often, thoses who experiance TRUE love must also experiance losing it; and this without a doubt is the worst pain a person can be subjected to. Your peom captured the torture of heartbreak so beautifly. Keep writing and thanks for understanding!
Justi
very good you put alot of your thoughts in there how do you do it i wish i had as much talent as you did i give you a 11/10
frogy
wow! out of all that i've read, that one was deep, keep it up.
JAMAR
THIS WAS AN REALLY GOO POEM. YOU NO SOMETIMES PEOPLE SEEM TO TAKE LOVE FOR GRANTED. I SEE WHERE YOU ARE COMINR FROM WITH THIS POEM
tonea
this poem reminds me of my best friend. it is a very touching poem! just keep up the good work Morgan
britt
one word. beautiful. keep on writing
Lysha
I think this poem is great. I was touched really. Keep your head up!
Crystal
That poem was extremely sad but you told thue truth. Keep writing and never give up
Josie
this is such a good poem .. romeo and julite was a velli good idea . my englishy teacher wud love to hear this .. lol ..
Carla
A woderfully written poem expressing millions of peoples feelings. I was touched in a way I never have been before and thank you for sharing this beautful poem.
Holly
I think this poem was Ecxellent. It was very deep and i could really fell how the writer felt very emotinal and deep.
Latoya
i love this poem it have things to do with my love life
PB
wow. u have no idea how awesome this poem is. job well done!
Arin
Morgan Lee Fay, I am very surprised that this poem came from your mouth, it is very touching and heartbreaking, I really hope this guy comes back for you, you really desirve him.
Amber
That was REALLY good!! Seriously, I love it, it explains so much! Keep writing!
jessica
great poem.it made me cry..alot
Kelly
One of the most beautiful poems I have ever heard, very talented writer, the poem touched my heart..I love it.
Odessa
This poem related 100% to what happened to me.It was great to read and know that someone else feels the same way. Morgan, your use of language is beautiful, and you have an amazing talent to use. Well done.
R.J.
this is a realy great poem.it's really deep,to tell you the truth i can relate.
Kim
I just lost my first love, my husband to suicide. This poem took me way back...THANKS! It was truly very touching.
Amanda
This was a very intense and sad poem. But it is also very good.
Acid
Your poem is marvelous to read. I feel your pain to, because my love ended before it started.
Jennifer
this poem was very good! kepp up the good work and congradulations!
Sofi
i love this poem and it really express my feeling right now. Im just exactly like the Juliet in your poem.
kacie
this poem was very dramatic and touching!it was like a fairytale ending
Amber
this poem was really nice it made my eyes water. you do really great work!
Danielle
this is such a wonderful poem.I cried right after I read it..u r truelly a great poet!
Mary
This poem is unbelievably beautiful. It totally puts into well described words about how I feel about a guy that I just met. You have great talent!
Terri
I think this poem is really awesome you have and amazing talent for writing. whatever motivates you keep doing it unless it is to painful to think about.
April
this poem was great. Morgan le fay, ur a great poet. ur poem really touched me. buhbye
letti
this was a very powerful poem it touched my heart it kinda relates to the way i feel sometimes very good though
MastaJ
no words can truely honor this magnificent piece..it is in a league of its own
Heather
wow, you're a beautiful poet, this brought tears to my eyes, it was as though I was somehow feeling your pain, just remember you'll fnd your Romeo one day
Rachel
Wow, as a poet myself I can tell that really came from the heart.
jessica
Just beautiful! Breath-taking, and VERY well-written.
KAREN
Morgan, I too write poetry and find it a way to express your true inner most feelings. I also know how you felt in this relationship. I have been there many times. I think that you have an awesome talent, and God has truly blessed you with that talent. From one poet to another, never give up on dreams, and never turn from your highest hopes, be all that you can be, and keep your head high! I truly enjoyed this poem, and would love to read more of them
jess
i really likd it its not every day you get stories oout of it.
colleen
I really liked this poem...I liked EVERYTHING about it...you have a talent to write really nice poems...well..that's about all..thanks for sharing it...
BRITTANY
I REALLY LOVE POEMS WITH ALOT OF PASSION AND FEEL AND THIS REALLY IS A GREAR EXAMPLE OF THAT!!
Rachel
I know exactly how that feels. You're very gifted with painting pictures to touch souls. I've recently had some of my work published, and i should hope you would do the same. Remember "Never become someone's slogan because you are poetry."
Brandi
You did a really good job with this poem. I don't know what it was exactally that I like but I thought it was great.
John
Absolutely Beautiful! I'm jealous I didn't write this myself! :) But seriously though, this poem is beautiful - sad but beautiful.
Crystal
This poem drew me in and I felt as though I were Juliet. It has so much emotion and power.
Linda
It touched my heart and I wanted to cry...
paul
wow!!!!that left me in ah and very speechless.that was by far the best poem i've read in a long time.very sad and gave me a whole new meanig of the word love.i like that poem so much that words can not express how i feel.thanks for giving me a moment that i can appreciate.
ARA
I believe that love is precious, unique, and sometimes overwhelming. I can't help but realize that I am extremely fortunate to be in love and recieve the same kind of love in return. Your peom has helped me to realize that.. It's wierd how even if things are so obvious people never see them.. THANK-YOU....
layla
This almost made me cry when i read it. . . it sounds so real. . . the person who wrote this definitely has a pure heart and soul.
Lita
This is a fabulously written poem!
Mel
Very well written poem.
derek
this poem is a really good one and it touched my heart.
Amanda
i am also a poet...this poem touched me in ways unknown. This is a beautiful poem that deservs a world of gratitude!!
emma
i just want to say your poem was straight from the heart.it was so beautiful to read.almost brought tears to my eyes.hope u find love again.u deserve too. luv emma(17)
Angelglitterdust
absolutely incredible-touching-heartbreaking!
Mellissa
A wonderful poem. Very unique. Beautifully written.
Ariel
This poem is really amazing, i identified with it and you are so talented. I love it!
Lisa
This poem was beautifully written and I loved it. I think Shakespeare is great and the poem is kind of like how I feel right now.
Marisa
This poem is very good because it is not juvenile like most of the poems i have read here. It is very well written.